Divine Constable of the Immortal Dynasty

I came here based on the word "Shenqiao". I thought that as a "Shenqiao", at least the logical IQ should be online. It is a book worth reading. The result is exactly the opposite. Not only is his logic poor, but his IQ is also poor. At the beginning, the detective traveled through time and was given a big golden finger, but in the end, it was all in vain due to his brainless operation. You said you went to a gang casino to kill people alone. If you didn't kill the concierge, couldn't you knock him out? He also had a dog's nose. Couldn't you have smelled them one by one, or thought of a plan before killing them? Normal people wouldn't do this. The most disgusting thing is that he keeps mentioning the decades-old detective. If the detective is so stupid, then he should just go to sleep! You have been smearing the detective.

It looked good at the beginning, but then it started to make nonsense. How could a country with stable sovereignty allow a force like the Peace Inn to exist? Even if you want to arrest fugitives quickly, you have to pay to enter the store! You're kidding me!

Great, come on 🤓🤓, the writing is good. I hope you can take a look at mine and give me some suggestions.

I read this book very well before and saved about 100 chapters to read. As a result, I didn't read many chapters before I came to ask for help. Let your child become a teacher to someone you have only met for less than half a day. You don't know everything about other people's situations. That's when I started to take care of myself. It was also very powerful and a little bit poisonous.

It's poisonous at the beginning. I have practiced a bad martial art. There is a system and novice benefits. Instead of choosing a peerless magical skill, I have to choose a barking dog's nose. Even if the protagonist is a detective who wants to track down the prisoner, isn't the protagonist a decades-old detective? In the early stage, they were just some trash fish. Having decades of experience as a detective is enough, but he also has to have a dog nose. As long as you have the strength, you can do whatever you want. I'm really speechless. Disgusting and not at all intelligent.

Author, tell me what is good and what is evil. With your background, how can there be any good or evil? You are a hero and I am an enemy of bandits. You kill sheep and eat their meat. To sheep, you are the most evil person. To people, it is just to satisfy the appetite. Tigers hunt animals to survive. Can you say evil? You go to the casino to kill people. The protagonist is doing evil. Casinos are illegal now, but it was normal business behavior at that time.

After spending so much resources to build the acquired holy body, it is still so weak after a breakthrough. It is really intoxicating.

It's better to add some writing to make it more interesting. Tasks and lottery draws are both poisonous. When there is nothing to write about, the author sets a task to forcibly splice the plot. If there is an erasure penalty or something, it will forcefully feed Xiang to the readers. If you get a few draws in the lottery, you will feel that the golden finger is useless. If you get good things in the lottery It feels like the author is giving the protagonist a halo again. If the good things obtained in the lottery are used immediately in the following chapters, it feels that the routines arranged by the author are too rigid and deliberate. If they are of no use in the future and have been kept in the "little vault", it will feel like there is nothing that can be used to occupy the manhole without shitting.

Not bad, come on! The new book issue is guaranteed to be updated twice a day, so it is not difficult to sign a contract and put it on the shelves.

Poisoned! The article is too wordy and the main character is full of nonsense.