The Immortal Couple of Dongzhou

It's pretty cool, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

It can be regarded as a clean one in the world of fairy tales, and the writing and plot are very good. But the title and introduction of the book are not very attractive.

There are very few novels written with such care nowadays, hey... If this book would have been a hit a few years ago, it is a pity that today is different from the past. The older generation of readers has left, and the new generation of readers has arrived, but there is no flourishing of writing, only constant writing, and the emergence of brainless people. There are still some people who are making trouble and saying some fallacious things, saying "reading novels does not require brain, it is just for entertainment." This evil trend has really become the mainstream. Although online novels are not noble, they are not noble either. As vulgar and vulgar, novels are not born for entertainment. Novels such as "Three Kingdoms", "Dream of Red Mansions", "Journey to the West" and "Water Margin" all have connotations and include the author's literary background. They are not blind. It's just a matter of writing. Even short books like "The Romance of the West Chamber" and "The Plum in the Golden Vase" are written with the author's intention in mind. They were written to satirize the feudal system. I dare to ask, what is there that is worthy of appreciation in these hydrological novels nowadays? It's just entertainment, it's ridiculous. 😤🤭

The writing is down to earth, I like it. But life is raised by parents. The protagonist is able to cultivate immortality because of his predecessor Yu Meng. He has not seen his parents for twenty years and has received nothing in return. He is an unfilial son. His parents had nothing but sacrifice for him. From this, it can be seen that the author is also the same. The right path in the world is vicissitudes of life, and if heaven is affectionate, heaven will also grow old. I hope there is love in the world.

How should I put it? The spiritual consciousness of immortal cultivators is at least equivalent to the radar of modern people, which can see through all things, right? However, there are very few functions of divine consciousness in this book, and in more than two hundred chapters, the protagonist's thunder method was casually broken by someone else's iron rod? And the dignified Jindan Master doesn't even use his spiritual consciousness when looking for someone? The most ridiculous thing is that the protagonist, as the Son of the Era, does not require you to be able to kill enemies at higher levels. At least you can crush enemies of the same level, right? But I see that the protagonist is always in a passive state of being beaten. Not to mention fighting alone, several people surrounded a person of the same level, but he couldn't kill him.

I've read about 100 chapters, and the protagonist and his wife have only met twice. My dear, are these the fairy couple? The first time the protagonist met the bandit Jie Dao, he didn't want to kill, so he saved his whole family and wiped out his family. The second time he met the Jie Dao monk who had killed the killer, did he still hold on? What brain? From what I've seen, I was killed twice by a man who wielded a hammer, and even the heroine was almost killed. Why don't you replace the protagonist with that kind of officer? Sure enough, there is a reason for poor results. Those with good results and not a wide audience are called niche products. If the results are simply not good, it can only be said that there is still a problem.

Traveling, being chased, escaping and getting treasures, meeting old acquaintances, getting into trouble, being chased, escaping and getting treasures. This is a cycle for you, always being hunted, doing nothing, forgetting all about the master and parents of the sect, and surrendered.

It is a rare and good article about Xianxia. However, the chapters in the book do not have serial numbers. It is easy to confuse the progress when reading. Can the author add some?

I saw a book called "Tian Yuan Immortal Chronicles" which is also a very fairy-like novel, but the word count of 126w has not yet been put on the shelves. It relies entirely on enthusiasm to generate electricity. It is really miserable!

The protagonist ate so much good food, he might as well be a dog, just feed it to the dog

You can tell from the first chapter that the author writes well

Why isn't it updated? Didn't we agree to have two regular updates in June?

I just finished watching The Great War, and my chest felt tight. The writing is no problem, it's very good. It's just that in the foundation building stage, he was weak when faced with demons, but later on, he was controlled and beaten by two Nascent Souls. There are still some problems with the plot

Good luck to the author in the new year. I like reading your books, but the updates are a bit lacking.

Keep writing and it will become popular. I watched the next-door "Nothing to Blame" hit the streets for more than a year, and it finally became popular this year. Your book is no worse than it. The key is to persist and strive for excellence.

Does the author have a group? I want to add a fan group

It feels like fighting and fighting all the time.

The writing is indeed very good, but the structure has some problems. The pace is too slow and relaxing, and the fierce fighting is not enough. Especially the pig's feet grow too slowly and are bullied everywhere! It is recommended to speed up the pace, strengthen conflicts, and strengthen the cultivation and growth of pig feet!

The author writes well, if only for the sake of eagerness to get results. What a shame.