Cultivation Starts with Scientific Research

[Book Title] Ying Long Zhu Feng [Book Review] The writing is solid, the characters are rich, and it is a rare good book [Advantages] The writing is excellent, the plot, characters, conflicts, dialogues, and descriptions are all very good. Stable updates will be popular among millions of people [Disadvantages] It is very good and has almost no disadvantages. Is there a golden finger? The suggestion appears at the beginning of the book, and the book title introduction is not trendy enough... [Evaluation] B+ [Remarks] I hope it is helpful to the author, if you don't like it, please don't comment.

I have a very sad news to tell you: I plan to cut this book. I'm really sorry! Orz There are two reasons. One of the main reasons is that I broke down writing. Some readers should be able to tell that my writing has dropped significantly in these chapters (even though it was not that good at first). This is mainly because I broke down and had nothing to say. The second is that my application for signing a contract was rejected. Although it is difficult to sign a contract, the threshold cannot be said to be very high. Failure to sign the contract shows that there are still many problems with my writing. So for these two reasons, I made a very difficult choice to cut the book. The reason why I say it is difficult is because everyone has given me a lot of support. I tried for several hours yesterday, but in the end I couldn't write a few words. If you put your mind down and just read it, it would also be disrespectful to the readers. So now, I am imagining a new book, and I hope everyone will like it. In the next two days, I will publish some scraps of this book. The story will roughly follow the first chapter, but the direction will be completely different (it is not well written). Then I will take advantage of this time to write the new book as soon as possible. I would like to say sorry again to everyone who supports me!

Received. Mind-blowing! I have a suggestion: to increase the storytelling, it is best to combine density and density. If the battle scenes are dense, it will be a bit difficult to read. Collected and read slowly.

Undoubtedly, after reading this book, I felt that it was well written, but the chapters were a bit short and not enjoyable to read 😭😭

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Come on~ I've collected the books, waiting for them to be fattened up

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Passing by, I saw it. The first chapter is average, but the second and third chapters are really amazing. If every article is of the quality of two or three chapters, it will be difficult not to become popular. Disadvantages: The pace is too slow, you start from the fourth chapter and go back six chapters. The reason for this is that you wrote the battle in too much detail without any foreshadowing (because it is the beginning), and the plot progressed a bit slowly. Because readers all know that the protagonist can definitely win, so we don't read your article just to know what the "result" is. The second problem is that there are too few twists and turns in the writing. When fighting, it is really about numerical comparisons. What we want to see is the "process", the excitement of twists and turns, not the value. The third question: the article is niche. The supporting characters are mediocre, and the granddaughter doesn't have much of a role to show. Advantages: The narrative ability is very strong and the protagonist is well portrayed. Writing with care can make it a niche masterpiece, but you still need to grasp the rhythm - there are too few rhythm points in the first ten chapters.

Why can I only cast one recommendation vote a day🤔

Received, the master's writing is indeed good, congratulations to the master for his blockbuster "Drinking and Singing" I hope the master will pay a return visit

My hands and feet feel cold when I see scientific research

Beautifully written. Just too little

Waiting for the author to reveal his academic qualifications...

I hope you can tell me about your academic level first. This way you can have a rough idea of ​​the content of the book.

I just noticed that the cover has changed