Mysterious Resurrection: I Have Bone Veins

This fic is pretty good. The bugs written before chapter 125 are barely accepted. There are too many after chapter 125. Cao Lingwei and Liu Xue are a failure. The encounter with the protagonist is too deliberate. It is impossible for a best friend to make trouble in front of other people, say naughty words, etc. This is not a lily novel, this is a supernatural Wen, Lao Cao is not the kind of person who pretends to be a public person for personal gain. He is not qualified to use ghost candles. The only ordinary person who can use ghost candles is Wang Xiaoming. He is even less qualified to use the ghost candle. Or he is not worthy to know the existence of the scapegoat doll now, let alone use it to save his own daughter. , Something that can only be used in S-level events, they are not qualified, and the movie theater is comparable to an S-level event. This line was written too early or the person in charge of Xiaota City was exposed too early, unless he was from the Republic of China. People from the Republic of China could not be exposed too early. Three generations of ancestors have all turned into evil ghosts. Have they been controlled? Also, this city is next to Dachang City, which is Xiao Yang's territory. It is impossible not to discover the ghost theater later, so it shouldn't be so close, because it will not be easy to write later. Yang Jian will definitely be involved later. If he is not involved, it doesn't make sense because it is too close to him and he needs to deal with it. Then the problem arises. In the original novel, Yang Jian has no time to play and is basically dealing with supernatural events, so do you want to jump in line? This incident will be jumped in after Yang Jian handles some incident, but then again, this matter is the protagonist's own business, and it cannot be involved in Yang Jian. If it is involved, either the protagonist will be killed, or the protagonist will pay a huge price, because this incident is the mystery of the protagonist's life experience, and Yang Jian cannot help in vain 🙂 I have found such problems for the time being, I hope I can see them, and then deal with them a little

{"TopicId":"591241077437038592","TopicName":"Mysterious Resurrection Fanfiction"} 1 This is my first time to write a book review. I hope you can correct me if I am wrong in time 2 Although the writing is not very good, I read this book carefully and would like to express my personal opinions The contradictions in the character and behavior of the protagonist at the beginning will indeed dissuade some readers. In the early stage, the protagonist continued to falter, and there was indeed some delay in the rhythm. He followed in the footsteps of the old Buddha and was suspected of doing water for water's sake. From the setting point of view, it is still relatively novel. Although it is said to be a big deal, the author does have an original plot, but the overall structure is different from the original plot. There is some overlap with the original work (the woman rescued in the hotel is hard not to be reminded of the plot of the original work. Juyitang and Moments are incomparable, but the timing of their appearance is similar to the original work) I still have great expectations for this book, and the author's level is indeed improving with the increase of chapters. I hope the author can stick to it! ╮(￣▽￣)╭ However, the rhythm of the plot is indeed very slow. I hope to add some original plots. I may also take into account that writing fan fiction is easy to get backstabbed. This is because I am slow to update (><) Haha, I hope the author can increase the number of updates. It's not enough. No matter how you think about it, you can't get enough. In essence, reading the fanfic about the mysterious resurgence is because Lao Fo doesn't have enough updates. I hope the author can increase it. High update speed, strive to be full-time (heart-breaking) Regarding the subsequent plot, I personally feel that Wang Xiaoqiang's ghost skeleton, Xiong Wenwen's camera that appeared at that time, and more white bone trees can be used. If suppressed, you can strive for ghost difference. I feel that the beggar ghost that appears here and the slime ghost that attacks Cao Xuewei are foreshadowing. I hope the author can come up with more ways to control the gui. (For example, use glasses and bloody red paper to eliminate the wisdom of the wise Gui) Let the red paper and glasses be combined, or control a stronger ghost realm, or use glasses to create a man-made ghost master (although I know that he may be criticized) The last, the last, I hope you will stop teasing me (嘤嘤嘤~)

As we all know, the important characters in Mysterious Resurrection all have mythical archetypes. Judging from the name of the male protagonist Luo Yan, there is no doubt that his prototype is King Yama. There is also a Tenth Palace Yama in Mysterious Resurrection, who is Qin Lao's King Qin Guang. I hope the protagonist can be as strong as him in the future. I hope the author will not make the ghost realm of Ghost Bones into several layers. Each ghost realm has its own characteristics. The ghost eye has several layers because the lines of sight can essentially overlap, and it would not make sense if Ghost Bones also had several layers of ghost realms. The ghost realm in Mysterious Resurrection only has the concept of strength. For example, the strength of the ghost realm of Starving Ghost, Ghost Chaos, and Ghost Painting is equivalent to several layers of ghost eyes. Ghost bones can also be created in the same way. As the bones increase, the strength increases. There is no need to imitate the number of stacks of flowers in front of the Buddha. I am a medical student and can provide some ideas to the author. We all know that plants are omnipotent and a branch can grow into the whole body. So can the branches of the white bone tree also have this characteristic? There are also 206 bones in the human body. Now the male protagonist has six ghost bones. What would happen if all 206 bones in his body were replaced by ghost bones? As for the ghost he controls later, I also have an idea. The ghost bones are just a frame. If he controls Yan Li's ghost blood again, can the bones and flesh be equal to a complete person, and it will further strengthen the suppression ability. As for solving the problem of the ghost's resurgence, the ghost can be used as an intermediary, and the three parties will form a suppression to cause a crash. I haven't thought about it later, let's see how the author writes it.

To be honest, the protagonist was useless for 96 chapters, and then he controlled the ghost blood and strengthened the ghost bone to the death. He didn't even show off and was immediately pushed into the movie without any ability to fight back... It felt like the protagonist was 55 regardless of whether he was a human or a ghost. He always had to live or die. Kakashi was weak, but he could fight anything and be handsome. This protagonist looks very strong. He is always beaten to a pulp. He fights hard to recover and fights back. He must be dead. He is too useless and not worthy of being the protagonist.

Personally, I feel that the setting of false memory is simply a failure. What readers are watching in fan fiction is that they are immersed in the world of other people or themselves in TV movies and books, and have the advantage of foresight to obtain various resources in advance to strengthen themselves. Your false memory directly reduces the sense of immersion by half, especially the mystery. In a world where information is extremely important, such as recovery, your false memory has completely destroyed the advantage of foresight. Who knows whether the novel you read is true or not. You still dare to believe it in the future. If the memory problem is caused by some ghost, it is easy to say, but there is another mastermind behind the scenes, which destroys the sense of substitution even more.

What are you writing about? Forget about being an abusive master, are you still writing memories? I haven't controlled the second ghost yet, but I still want to write that the memory is fake. What's the use of writing this paragraph? Is it something that the protagonist can solve now? It's almost enough if you write a hundred chapters later. Now it's a waste of time. What's the point of writing so many chapters just to show that there is a memory problem? Then after a wave of backhand reinforcements, he was suppressed, and the support suddenly withered, and he crazily weakened the protagonist for the sake of the subsequent plot?

Give some advice to the author. I don't know what other people think, but since the protagonist took the supernatural bus to the United States, the entire writing style and plot are really too poisonous. It's not poisonous. I can only say that those few chapters are completely like being in the water. You may be citing the plot, but with all due respect, you have failed. From there, I have no desire to read the book that was originally okay.

Instead of playing with bones recently, it's time to play with the brain. Unfortunately, the brain has no supernatural power. The author can only have an orgasm inside his own head and cannot affect others.

It looked good from the beginning, until the memory was false, which basically changed the basic settings. False memory means that all the settings in the book are instantly diluted or even overturned. Without the original work, there would be no fan fiction.

It's too watery, bye bye, drive high and go low, I've already charged up your money, your story will be different.

The early stage of Knock Knocker was very well written. The protagonist is ruthless but has a bottom line. He is decisive in dealing with danger, but he is indecisive when it comes to Yang Jian. This is normal. The world is too cruel, and the risk of changing the plot is not high. The Ghost Bus can only be said to be okay. Although it is a bit deflated, the arrogance of the protagonist can be vaguely seen here, especially since the protagonist has the Ghost Realm and does not take the beggar ghost seriously. There are very few supernatural items, or the ghosts with supernatural items are very scary. There are two beggar ghosts and the rules are known to have dead rules, but they think they have a ghost realm and can run away. If it were not for the flaw in the writing, a beating should be arranged later to help the protagonist grow. A trip to a foreign country feels like it was not written by one person. I am speechless in many places. The rhythm of a horror and supernatural novel is very important. It is ridiculous to ask for it. The plot has a lot of flaws. The spectacles feel about the same as ghost dreams. An ordinary ghost controller has them. You have to confront the protagonist for such a reason. You must know that supernatural items basically come with a price. And isn't it funny to distinguish ghosts by color? Is this a game? Do you want to add numerical prompts or something? In the original book, the ghost controller can sense supernatural power, and use this to judge that the source of the supernatural is the ghost. It can also be used to speculate on the recovery level of the ghost controller. Since the protagonist met the man named Cao, his style of painting changed completely and he was not as decisive as before. Evil ghosts corrode not only the body, but also the mind. Ordinary people have no power to resist against evil spirits, but are of some value. Therefore, the attitude of the protagonist should be indifferent, and it is normal to give orders, such as leaving immediately, follow me, and run away as soon as xx is reached. It is meaningless to explain to ordinary people. Every word of time is precious and life and death are at stake. Too much dialogue will only dissipate the sense of urgency. If the other party fails to understand and does not follow the instructions, he deserves to die. It's okay to write some objective analysis and speculation in psychological description, but it's uncomfortable to write about subjective feelings. The protagonist poked a bone in the previous chapter, which was very wrong and a bit bloody. After reading Chapter 49, Cao Lingwei thought about the protagonist's psychology and it was embarrassing. What kind of melancholy, what kind of story, and the fight with Liu Xueer. I suspect that the author has changed the female channel. I don't dislike female protagonists, but the female protagonists in this kind of novel should support each other and be task triggers, not fall in love.

I regretted all the subscriptions. I couldn't stand the paid chapters after reading dozens of them. It was so addictive and a waste of my money. Plus, it's unfinished, so don't read it unless you're Shen Nong. Even if you have high poison resistance, I suggest you read one chapter for a fee and subscribe for one chapter. Otherwise, you'll be as gutted as me.

I have been looking for novels of the same type. Your concept and content description are one of my favorites. The ghost knocking event made me want to vomit, but yours is more detailed and easy to integrate into it. You also added new twists, "Driving the Kneeling" is really strange, "Driving the Kneeling Tree", I have read so many books, you are still original, I support it. I also support what you proposed in the first chapter, wishing you could update 100 times a day 😁

Time travel is fake and too poisonous, right?

To be honest, this book is a typical example of a high-end and a low-end. In the first case of the Ghost Knocking on the Door in No. 7 Middle School, the protagonist was well created. He was decisive and cruel to himself and had a certain sense of right and wrong. The plot changes were also okay. In the second case of the Supernatural Bus, although he was tortured for a while, he achieved a breakthrough. There was a ghost, and there was It's okay to not let go of any of the evil ones. I originally thought that after two consecutive supernatural events in one day, I should take a break and relax from the daily plot. However, the good guy got off the car and went directly to a foreign country to encounter the third supernatural event. It was obvious that the writing was too hasty and I didn't know how to relax. Sure enough, the third event was written It's very poisonous. When suppressing the ghost, an ordinary foreign ghost master wanted the protagonist's ghost. Regardless of whether the ghost was contained or not, he directly used supernatural items that were comparable to ghost dreams, and it cost almost nothing to attack the protagonist. Then the protagonist was killed hundreds of times and drowned several times. Let's not mention the repetition of the chapter. With the protagonist's commission from Halo, he killed the ghost master and returned to the country. Then he began to doubt his own memory and thought that he was a pawn. The mastermind behind the scenes wanted to do something to him, and then he got old all night long. Didn't the author know that this was a big minefield? Not to mention that the plot development of the third incident is very dramatic and speechless. In the first 60 chapters, there are three supernatural events in three days to keep people reading, and then the concept of the mastermind behind the scenes is immediately introduced. The readers have not yet adapted. You are burdened with one thing after another, and the readers are very irritable watching it. It feels that the author's rhythm skills in writing books are extremely poor.

To be cool, what did you write after getting off the ghost bus?

Stop wasting your time, your writing is rubbish

The transition in the latest chapter is too unnatural, and Hell Cinema and Mysterious Resurrection don't feel like a good match... Let's wait and see.

To be honest, the early stages of this book were really good, but the painting style and character suddenly changed after I met Cao. The author is a true biography of the old Buddha. He writes ghosts very well. He writes people just like a bunch of charlatans.

There are a few small problems with your setting. Yama suspects that his memory is false and was created by a ghost. But which ghost would know the full novel of Mysterious Resurrection? This setting is very strange. You can say that the memory has special changes due to time travel. This setting can also arrange a golden finger for the protagonist.

Speechless, the more I go back, the more I feel happy, I can't bear this poison.

The writing was very good before I paid for it. After I paid for it, I read about ten chapters and it was not as good as the previous one. It was so uncomfortable. It didn't look as good as it did without spending money. My mentality collapsed 😭

The author is lucky. The original book of Mysterious Resurrection is about Yang Jian becoming a god. This list of gods is also very reasonable.

Starting from the time I created my own character, the combat power, system, and settings collapsed.

I feel that the ability of Pig's Feet is more like a black stick than Corpse Veins. To be honest, I was attracted by Corpse Veins. I was scared away after reading a few chapters of Mysterious Resurrection.

The latest pictures are very good. The author's writing has improved very quickly. The quality of the fan fiction is very high, but the emotional lines are very immature. I look forward to the author's progress.

I feel like I can keep watching it, at least it looks better than most. If he continues, I will definitely support it. Come on!

Why are so many people scolding me? Isn't this book well written? Compared to those fanfics whose basic settings are broken, this one can be said to be the pinnacle of the fanfic, right?

When a ghost is no longer a ghost, what is it? It's a question, it's a question

The latest two pieces of "Let a Hundred Flowers Bloom", the supernatural level of the two of them is very high. How will it end later? I am looking forward to the author.