Some Things After Traveling Through Time and Becoming a Girl

I watched more than a dozen of them, but at the beginning (although I don't think it's a big deal), most of the people who voted for the male channel turned away, and it was obvious that they were getting married. Since ancient times, the Marriage Party War has been constantly pushing Lily away from the single party. How many people can watch it? In addition to the character setting, the silk performance is vivid, and the opening is added. . And your writing style makes it difficult for people to like such a heroine (unless you can write like Xiao Longnu). After all, I have only read a dozen chapters, and there are a lot of complaints. Although you directly complain about the family setting in the article, it cannot change the fact that it is a bad street. But the title of the novel actually attracted me 😅

Emmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm…… It's too poisonous, report it

Alas, I was so disgusted that I couldn't sleep at night!

It's good, and it's to my liking. However, even though the double repair in the front is over, it still feels a little uncomfortable. The back is very good.

I also want to travel through time and become a girl!

When I first entered the world of novels, I was deceived into reading Jing Ke in the Golden Age, which caused great harm to my young mind. I later became extremely disgusted with this kind of literature. The queen of the alien world thought she was single based on her name, which made me confused. What about the 600 chapters of a girl who transformed into an elf?，，Tm，，，，，，，，，，，，，

It is suggested that the author should write in the introduction that the protagonist has been raped for several years. This can prevent people who don't like to watch the story from criticizing it, and also protect passers-by from being poisoned. Really recommend! Otherwise, it would be too uncomfortable to be deceived. Think of everyone and yourself, and find someone who can accept it.

After reading it, my impression is that the author specified wearing stockings and masturbating them

After reading some content, there are quite a few advantages, but there are also some disadvantages. I feel that some of the people around the protagonist are too small-minded, such as the protagonist's father and the financial elder. They don't care about anything just for a small profit and lack foresight. The protagonist also feels a bit more powerful. Second, there is a lack of some battles of wits and courage, which does not refer to simple fights, but to all-round duels. Laiye hopes that there will be more strong opponents and teammates in the future, instead of the protagonist being the only one who excels. Only when the opponent is strong can the protagonist be strong.

The protagonist, who transforms into a woman, is already a dying tripod slave who has been captured and trained for two years at the beginning. . . . The author's intention is to create an impure counterattack girl character. Oh my god, there is such a poisonous point that even the king's book has to be turned into bronze. Maybe the author is more willful and only cares about happiness and does not need grades. Counterattack Returns Counterattack Why are you writing about a woman who has been fucked for two years? It's still an ancient setting. How do you think a broken shoe should counterattack in that context? People's words are so scary that they can make you look down upon to death. I don't think an ordinary person who has just time-traveled can withstand such rumors. Before I read the book carefully, I sold myself out at the beginning. Slipping away.

Absolutely recommend nt, right? I read Baihe Shuangwen and then he recommended this shabby shoe article to me based on my interests? It really makes me sick 🤔

Keep it first, don't dare to start, it's too little

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Is there anyone out there who doesn't want to read the first chapter like me?

I reported it, and the protagonist was Q'd at the beginning. The author in the comment area seemed to think that he was very unique, and said that he wanted to write a unique protagonist. The introduction deceived people into killing him, and it didn't matter if he didn't emphasize it. How many sides do you want to take it all in now? I can't blame anyone for being criticized by both sides. I like Lily, but I'm not opposed to getting married. There's nothing to argue about from two different schools, but like you, everyone is really offended.

Let's revise the introduction. I have a fragile mind. Fortunately, I have the habit of reading book reviews before reading. Otherwise, it would be like being recommended by a netizen to transform into a queen from another world. I was poisoned at the beginning and then abandoned it. Can you forgive us who have a fragile mind? Another question, does the author want to learn from Nalan Ruyu?

The protagonist is a broken shoe. I don't know how the author Bai Fumei of the introduction had the courage to write it. He is just a broken shoe who was raped by a lunatic. In reality, I may sympathize with it, but it is written like this in the novel... Haha, if you have related interests, you can read on, and I will say goodbye.

I've just read the first few chapters, but I haven't read how you develop later on. But I read the comments and found that your protagonist's personality is male, right? You said that the protagonist's personality is a man, and if he has a relationship with a man, it doesn't have to happen. You feel disgusted just thinking about it. Right? You also wrote it down. If you try hard after the relationship, isn't that a little bit like that? How can I put it this way? I hope that the protagonist will kill everyone he has had sex with in the future. I think he will be disgusted when he sees men later. Oh, that's all. Readers who have read this book later, well, please comment below and tell me what the plot is.

I saw a lot of posts saying that the protagonist was raped for two years and still acted like it was okay. I didn't dare to read them. My psychological quality is relatively poor. I would be depressed for a long time when I saw someone getting married, so I stopped reading 🥵🥵

What bullshit novel starts with poison, don't read it

Tsk tsk. There are still people writing about broken shoes. The previous author who wrote this is a dead old man. Courage deserves encouragement. Don't read book reviews when writing this. 5 Out of 10 people complain.

I don't want to sit on the stove, but I am willing to sleep with a slave. To guard against humans, you also have to guard against beasts, and it's a gender-neutral type. With so many poisonous points, it's no wonder that it's 160 chapters and it's not on the shelves yet. The subject matter is good, and the writing is also good, but because it starts with broken shoes and intersperses various rape scenes, it seems that it is not successful, but it is actually successful. Poison!

This book is written by you. There is absolutely no need to start like this. To be honest, it doesn't bother me at all. I can read anything, but how many readers are there like me? Every reader's sense of substitution is very important. After a man travels through time and becomes a woman who is absorbed by her father, the sense of substitution is gone. Shi's father is not poisonous. If these things happen in the middle of the book, it doesn't matter. If the circle doesn't come back, it can be explained as it must happen according to the story line. If the author wants to write this for fun, he doesn't have to care about anyone's evaluation. If he wants to make money, it is a niche book. You are kicking away a group of people. I hope you can write well, and I hope there will be more and more people like me.

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