All Heavens: Become a Sacrifice at the Beginning

Hello, author, you have written several books. Let me give you a little suggestion here. You have a problem with writing books, that is, the settings in some places conflict with the original work, not just the current book. This will cause poisonous points and discourage readers. After all, most people who like doujin and Zhutenliu are fans of the original work. Of course, this book has just been written and the problem is not big. But whether it is writing doujin or Zhutenwen, it is Writing based on the plans already made by the original author is equivalent to painting with shackles. If you want to write a doujin or zhutianwen well, you must respect the settings of the original work as much as possible before adding your own settings and coordinating possible conflicts between different book settings. In fact, the author's writing style and plot control are pretty good. If you control the settings well, you will definitely be outstanding, and you can get more subscriptions and make more money, right? After all, it's better to make money. Please forgive me for any inappropriateness. The above is purely my personal opinion!

There is a similar opening. The protagonist travels to the same village as the ruthless brother and is sacrificed together. Then he travels through Journey to the West and licks the ruthless man crazily. As a result, the ruthless man asks why his brother can't come back? Later, it was unfinished because of this.

The character of the main character in this book makes people feel quite comfortable. I read a book before where the main character was from the same period as Luo Feng. He was blaming Hong for exposing the earth and taking everyone except Luo Feng and his family out of the earth. He said that Hong was not on the Chinese side while taking the others out. He just wanted to take advantage of it and had to be both powerful and independent. During the period of turmoil, if Hong had not taken the lead in resisting the monsters and established a martial arts center with training as the core to force all strong men to abide by order, a person with a background like Luo Feng would have had almost no chance to grow. The environment that devoured the earth in the early stage was already a rare good thing. Everyone on the earth must bear Hong's love, because he chose to protect and support him as the strongest person on the earth. There are many operations in the universe that treat the entire planet as their own private property and use all the resources only for themselves. The so-called exposure of the earth later, and the large amount of resources obtained in exchange also played a great role in the protagonist and the human beings on earth. He himself has always been in the position of guardian, from the Great Nirvana to the cosmic era, and has never changed. By the way, I don't remember the name of that book anymore. I was so disgusted that I quit it immediately and then I didn't remember it anymore. Now I can't help but complain because of the protagonist. Only one kind of rice can feed hundreds of people. They also enjoy the benefits of Hong's establishment of order. Some people want to repay, and some people are worse than livestock. At least it is a common practice for animals to repay kindness. PS: The protagonist's three views reflect the author's thoughts to a certain extent.

Suddenly I thought, will the family relationship with ruthless people deteriorate in the future😏

It is recommended that the protagonist creates his own Dharma and Tao. In the early stage, he can practice and learn from other people's Tao, but in the later stage, he must create his own Tao and Dharma. After all, other people's Dharma and Tao are always other people's Dharma and Tao. Only what you create is the most suitable for you.

The perfect protagonist's behavior is too crude. The author may wish to pay attention to it in the future. The protagonist's behavior is too direct. If it is intentional, it is tantamount to being a bitch. The right and wrong of the matter are not that simple. This has properly lowered the relationship with No. 10. Don't treat others as children. In that environment, they may be more mature than you.

Perfect Zhetian... Only by creating a way can you go further. You can never be better than the first person who practices the same method, just like you can't be as good as Lao Tzu in Hunyuan Taiyi, you can't be as good as Jade Emperor in cultivating gods, you can't be as good as Houtu in reincarnation, and you can't be as good as Zhetian. The Tao of the world is very monotonous. The five immortals of heaven, earth, gods, ghosts, etc., If you cultivate No. 10, The mortal immortal emperor who is equivalent to the human Tao, you can't do it better than No. 10. I haven't seen the Holy Ruins, but no one like Zhetian who cultivates No. 10 Can compare to him. No. If you practice the other four kinds, at least the four kinds of immortals in Zhetian except the human realm are not complete. You can completely create a Tao, such as cultivating the way of heaven. The sixteen-character mantra refines the Qi, refines the Qi to transform into the spirit, refines the spirit to return to the void, and refines the void to combine with the Tao. It can summarize all the cultivation methods, including the Zhetian method. It is a complete path, but personal understanding is different. The truth can be found in these sixteen characters. You can follow it in the early stage, and you can change your understanding later. This is just my personal opinion. How to do it depends on the author.

Daily poisoning! 🤭🤭

Directly practicing the devouring system in Zhetian, doesn't this count as creating a law? Moreover, after reading the comment section of the previous book, the realms of perfection and devouring are not well matched. The comment section kept tearing up. I hope this book can match the realms better.

... The author, please pay attention to the introduction. Isn't the main world Zhetian? Most of the more than sixty chapters are currently devouring the starry sky, and the Zhetian world has not even begun to practice. I feel that it is a poisonous point and can easily arouse the dissatisfaction of Zhetian fans who read the book because of the introduction.

It feels like it's pushing the protagonist's level a little too hard, and it's a bit unpleasant to watch!

The daily introduction is here, here I am. I hope the issue of combat power realm, which is most taboo in Zhu Tianwen, can be solved. Too much pursuit of any novel will cause big problems. I will come back when I have time to read 😎

The front is okay, but the more you look at the back, the more boring it becomes.

Is that... A harem? Then... Do you have an aunt?😥 The mystery is too strong... I really don't blame me

I read a little bit of the previous book, and I felt a little gay 🙂

The author really does not forget his original intention, the protagonists are all Li Yi

What is the latest chapter talking about? Gods punching through the earth... The more I read, the less interesting it becomes.

This start is so rare, I want to eat green vegetables, Aba Aba🤤🤤🤤

At what level does the author plan to reach in Swallowing Starry Sky before returning to Zhetian? How will you deal with the cultivation gained in Swallowing Starry Sky after you return?

You know it is! Slipping away

The last book ended forcefully, and this one does it again!

Not bad, but is there a female protagonist?

I only saved nine chapters, now they're gone?

Are the front and back really written by the same person?

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Can you write about the classic genius battle? Otherwise, what's the point?