Dear Tushanjun

Newbie, new book, hope you can support me!

Not bad, but can it be updated more? Looking anxiously

Come on! 😠

Reading your book, I seem to find the shadow of the people around me. Come on! 😄

I really miss high school, the resonance is pretty good. It would be great if the touching moments, youth, purity and love in life could be written in more detail. Some chapters are still very well written, and some parts are indeed a bit weak. In particular, the endings of each chapter always felt a little less interesting and lacked some "touching" points. I think the main reason is that the foreshadowing and foreshadowing were not done well. The overall plan was there, but the foreshadowing ☞ suspense ☞ climax ☞ suspense in the planning of specific chapters was not planned, which is good. In terms of characterization, Little L has one characteristic that is particularly clear: wingman 😄😄. Other characters seem lacking. A new chapter, a new beginning, come on.

Writing is like life. If you work hard, you may not get good results, but if you don't work hard, you won't. There are many reasons for living, and the same goes for writing. If you choose this direction, you must have interest and trust in it. I don't get enough attention for my work, but I still decided to find time to write it in my already busy life. I think there is a special reason. Those who travel a hundred miles are half ninety. As a long-time reader, I hope you will continue to work hard! ! ! It's normal for Virgos to sit on the bench🥶. Finally, I would like to say that ten years of ingenuity is the result of success.