The Little Cannon Fodder in the Novel About the Male Protagonist Cultivating Immortality Through the Book

The novel is okay, but Su Zhiyuan is really annoying. Is this how you like someone? Does he think that he is so proud that he can act so recklessly? Have you ever considered that Qing Min is a girl (I don't know if the world of immortality cares about this, but it has a really big impact on Qing Min's reputation)? And it also helped him save his life? I'm so disgusted. To be honest, when Su Zhiyuan and the drunk Qing Min were in the same room, I was disgusted. It was so disgusting. I felt like he was subtly forcing Qing Min. Author, I don't know if you have ever been in love or married, but I suggest you watch the biography of Marie Curie or other related film and television works or biographical novels. You probably want to give Qing Min a white moonlight passing through life, which is a very beautiful thing, but your grasp of character creation and emotional description has successfully added a lot of mouse shit to this article. And why are you doing so much gossip and gossip? Are you a graduate of entertainment journalism? What you write is a novel, a novel about cultivating immortals. You should focus on the environment, characters, and plot. What you write is not entertainment gossip! ! !

Only with CP can you have the motivation to enter the trap.

Ouch! The writing is very good, I like it, thank you to the author

Can you make the heroine more powerful? At least she can protect herself through experience.

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I still prefer the one without cp 🥺

When I saw Chapter 176, I felt so disgusting about Su Zhiyuan🙄Isn't this the so-called taking advantage of others' danger? I haven't seen the back yet. Although the comment section says there is no male protagonist, I really hope this guy gets his lunch or something.

It seems I'm not the only one disgusted by Su Zhiyuan. I feel relieved when I see that there is no male protagonist.

I read more than seventy chapters. . . It feels like a farming novel. . .

I feel like my back is broken 😭

Emmmmm, what can I say? Even slow-moving articles should have contradictions and conflicts to attract readers' interest. I have read more than seventy chapters, and it feels like a running account. I kept jumping while reading the article. I hope the author can work hard.

Come on! I feel like I'm done with it if I haven't watched it enough 😢😢😢

The plot progresses too slowly. In fact, there is no need to write clearly every day...

Please let me know if there is a cp

Well, I found a good book, cheers for the author!

The plot is okay, but the later part is a bit rushed and not perfect enough. The language needs to be strengthened and the sentences are not very smooth. It can be regarded as no cp. I have admirers but are not together.