Rebirth Seventh Five-Year Growth Plan

I don't know why soldiers in the era literature have to subsidize their families! My grandpa's brother was a soldier in the 1950s! Being a soldier is so hard and you still don't have enough to eat! There is also life danger! He became a deserter at that time and fled home to have a full meal! Then he was sent back by my grandpa! I was afraid that if I deserted, I would be caught and shot! Then the great grandfather went to Xinjiang with the army! Worked in the military all my life! At that time, he was just a soldier and just took care of himself! And then the fifties! My grandpa's brother went to a normal university! Become a teacher! The salary is not enough for one person! I'm so hungry! I quit my job and came back to be a farmer! My family is from Anhui!

Did the author finish writing the manuscript and not review it before publishing it? One or two typos are acceptable and will not affect reading too much, but there are typos in almost every paragraph, which really makes people laugh every minute. Readers spend money to subscribe, which makes them feel very uncomfortable. I hope the author can correct it?

The writing style feels so far-fetched and makes people feel tired to read it. Moreover, the whole story is boring and lacks any vitality. The author's writing style needs to be strengthened. In short, I feel that this novel is boring to read and it is a pity to abandon it.

I can't understand... Why should you give the money you earn to your father-in-law... You have already separated your family, so why should you still subsidize your brothers? They have the skills to make money. Why don't you think about your own family? You will have children in the future.

There are so many typos that it makes me heartbroken!

It's a running account. They just eat whatever they eat every day. They compliment each other when they meet. There are no ups and downs at all. There are only two military wives in the entire military region. They are drunk. Every chapter feels like it is about the same thing. The heroine is a selfless Virgin. She meets many powerful people. It doesn't look like the 70s at all. It feels like the 90s.

It was okay at first, but then I saw that the author's writing became more and more like a narrative. The characters' psychology and ways of doing things are all expressed by the narration. I also felt that everything the heroine did could be solved easily. It was too selfless and too fake to ask for anything in return. I like the kind of writing that allows readers to imagine what kind of person the heroine is through the dialogue and the way things are done, rather than the author narrating what kind of person the heroine is.

There is no top quality or all kinds of suicide attempts, it should be a good-looking article. But the heroine is too fake and aloof. She seems to be doing a friend a favor by recuperating the body of the group leader and treating Mr. Qiao. She has no inner requirements or connections. It seems that there is no selfishness at all, it is too noble or false, and the things they do are the opposite. I didn't feel excited even after making so much money selling medicine. I didn't feel nervous when I saw someone like Mr. Qiao. The mood remains unchanged. So fake

It's okay, at least the male and female protagonists are not Madonnas, there are top-quality characters but they don't appear often, there is no big plot, and there are not too many people appearing, but the writing is light, the description of emotions is slow and restrained, and the female protagonist is calm and has the feeling of a bystander. It means that the hero saves the heroine, performs artificial respiration, and then gets married. The heroine's golden finger is the medical skill and heals the father-in-law, the hero's comrade. Then a cousin of the hero's comrade-in-arms appears, who likes the heroine, and then joins the army. She gets pregnant and gives birth to a child, college entrance examination, university, development in the capital, meets some people, the hero is injured once, the heroine wakes up, gives birth to a daughter, and the family is harmonious. That's it! Some appear and are never mentioned again. You can read it in Shuhuang

54 Zhu Chong: "His old illness has been with him for twenty-three or four years, and he is older than Wei Guo. (Isn't the male protagonist 27?)

Why are they all written about military wives? Don't you know how to write about military wives after divorce?

I don't know why so many people write about military wives. I would like to recommend the new book I wrote, "Little Women Who Struggled in the 70s". Welcome everyone to read it.

Moreover, when there was trouble at grandma's house, you didn't show up as a victim. It was all cowardly parents who dealt with it. The Shen family showed up after a while, and it wasn't like they couldn't get out of bed. It's okay for you to come out and explain the situation. Who are you?

Don't know why. I always feel that the writing is not very good.

Hey, do girls really like being fucked by soldiers? The male protagonist is a general in the ancient novel, and the soldier brother is the male protagonist in the modern era novel, which is also awesome.

This is the starting point of darkness. This article ranks first! How pathetic! Those authors who write well! ! !

Why don't you tell the truth? Wadan is a murderer. You have to say something to ruin your reputation. No matter how bad it is, if the heroine's reputation is ruined, you can't make it easy for that bitch. Doesn't she like her precious son the most? It also ruins the reputation of her family.

What should I say? In fact, the author probably doesn't know much about military camp culture, nor does he know much about Beijing. He has no idea about the special period in the 1970s. What he wrote is like an outline. He just roughly explains what to write, and the plot is like running water without leaving a trace! It felt like a lump in my throat when I read it, it was so uncomfortable! Really depressed

Just because the heroine has the same name as me, come and see!

Chapter 32: Celebrating the New Year, it says that the Gang of Four was defeated last year. According to the chronology of the article, Chapter 32 should be between 1975 and 1976. Then it is said that the Gang of Four was defeated last year, that is, in 1974, but I remember that the defeat of the Gang of Four was probably in 1976.

"If I Can, I Want to Do It Again", good!

It's so tiring to read, there are long paragraphs of descriptions, and the writing style is quite dull. It is recommended that paragraphs not be too lengthy.

It is the only book I have read that does not have many villains fighting the protagonist. It is a very plain happiness! Although there were lots of typos, I still persisted in reading it!

The good thing about this book is that it is relatively warm and not too over-the-top. Of course, this is related to the fact that the author gave the heroine a golden finger. The shortcoming is that there are too many typos and some places do not read smoothly. I wonder if the author read it himself after he finished writing it?

I want to read the story, but I really can't stand the many illogical sentences and typos. It's so uncomfortable. Can the author check it carefully? It's not easy to write an article. It's such a pity.