Curse of Discord

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Rational review, this book has advantages, but the shortcomings in details are really unbearable to look at. Let's talk about the advantages first. I think the setting of this book is very outstanding. At least it attracted me. Now that's the advantages. There are really many shortcomings. First, the protagonist is very boring and feels like a **. It is really unbelievable that the bounty hunter still wants to BB without giving him a gun. He doesn't owe you and you have to rely on him. If you don't have a good relationship, you still have to BB like this. Second, the logic is really flawed. It's really ridiculous to think that there are other time-travelers when you see a train rail. Can't it be a parallel world? Klein only knew about the senior time-travelers after seeing the Great Emperor's diary. This is too ridiculous. Moreover, the intelligence of an animal that can talk to animals is too high. What the hell are you doing if your intelligence is so high? Are you just a house pet or a sewer rat? It's better to change it to having temporary intelligence when talking to the protagonist. It's okay to write a funny sandbox novel like this. It doesn't hurt. It's very uncomfortable for your Cthulhu-type novel to have such a big logical flaw. Logical loopholes can also be seen in various details. For example, when the protagonist was cleaning up the things left by the witch doctor, he saw the baby's body soaked in liquid and concluded that the liquid was formalin. This is a different world. Can you identify this as formalin? Even if you're not in another world, there are many kinds of preservatives, can you tell? The fact that the protagonist just arrived and didn't know much about the world and jumped to the conclusion that it was formalin was really upsetting to me. Because I am a strict person, I read this kind of novels just to see the rigorous settings. I don't want to complain about it. I hope the author can improve it and write better.

The subject matter and writing are very good, so why isn't it popular? ? It's very simple. The protagonist's character is too bad. Mo Ji's character is irrational and has a low IQ. He just started to teach other people's children about the earth as soon as he traveled through time. I hope the author can improve these things. The whole thing can be better. Do you dare to add more details?

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I didn't read the comments or introduction carefully. . . I just looked at his previous works, which were either tens of thousands of words, or hundreds of thousands of words. I knew I didn't have to watch it.

Looking at your introduction, I feel like you are riding on the popularity of the Lord of Mysteries. . . It makes people unable to think of watching it at all

As soon as I opened the book list square, I saw that there was a book in the book list! I refreshed it several times and this is what it is, scroll down and there is still more! Excuse me! Report next to me **I'm not in a good mood even if I'm looking for a book! Slot what the hell

It's awesome. It's only nine chapters, and some people say it's really good. How can you tell?

Chapter 44, updated 44 minutes ago…………

Do you dare to add more updates? I like the author's daily writing.

What happened to the book review section? This book is at least qualified.

The protagonist I hope to see 1. In the world of mysterious power, he can stick to his true heart, stick to his inner kindness, and not be swollen by his sudden power and fall into darkness. 2. Have your own opinion and be decisive! Even if the consequences prove to be not so good in the end, I will not regret the decision I made! Being indecisive can only harm others and yourself! 3. Develop your own allies or network of relationships. You often cannot go far by yourself. So bring me some trustworthy allies. 4. Let the protagonist understand that for enemies that threaten his life, only complete destruction is the best outcome. That's all I can think of for now, I'll add more later.

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