Doomsday Land of the Living Dead

Great book! Great book! Big cheers for the author! Update faster! Nowadays, there are very few excellent doomsday writings! And this is not the kind of book that has ten lines at a glance! The world view is very good, the plot is also very smooth, and it is very down-to-earth. The scenes written are very graphic. I like it very much! Add more updates! Already invested!

Also, the main character going to save them is a bit awkward. You can add that he is a soldier.

It's very interesting, but I have a suggestion. I read the first nine chapters, and almost all the dialogues are XX: "..." XX: "..." XX: "..." This format is the same as the dialogue novel. This problem is particularly obvious in Chapter 9. It can be changed to "He pondered for two seconds and said..." "He was confused..." "He yelled:"

Melee knives can be electrified and have nanoscale blades (modern technology), the caliber of bullets in powered armor can be increased (.50 Anti-armor can be used as rifle bullets in powered armor), incendiary bombs can be replaced with thermite, and by the way, some daily necessities can be used as bombs, and corrosive chemical reagents can also be used.

By the way, do you plan to use the power armor design? What other designs are needed? . . (I can also design extraordinary abilities on the technology side)

I discovered this article yesterday and couldn't put it down. I read it until around two o'clock in the middle of the night and finally finished it!

The author's starting point in the opening chapter is really good. At least it aroused my interest. I couldn't stop reading it in one breath.

All I can say is that it's good. Let's see how it goes in the later stages. If it works, I'll pursue it.

The writing is good, but the secondary characters are not vivid, but of course it is good enough. . . At least the plot is connected so smoothly. You are among the top four cute new books I have read.

Collected, Return of the Flame of the End

By the way, it feels like your individual weapons should be upgraded. . . The zombies' fighting power is a bit out of control. . . You can try the individual laser rifle (lasers are invisible, and the plasma beam gun requires higher front-end technology than the laser. The laser rifle already exists in reality, it is silent and invisible, and the opponent turns into a giant torch when you raise your hand)

Before twelve o'clock, today's last chapter Then I'm going to review another work "The Daily Life of a Dangerous Writer". There is no 404 in this one, but I think it needs to be more serious!

Throw flowers, throw flowers, big daddy, here I come.

I just scanned the first few sections repeatedly, but it left me with endless emotions. I am very happy to come into contact with this work. First of all, I really like the content on the title page. This borrowed material is used just right and makes people want to continue reading. It is a highlight. In addition, I really like the performance of the story of the male protagonist in this work. Although he seems to be just an ordinary person, after experiencing and taking risks again and again, the tense and exciting zombie scenes are constantly striving to survive. Thank you for contacting this work. The writing style and various descriptions are quite appropriate, making it smooth and tense to read. It's okay. Keep up the good work! The sense of immediate doomsday crisis is also very touching, because when I was a child, I didn't dare to watch zombie works. 🤭🤭🤭 The subject matter is very novel and mature, 😁 I will keep reading and try to update it. Here is the long review.

I want to ask, in the face of modern firepower, whether a well-prepared army will be afraid of zombies, or whether it will have supplies from the rear. I will give you a break at the beginning.

Update quickly, the author, your out of context is so appetizing, please update it quickly!

Can the newbie No. 16 Still push forward?

Great support from the author, I look forward to the exciting stories behind this book!

My first impression after reading the first few chapters is quite good. After reading it carefully, it feels extraordinary. Thank you to the author!

No more words! The book is open! Go and occupy the building!

Doomsday writing without golden fingers is soulless

Crow made a new cover~ It should be replaced within two days

The plot is good, I watched it, and it is very meaningful. However, if you can write it in a tactful way, it is about signing the contract. I don't know whether it will succeed or not.

I love watching the American TV series The Walking Dead. But I haven't read the novel.

The author's writing style is really good, I envy it

Calculated in terms of smoothness, standard definition, high definition and ultra-high definition The smoothness of your article is considered high-definition (this is completely my first impression, I can't give a basis for it) ...... I rarely read apocalyptic articles, so I won't comment on the plot in detail (except that I think it's pretty good-looking, I have nothing else to say emmm...) It makes me feel particularly uncomfortable. Yes... That paragraphing, some paragraphs are too long, and it seems to have a great impact on readers (I have read many books about this paragraphing issue, and people have complained about it.) Of course, it is the author who makes the decision. Your paragraphs only occasionally appear long paragraphs... Well, apocalyptic articles should be careful not to be harmonized (manual funny)

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

The end of the world is over, you can try out the new game. Please use your recommendation votes to collect and smash me to death