I Wish the Boy Would Be a Boy

The author's description of "people" is really vivid, and he is especially good at writing the details of life, gradually forming beautiful pictures. This is how I feel, beautiful "human" nature🌹🌹

After trial reading the first chapter, I have a few immature suggestions for reference only: First, is the opening poem a work by Gu Cheng? I searched for keywords and found that someone answered this poem on a certain platform, but the author identified was Xia Mo. Second, you might as well add a separator or something to distinguish between the opening quotation and the following text. Because there is a "we" perspective in the quotation, that is to say, the reader is communicating with the first person, but in the text, it becomes a third person perspective. For this change in perspective, I personally think it's better to separate them. Third, it is recommended to distinguish the places as much as possible. For the time being, I only have the above thoughts, I hope it can be helpful to you. Come on.

I'm here to support you and let's work together. Actually, I am more emotional, and it is easier for me to want to send a razor blade when reading this type of novel😜

It's very beautiful and the writing is very good. In fact, I don't really like things that are too literary, but the writing style is not boring, it is very delicate, and it is very beautiful. Come on! ! Already collected! When you have time, take a look at my article "My System Might Be a Fake System". Thank you very much.

I have returned my visit. Your writing is very good. I wish your works will get better and better!

Come on! You can design the cover yourself

Most authors nowadays like to play tricks when writing novels, and then let readers participate in them. It is suggested that the author can update more slowly, and then write the content of the novel more brilliantly. The most important thing about a novel is the beginning. If the beginning cannot attract readers, no matter how exciting the rest is, it will be useless. In a chapter, the beginning must be excellent, the middle must be watery, and the end must leave suspense. Set off what is going to happen in the next chapter. Or leave a little foreshadowing that can make readers guess! That way others will look forward to your next chapter. Hope this helps! Come on

I'm back for a visit, thank you for your support!

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Come on💪, let's encourage each other 🤝

Yes, it's very strong. Come on, author!

Coming. The author's writing style is very good. One review I saw said it sounded like prose, but actually I felt it wasn't prose, but rather a documentary (like Chapter 3). On the one hand, the author quickly talks about the background of the characters' activities, concisely and without delay, and also follows the following, which makes people feel comfortable to read. Then, the content described by the author is youthful and energetic. Especially in high school, it looks like interesting things that happened in the class next door, and it is easy to relate to them. From this point of view, the author's choice of topic for the article is very good! I love this. I only read the first three chapters, and I was very moved by what the author wrote. Will continue to update! Come on!

I've read a little bit of the book, what should I say? The writing method is relatively new among online articles, and the writing style is plain and delicate, emphasizing light beauty. But after all, it is an online article, so I suggest that there should be some ups and downs. The author's writing style is still relatively young, and it is still difficult to stand out. But I still say cheers ^0＾~. This kind of freshness is rare nowadays🤭

The writing is elegant, but a little too delicate. But it feels very comfortable to read, very good

I would like to inform you that all the books in my bookshelf that were updated on May 5th have been deleted. I will not read what good things a servile person can write.

Finished spreading flowers, looking forward to new works

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Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

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Already finished reading. Unexpectedly, the male and female protagonists are juxtaposed. It is very innovative. The slow-moving story of a boy and a girl is real and heartwarming. I look forward to the female protagonist healing the male protagonist in the future. It's just that the interaction between the heroine and Xiao in the first chapter could be more detailed to better reflect the heroine's character. My little suggestion can be ignored. Finally, cheers!

Very comfortable and has been collected. I hope more language exchanges can make people feel more involved.