Divine Constable of the Immortal Dynasty

I came here because of the title "Divine Detective," thinking that a detective should at least have decent logic and intelligence, making it a worthwhile read. The opposite was true; not only is the logic flawed, but the intelligence is even worse. The story begins with a detective who time-travels and is given a huge cheat code, only to have his brain-dead actions ruin everything.

It started off well, but then it just started spouting nonsense. How could a sovereign and stable country allow a force like the Peace Inn to exist? And the police have to pay to enter the inn to arrest fugitives? Are you kidding me?!

Hey there, keep it up! 🤓🤓 It's well-written. I hope you can take a look at mine too and give me some suggestions.

I thought this book looked promising and saved about 100 chapters to read. But after only a few chapters, it got to the part about entrusting one's child to another. The author sends their child to study under someone they've only met for less than half a day. They know nothing about this person, yet they're already entrusting their child to another—that's quite something, a bit cruel.

The premise is toxic from the start. The protagonist uses a common, low-quality martial art, and despite having a system and beginner benefits, he chooses not a legendary skill, but instead opts for the dog-like nose of a celestial hound. Even if the protagonist is a constable trying to track down criminals, isn't he a seasoned detective with decades of experience?

Author, you tell me what is good and what is evil. With your background, there's no such thing as good or evil. One person's hero is another's enemy. If you kill a sheep to eat it, you're a villain to the sheep, but to humans it's just satisfying your appetite. A tiger hunts animals for survival; can you call that evil? The protagonist is the one committing evil by killing people in a casino. Casinos are illegal now, but back then it was normal business.

I spent so many resources building up my acquired divine body, but even after breaking through, I'm still so weak. It's truly baffling.

It's better to add some more engaging writing. Tasks and lotteries are toxic; when the author has nothing else to write, they force a task to piece together the plot. If it also includes elimination or punishment, it's like force-feeding the reader garbage.

Good job, keep it up! I guarantee two updates a day during the new book period, getting a contract and publication won't be difficult.

I'm hooked! The article is too wordy, and the main character talks a lot of nonsense.