Trustees of the Heavens

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It is recommended that you write more for each world, and write dozens of chapters for each world. After completing the tasks of a world, you can delve into the world plot... Otherwise, a few chapters and a dozen chapters for one world will not be enough.

Why does it feel like the two heroines are cut from the same mold? The front is pretty good, but the back is a bit too silly and sweet.

The characters in the book are well portrayed and interesting. Come on.

Someone actually wrote "Old Nine". It is a hot TV series in itself. The current editors are not only immoral but also uneducated. "Old Nine" is so low-class that it was made into a TV show as if all of them are from very powerful sects. I am really speechless.

I'm just curious about what Qing Yu Nian is about. First of all, I haven't watched the TV series. I almost always skip any similar novels like this! I don't know why, I just don't want to watch it.

Seeing returning to Qing Yu Nian to get married? Then he suddenly went to Doupo to find Medusa. In fact, there is nothing wrong with the harem. The main reason is that the protagonist is very uncomfortable with being a scumbag. It is enough to just be a scumbag. How can I be moved by myself, entangled with myself, or uncomfortable? I don't know why I wrote the Immortal Sword Chapter. I inexplicably whitewashed a wave of Shushan and then inexplicably rebelled against the Northern Song Dynasty. I also made a rise to the Great Desolate, and then licked the Great Desolate. Is it bound to be written about the Great Desolate in the end? Nonsense, the protagonist was played by the system at first and then played by the immortals later? Slavishness is too strong. Can you have some self-esteem as a time traveler? The combat power system is all crooked, okay? 😰

Yes, it's a relatively good book. I also like the characters in the book. When I saw the Qing Yu Nian episode, the TV series was different from the novel. The characters in the TV series weren't very strong. I didn't even bother to do any special effects after watching it for so long. They were no different from some martial arts practitioners in today's society. However, after seeing the Dou Po episode, It still suits me well, just remember to fill in the holes, don't be a eunuch after two or three hundred chapters. There are a lot of new books now, and there are also a lot of eunuchs. Generally, there is no inspiration after about 100 to 200 chapters. Then I am too lazy and can only be a eunuch, and many of the signed contracts are on the shelves. In the end, I am still a eunuch. I hope the author can stick to it.

As long as it's about Douluo Dalu, I'm not interested in reading it.

There are so many stories about love, why don't you write about women's videos? There's a lot of nonsense about psychological activities. Can I use you to explain them to me?

After reading the plot of Feng Yuxiu, let's not talk about other things for now. The author's analysis of the characters is not accurate! Feng Yuxiu was obsessed with martial arts and was poor and impoverished. His wife was ill and bedridden for a long time! Various factors led him to go to extremes and strangle his wife to death with his own hands! It can be said that he was severely beaten by the society. In order to pursue the ultimate in martial arts, and because he had the will to die after strangling his wife with his own hands, he wanted to clarify his own martial arts philosophy by challenging other martial artists, and he also wanted to live out the rest of his life by the hands of others! The truth is, either I will kill you or I will be killed by you! This extreme attitude resulted in the seemingly insane Feng Yuxiu. In fact, Feng Yuxiu was a poor man who was crushed by the dream of martial arts and the reality of poverty! However, the Feng Yuxiu described by the author is simply a cold-blooded, ruthless, evil and murderous maniac, which is unacceptable! In addition, the plot has no plot at all, and the plot of Feng Yuxiu is over in two chapters! This... Well, I can only say that I am happy!

The pig's feet are thick and straight, and I feel that I am very single-minded. In fact, I am a scumbag. If I want to be single-minded, I will always take my wife with me and don't be ambiguous with other women. Moreover, I treat all the female characters softly. What a mess! It's like chicken feathers everywhere!

Douluo must kill Tang San. In the next few movies, he is all about causing trouble, helping Wuhun Palace to dominate the world, helping soul beasts become gods, and killing those hypocrites in the God Realm.

Use the impact drill to hit the tomb wall! Xiao Longnu came out and asked the protagonist, what are you doing? The protagonist said that for wall decoration, the sledge hammer costs 80 and the small hammer costs 40, the impact drill costs 150, the bricklayer costs 300 per day, the carpenter costs 280, and the brickwork is calculated by the meter. Xiao Longnu said I don't want to eat here. 🤭

It's too ridiculous to watch. A 230-pound American policeman wearing a bulletproof vest had to lie on the ground even if he was shot. Did the author rely entirely on his imagination about the lethality of thermal weapons? You can still run and fly after being hit by several shotguns. In the martial arts world, you have to follow logic. If you say that even one shot is fine, then there is no need for any hidden weapon masters in the martial arts world, because it is useless.

I will definitely write about fighting spirit turning into a horse? I love it, don't ride a horse, just bring a motorcycle in and let those fighting emperors experience the real horror.

The Snake Tribe has the bloodline of Nuwa. Doesn't the protagonist know how to improve his strength? His strength is so rubbish, yet he still does it here and there. Who will read it if it is written like this? Most of them will read pirated copies.

The reason why the protagonist's IQ is not high is because the author does the same

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My book review has also been deleted. Just control the comments and not let them talk. How is Douluo written? Just hard water, blindly changing settings, lots of typos. When I was writing Dou Po Yunyun, I also said that I should respect the characters' personalities. Bullshit now

These 1.6 Million words were literally made of water. The sea

I originally thought it wasn't a harem novel, but after seeing it on the shelf, I habitually looked at the catalogue, Yun Yun? I was confused. The protagonist in the front was obviously a straight man. I immediately flipped through the ones in the back, and found out that they were living together. After flipping through the catalog, I found Medusa, Yan Lingji, Bibi Dong... I was so scared that I immediately came to the circle and flipped through the comments. As expected, it was really a harem novel.

This book is not stable, the front part is pretty good, Dou Po starts to fall in love, it's a mess, I might as well stop writing about relationships, it gave me goosebumps all over the place.

What did you write? Assembly line production?

After reading many chapters, what exactly is the main character practicing now? When writing Zhu Tianwen, I am afraid of the kind of nuclear bomb saint, Saiyan Golden Immortal. One martial artist can fight many Daluo, and they are still in the human realm and can defeat the immortal realm of each world. In writing Zhu Tianwen, I am not disgusted with having a female protagonist, but I am very worried about having a harem, so I forget about the harem and bring it to reality.

The more you go to the back, the more inexplicable it gets. The narration takes up nine-tenths of the time. The sentences don't make sense and there are often typos. I suspect it was written by a computer.

It's too fast food... Is it really just a waste of time? ! !

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It was fine in the front, but at the back where Douluo was, it became a wilderness survival situation. Not recommended.

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