Crossing the Immortal Pass

Can you add a few more chapters a day? I feel good after reading the beginning

I gave a reward of 1,000 before and thought the introductory part was really well written. 1. But in fact, the battle of chess can be written in detail. Don't mention the more interesting settings in the novel at once, otherwise it will make people feel that they are in vain. What is a good novel? That is, the things inside still have value in reality. In addition to the principles of how to behave in the world, some small settings that make people shine are the wonderful writing of the novel. For example, in some novels, the genres of Go and Xiangqi, or even the creation of a game, are highlights, but it is a pity that the author is not willing to spend time on them. 2. Baishanmen is a failure. Even if the protagonist wants to find a mountain gate that suits his golden finger, the writing method is too deliberate and rigid, which of course makes us dissatisfied. What we are dissatisfied with is that the author could have let the protagonist refuse the instructor's invitation in a more tactful way of communication. After all, he is a "traveler", and two people in two lives are not even willing to write about this bit of human sophistication? 3. In the setting of universal cultivation of immortality, there must be bugs that cannot be touched, such as the conflict between the family line and the master-disciple line of the sect. The author has not encountered it in his writing so far. He hopes that the fundamental world view of the novel will not be ruined in the future.

The history of the struggle of a young man from a mountain village in the context of ancient people cultivating immortality. So far, I have clicked on the automatic subscription and waited for it to be released. Just because the total number of chapters in the author's last book is a bit short... Promise me, can you make it longer?

Coming from the Immortal Road with a Knife, this book is even better than the last one! I finished reading it in one go and it still wasn't enough, so I'll add more!

It's boring to watch after entering the mountain gate.

Can you stop being lazy and book it all? The recommended monthly pass is available every month, and the minimum is 2 updates a day.

Has the author changed in Chapter 63? It feels disconnected from the previous chapters and has no coherence. There is no time to waste before your practice is complete. The former protagonist in Chapter 63 has an online IQ and acceptable qualifications, but why does the style of painting in Chapter 63 change suddenly? He is just a 17-year-old kid who thinks he is extremely smart, but in fact he is wasting his time. I don't like waste materials the most! Cultivation, like modern entrepreneurship, requires wisdom and perseverance.

The choice of protagonist is puzzling. You obviously have no background, let alone a golden finger. Someone appreciates you and cultivates you, but you deliberately offend him. May I ask if the protagonist has any treasures that cannot be seen in the light that people are afraid of knowing? If the protagonist has a clear idea of ​​his future spiritual path and takes the old man with him to answer your questions, then that's it. Unfortunately, the protagonist has nothing, and now even his qualifications have become worse than others in the same class. You are not required to go to another Shanmen family.

Now it feels like Chifeng Sect is just one name composed of countless small sects! No cohesion at all! There are no signature moves or signature techniques of the sect! It just means that it is composed of many islands. . .

If you haven't written a book, don't be an armchair person and influence the author.