Ye's Cultivation of Immortality

(The following is my personal opinion, please don't spray it randomly. You can communicate with me after reading it. I hope you won't delete the post. Thank you very much🙏) I don't quite understand Chapter 41. The protagonist obtains the Foundation Establishment Pill Queen based on his own strength, but wants to hand it over to his family. In the early stage, it was said how rare the Foundation Establishment Pill was, and it was something that the family needed to fight for with all its strength. As the most potential person in the family, the protagonist doesn't know how to keep it for himself. The most important things are obtained by his own strength. Logically speaking, he has a clear conscience. Even from the family's point of view, giving the Foundation Establishment Pill to a talented junior is more useful to the family than an old man who is old and has little potential. This should be the priority from a family standpoint. If the protagonist builds the foundation one day early, he will have a high probability of reaching the next level. And based on the protagonist's cultivation speed, if the Foundation Establishment Pill is given to either of the two, the time it takes for them to reach the Foundation Establishment will not differ much. Staying in the family should be to enjoy the shade under the trees, but it gives me the feeling that the protagonist is struggling to support the family. The existence of the family does not give the protagonist any important help. With the protagonist's golden finger (half a spiritual stone is unlimited), the cultivation speed may be faster. Finally, the protagonist gave the Foundation Establishment Pill to the family, and several elders of the family praised it verbally. The author described the Foundation Establishment Pill as such an important thing, and the protagonist was like a fool and took it for granted. Think about it, there are at least 15 or so late-stage qi-training monks in the family. Who wouldn't want to give it a try in their lifetime? How the author arranged it made me feel awkward.

I found a seedling of a family cultivating immortality. The writing is quite good. Come on!

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Build a complete building, including supporting characters, magic weapons, exercises and elixirs. Fellow Taoists who have ideas can leave messages. 😳😳😳

It would be great if you can keep writing.

Although the author did not write carefully in the setting details: for example, if a monk leaves Lingshan without spiritual energy for a long time, his cultivation will regress, but the essence of life will not affect his longevity, and his realm will not regress. However, this book is still very good, and I give you all the recommendations this month, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง!

The contradiction written by the author is not prominent enough. Why the breakthrough to Zifu failed and Fang City was occupied? It should be because the opponent is stronger. Wanting to obtain more resources leads to conflicts.

Chapter 425: Foundation-building monks still have to pay "protection fees" when selling elixirs? What is the author thinking~~~A second-level alchemist can only barely make ends meet?

After reading dozens of chapters, please leave a comment. If you don't like it, don't spray it. Thank you! This book. . . Really average! First of all, let's talk about Golden Finger. The author has already set up the early functions of Goldfinger, but the protagonist seems to be afraid of ghosts. If you are really afraid of being discovered, the author advises you to simply not write this cheat function for the time being. What is a golden finger? To put it bluntly, it's just for the protagonist to cheat on. You wrote it first, expressed your regret at having to let the public know about it, and then broke it yourself several times. This is true. . . Let's talk about the family. I've read a hundred chapters, and the protagonist is always alone. This is. . . Carrying a big turtle shell? And then you still want to dance? It feels like no one in the family is the same. There is also the section about the spiritual wine, the section about catching the spirit mice, and the section about sacrifice. The author seems to want to write it, or he thinks that writing it in this way can show that the older generation of a family considers everything for the sake of the family, and is not even afraid of sacrifice. But, to be honest, I really didn't write it down. Then let's talk about the cultivation background of the novice map set by the author. On the one hand, it expresses the cruelty of the battle, and on the other hand, the main character runs around in the family. There are also techniques and the settings of the spells are really. . . Author, please distinguish clearly. Kung Fu is a method of cultivation, spells are methods of fighting and fighting, and means of protecting the Dao! Alas~ I have read nearly a hundred chapters, more than ninety chapters, and I really can't stand it anymore. Maybe the author will write more exciting stories later! Let's summarize. Whether it is the characterization of the protagonist and supporting characters or the various arrangements for advancing the plot, it is really average. Come on, author!

I don't understand what the author's routine is. He is just messing around with the details. There is still no overall plan for the development of the family. When he first came into contact with the family affairs, he said that he wanted to expand the financial income and then go hunting monsters. After taking back the family market, he went to other places to do business with casual cultivators.

It looks great, but it's a bit watery in some places. The protagonist is a little timid. After all, he has practiced Qi and is weak, but can he be strong in front of the golden elixir after building the foundation? , So you still have to use it.

The author's recent 200,000-word writing has made great progress, and he is able to update twice a day. The key is to highlight the whole family and the characteristics of the protagonist. What is lacking now is a certain ability, elixir treasure, specialty or special copy that can increase the skill by leaps and bounds to reach the climax.

The battle at Jiutai Mountain made me think that the family monks were attacking the casual cultivator station. (Rogue cultivators have one trump card after another, but the family cultivators rely on their cultivation to stay strong) It's very embarrassing 😥

Introduction. I've probably read about eighty chapters. The first ten or so chapters were pretty passable, and the book progressed quite quickly. After that, it went downhill more and more, and the family relied on the protagonist alone to support it. Such a large family didn't even know where the loose cultivators went after the attack. The protagonist would know it as soon as he found it. In addition to the fixed resources, it all depends on the protagonist for cheating. Even good magic weapons are not given and you have to buy them yourself. No matter how poor you are, you don't need to deduct them like this. The boiled eggs are also handed in by the protagonist, and then what about the rewards? No? As the most promising person in a generation, no extra resources are given to the protagonist, so what kind of family does he need? Even being a casual cultivator is better than this, and he is a mess. I don't know how to write about it in the future, but I suggest that the value of the cash finger should be mentioned. The author wants to hide it, it is better not to have the gold finger to give him a higher talent. He has not used it for a long time. There are also typos and the plot needs to be polished a little. There is no need for a pretentious plot. In a family story, it is more important to quickly lay out the plot. Tell me what happened next. Which pictures are more beautiful to start with? I really can't wait for the author's next book.

Reward 700 coins first, fatten them up and then slaughter them

In the first chapter, the patriarch's breakthrough was written incorrectly. It was Zifu, not Jindan. Secondly, the protagonist seemed to be a thunder spirit root. With this kind of spiritual root, you didn't send it to the sect. Aren't you blind? It's not easy to find a master of the sect with a different spiritual root? Having trouble finding a backer?

Come on, your grades will gradually improve, believe in yourself.

The content inside is very beautiful! Sooner or later this book📖 will become a masterpiece, as long as the author keeps working hard to write 3000 chapters! ! ! There are too few chapters, so I'd better wait until I gain some weight before reading! ! ! You must keep working hard to write! I am very optimistic about your book! ! ! Come on, author! ! !

I have a big question. At first it was said that it can quickly ripen elixirs, but then I started learning to make alchemy, and I can't seem to remember it at all.

This book is good and the writing is proficient, but there are occasional typos. I hope the author will not always use the word "but is". Occasionally, he can use it too much. I hope the author will not be affected by other works. I hope the author will work hard and update it! 👍👍

Since ancient times in China, it is better to have the five elements complete. The five elements are called the body of the five virtues. The five elements are mutually reinforcing and interfering with each other. If any element is missing, it must be supplemented. If the five elements are short of water, add water to the name, or live by a lake or river. In the past, Qidian novels were the best if they had all five elements. I don't know when it became popular to have the least five elements.

In the past, when hard-boiled eggs were not invented, how could other monks build foundations? Could it be that there are eggs and then there are chickens

Is this book a eunuch? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? 😎

I want another family novel, 😁😁😁😁😁😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜. Big cheers for the author. Look after you.

Do you want to read the family novel "Yuanshi's Immortal Journey"?

Hold on✊... One million words l

It feels like it's getting worse and worse. The author should adjust it.

Come on, author, complete research in one stop!

There are too many places that resemble Immortal Evergreen.

Comments: Novel is just like eating delicious food. Only when the material, color, flavor and fragrance are complete, and you have the desire to continue, and think about the next bite, can it be considered a classic and have a long aftertaste. This article on family cultivation of immortality should start normally! The follow-up has no special features, and the desire for the next bite is not very strong. Let me tell you my opinion.