Pirate's Copy

Swordsman ➕ Armed color proficiency, actually a first-class soldier? The strength level is actually equivalent to the lieutenant level. . . . Did you choose your lieutenant according to Garp? Pirates are a small world, and everyone knows the strength of the ceiling. Your position is embarrassing.

Gave the Empress to Luffy? Giving away a daughter? The most popular female character in One Piece. Goodbye after being poisoned.

Douluo is not good-looking, I never watch it anyway

Well, I have finished reading the current chapter, how can I say, the fruit is quite good, the plot arrangement and other things are good, but the writing style is too bad, people who read it are incomprehensible, often the previous sentence is still talking about this, and the next sentence suddenly jumps to a thousand miles away. In addition, many things are not explained. Brother, you are not Gu Long. If you are not at his level, don't imitate him. It's very interesting, can't you write honestly? Why play stream of consciousness?

I just want to know if Luffy and Garp were cleared, one released the criminals, and the other killed countless babies for Ace

Cthulhu? If you write about pirates, just write about pirates honestly, and your strength will persuade you to quit.

The writing is quite good, but there is one thing. After wandering around the East China Sea for so long, even Nami's fate has changed. Why not go to Luffy? Luffy is just a child who has not grown up, he is too naive, let him see the reality, maybe he will really become a marine.

Why was the Ultraman book taken off the shelves? Does the author have anything to say?

I quit and saw Sand Crocodile, a well-written piece of shit about Cthulhu, and what's most annoying about a good novel is this bullshit. It's also invisible, inaudible, and a bastard of car skills.

Since you have Kizaru's fruit power, what kind of sword skills do you need? It's funny! If we assume that swordsmanship = pistol, then the Shining Fruit = Gatling! Pursuing swordsmanship is simply sacrificing one's basic skills to the last. Now I understand Kizaru, he is right. At most, the physical skills and domineering skills can be strengthened, and other skills such as swordsmanship and marksmanship can be completely abandoned.

Let me tell you, the general is obviously the twelve zodiac signs, you must play with the fox and the crow. . . . I don't even know what you're thinking

When the book is abandoned in Chapter 63, there are always so many people who think they are right and add random settings. Facts have proved that such books have basically been sold out.

Protagonist: Mo En, age 16 Personality: more assertive, likes to challenge the strong Ability: Re-engraved Fruit, I have read more than fifty chapters, re-engraved the Shining Fruit, and has awakened. Proficient in the Sixth Form of the Navy, proficient in Armed Color Haki, proficient in Sight and Knowledge Color Haki, but has not yet awakened the Overlord Color. Achievements: Defeated and killed the Golden Lion (the Golden Lion broke out with all its strength and was still defeated by the protagonist), defeated Drought Jack with overwhelming strength. And the protagonist thinks that his strength has reached the level of Kizaru. Generally speaking, I feel that except for the collapse of combat power, everything else is fine and can be pursued. In just over fifty chapters, the protagonist has basically reached the peak of the world. I don't know what the author will write next. I am a bit curious.

It seems that once pirates gain Devil Fruit abilities, they tend to use their imagination to challenge them. It's just relying on your imagination, and it's not like you can imagine something so outrageous. For example, some brainstorming about the four basic forces. Slowness becomes time. Slowness is a subordinate branch of time. Do you ride a bike and imagine a train. Obviously, the imagination is in the field of bicycles. The worse one is ordinary bicycles, and the stronger imagination is racing cars. Infinite imagination? For example, the wireless imagination of explosions turns into nuclear explosions and then the sun, nuclear fusion and nuclear fission, which can provide almost unlimited physical strength, and then there are also real physical aspects such as light (glitter fruit?), Heat, etc., And then there are fantasy aspects. The sun symbolizes life and time.

Let's detoxify. First of all, the combat power is a bit broken. At the 50th chapter, it is comparable to a general. Well, this is not unacceptable. After all, there is a system. The protagonist has been in this world for a long time. He has been exercising before. What makes me feel that the poison is unbearable. The author really dares to write anything. I personally feel that from copying Shining After the fruit, the protagonist went crazy, and it was understandable that he was so crazy. However, a personal problem exposed was that the author did not understand the combat power of the pirate world. In other words, the golden finger was too big. Chapter 50/60 can be compared to a general, punching the emperor's deputy. What to write in the next 700 chapters, ✍🏻A dependent of the K-type? Also, it was really awkward when we set up the Wolf Army. I was asked to take him out of the villa. You can write a cool article if you want, but you can't be poisonous. The protagonist is invincible and has a harem? It's very exciting, but if you don't have enough writing power, you're poisonous and have a negative attitude. Then why is it that the main character has trouble after reading it, and so many O'Hara scholars are fine? It's too much fun. There is obviously no outline when writing the article. It's very casual. It's just satisfying to satisfy your own inner thoughts. But you don't have enough writing power. You even collected 100 fan points to clear up the comments.

If there are new readers reading this book, I would like to remind you that the first half of the book jumps repeatedly between collapse and non-collapse, which is extremely unstable. I have four wives and is an invincible text. If you read the second half as a daily text, it is still very good.

I strongly suspect that this clone fruit will copy the personality of the cloned person. The originally good protagonist has turned into a bitch like "Yo yo yo! Have you ever been kicked by light?"

The bride is a white star, and the author dares to write it.

It's a bit awkward in the middle... A group of people came from this article on the history of a kingdom's auction... Later, when the protagonist has become a general, he goes to learn swordsmanship from Koushiro? Isn't it good to learn in the navy?

The first half of the story about pirates was okay, but after adding the chat group, I couldn't stand it anymore.

I saw Chapter 205, looked at the chapter table of contents, and there are group chat rooms at the back 😰 and the like... A lot of novels like this have collapsed, and I don't know what the author's writing is like 🤫🤫 Well, I'll continue reading first, at least the pirate part is really good. ps: It's too troublesome to re-subscribe via mobile phone. It's easier to open the PC page.

I quite like the pirate character, even though you ended up being crooked.

I don't want to see Moen pretending to be bad anymore, come to the big world to torture them, just come to Wu Ming, the prehistoric people, to torture them

Many places are so abrupt, it feels like they just appeared out of thin air. The red-haired child suddenly appeared, and the revolutionary army suddenly ruled the three seas without any foreshadowing.

I'm here for a limited time exemption. The office is too busy these days, so I'll take a look at it from the front on the weekend.

What about Dragon Balls? This group power system should be able to withstand Dragon Ball, right? When will Dragon Ball characters join the group?

I beg the author to add Taki in your name to the group chat so that Taki and Mitsuha can be together successfully.

Where is your new book? Didn't you say there is a new book?

😰 What are the people who enter the chat group? I haven't seen the ones who entered later 😭 I don't feel it, Naruto doesn't even have it. The casual series can have a Dragon Ball sister arc, Arale, also known as "Dr. Weird and the Robot Doll". At least Dr. Pancake is not weaker than Big Big Wolf! Saint Seiya, which is similar to the Dragon Ball system, can also be used. It feels like many of them can be used!

I'm not saying that, the author's combat description is really terrible. Your legend is divided into so many chapters. Reading the whole story, it feels like I discovered it, I got on it, and I beat him to death. It can't be said to be mediocre, it can only be said to be crappy. The first point of writing this kind of time travel novel is the novelty and satisfaction brought by gaining abilities. The second is the sense of immersion and tension in the fight. The third is the perception and description of the plot. After reading thirty chapters, the description of the fight is bland and there is no sense of immersion. The plot is not very attractive. In other words, the setting is quite good. I hope the author can learn more and try to write better in the future~_~