Death's Monopoly

Come on, you write very well, keep it up

Come on, author, it feels good. The setting is quite interesting. It has the cone shape of grass jelly.

Horror escape copy category. The first copy should be short rather than long. Almost all the constituent elements and the growth of the protagonist must be shown. Readers will most likely not be able to continue reading to see if the escape is interesting. At present, the 120,000-word first script has not been finished, and there is no telling when it will end. It tests the readers' patience. It's a horror escape, and life may not be saved. It's also a third-rate romance drama about falling in love with a female ghost at first sight, heartache, and excitement. It's a bit disgusting, and the effect of persuading people to quit is absolutely amazing. If you take the reform route, your writing may be good, but it will be too vulgar and no readers will be interested in this line. If the protagonist has to be one step ahead, a plug-in can be placed in the second copy.

Long time no see. The new book is very good and awesome.

It's pretty good. I think if the quality keeps up, 3,000 is fine.

The novel is good, but the update is too slow, so hurry up 🤭

I'm just a stranger. I saw that the author was going to write about Alien Invasion, and I suddenly became interested.

It's well written. Starting from Chapter 17, the protagonist undergoes a transformation...

"Ling Xi Yuan" has been submitted and accepted, please visit each other

The changes were finally completed. Please update. The next day after the update, I received three recommendation votes.

What the hell, it's over... Okay... I understand.

Come on, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Author: I just saw the end of the first encounter with evil spirits. It seems that this is your modified version, but I still feel there is something wrong. 1. This is a game with a mortal ghost. The protagonist is still excited, thinking that the ghost is a cash cow. His brain has been scratched and he is still happy for the 10,000 yuan. It feels a bit silly. 2. The description of the woman is so bad. I understand that someone will definitely die in the first section, but in this description, this woman is like a man thinking The woman in the elephant, really, is a petty, ignorant and cheap woman in fixed thinking. Even if there is such a woman in reality, but if you set her to be a green tea bitch who will tempt men to protect her, then her rank will never be that low. It is actually a good point for the person in this setting to die, but the author did not handle it well. I didn't deserve my death. The transformation of the college student was too sudden. Even if you describe the college student as a black man at the beginning, it would be better than having his brain heated up and harming others 3. The protagonist decided to take the healing route from the beginning. He almost had his head screwed off by a female ghost and laughed while looking at the diary. The character design made me think that you will do it in the next second. The romance between human and ghost is over. Brother, this is the ghost we met for the first time. The ghost that eats and kills people. If you really want to write a healing line, don't wait too long to set up the character in the diary. Simply and crudely publish the reports about the murderer in the abandoned newspaper and the contents of the diary in which the girl was treated unfairly and died tragically.

I read it again, and this time it seems that I missed a few chapters (such as how the male protagonist got a lot of money, and how he suddenly became a heartbreaker), and there are some heavy chapters (square dance twice), but this is indeed a good book

Others are pretty good, but I feel like three missions are enough to inspire one. Doesn't this mean that there is a harem in dozens of chapters? If three or four hundred chapters are written, there must be at least a dozen.

I added a bookshelf, and I feel that the author still needs to polish it. After reading the first 6 chapters, I can say that the subject matter is good, but the main line is too white, lacks a little atmosphere, and is a bit unattractive.

Very novel! Interesting. Chased

Monopoly can also have team confrontations. For example, in the future, if one hour of search time is not enough for the big map, it would be good to use prop cards to allow other members of the team to enter. Single-player confrontations are fine in the early stage, but in the later stages, the big map feels not interesting enough.

This book is also so exciting, Baiwu Square exploded, it really impressed me, and the author's writing is so good.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

It's on the shelves, please support it first

Is this tj just released?