The Heroine's Addiction to Time Travel

It was so hard to read 😒, so difficult. After reading more than a hundred chapters, I felt that the protagonist was useless, had no talents, and had no bright spots at all.

After reading this chapter, the heroine said that Yunli was wronged when she became a registered disciple. This is really divine logic. A person with 4 spiritual roots is wronged when he becomes a registered disciple of the Venerable. This is simply ridiculous. This is completely 2. The universe is centered on me, right?

Sisters, I have already read it, and I would like to advise everyone to be cautious when entering the trap. I gave up after reading about thirty chapters. First of all, when the author created the original heroine, I couldn't see any shining points. I felt that I was constantly suppressing the original heroine. I had no idea how the character described by the author was the heroine of the original text. Second, the heroine is very brainless. The maid has four spiritual roots, and then she wants to make her a registered disciple and she feels that her status is low. Brother, please, please, the original heroine has no three spiritual roots. How can you have the confidence to let her be a registered disciple with a fourth spiritual root? You still dislike it. I felt after reading the whole story that the heroine is just brainless. There is a heaven-defying space that I haven't entered in two or three years, and I haven't used it much. It's just a storage space. You are so cautious that you picked up the sesame seeds and lost the watermelon.       ，，，， Although this article was written a long time ago, I still want to say that I feel that the subject matter is very good. I also really like reading this kind of subject matter. The author is not cheating. It is really great. However, I feel that the author did not take it seriously when writing. It was not rigorous and perhaps not fully prepared. In short, I felt very uncomfortable reading it. Maybe my language is too extreme, but this is indeed my truest psychological feeling. I apologize for any offense!

How can I put it this way? I feel like the author has a good plot and good writing style. The only thing is that the author doesn't seem to be very good at character creation. Many of the heroine's behaviors always feel weird, and the same goes for other characters, including the master's request for a wishful stick. Although, I know what the author wants to express, but it is very abrupt. Otherwise, it may not be easy for the author to become a great person based on his plot and writing style, but it is still easy to become somewhat famous. Come on, author, strengthen your logic and character creation abilities. After all, there are very few people who can persist in writing until the completion of the heroine cultivating immortal novel. Many good articles are full of pitfalls. Now I really admire the author who writes long articles. And friends who like plots, the plot of this article is really okay. If you ignore the problem of characterization, this article is quite good. Don't be frightened by the bad comments in the book review section.

Master is too disgusting Irresponsible and still snatching apprentices What kind of master is he? If I were really 10 years old I'll cry directly to you In a peaceful society, no one dares to let 10-year-olds go out. If I wanted to be a bad guy, I would definitely hide under the sect and wait for the little girls to come down and then deceive them all. I can't believe that so many people who have worn books and been reborn came out and jumped around. --Hey, hehe, when will it be my turn to wear books--

I have been saying that I don't dare to use the space for fear of being killed and taking the treasure. Why do I dare to bring someone into the space that I picked up at random and has a higher cultivation level than myself? Although it is said to be seriously injured, you already have spiritual consciousness. How can someone with a higher level of cultivation than you not have spiritual consciousness? How can you be sure that a person is indeed unconscious just by shouting a few times? Either don't stress that you don't dare to use the space, or don't pick up random people and bring them into the space. It's very contradictory.

After reading Chapter 63, I couldn't stand it anymore. The heroine is so stupid and pretentious that she is not the author's ideal heroine. Abandoned

I've read Chapter 218 and I really can't stand the heroine's unclear stance and soft-heartedness.

The master of the heroine told the heroine's maid what the sword he gave her was made of. Why didn't the master tell the heroine, but he had to tell the maid everything? After the maid found the spiritual root, the heroine felt that she was being wronged by letting her be a registered disciple, and the heroine was worried about going to the outer sect. Alas, the master beside the heroine is a venerable person, and anyone with three spiritual roots would have to fight to be a registered disciple of such a venerable person. After all, unless someone with one or four spiritual roots encounters a big golden finger, the qualifications with four spiritual roots are destined to be lost to everyone in the outer sect. The heroine's sword practice flew out and triggered the defense of the main hall. The mountain where the heroine's master lives is the highest among all the mountains. What this mountain represents must be extraordinary. It is normal for the main hall to be attacked and all the venerables pay attention to it. It was found that it was the result of the heroine's sword practice accidentally. The heroine's master punished the heroine to confinement. But in the heroine's heart, the master has not been with her for a long time and has no feelings, so she should be punished. Didn't the heroine travel through time? He is not a real child, his character is too strange. Another point is that the heroine is in solitary confinement, and the maid comes to bring food to the heroine, and the master who calls the heroine is directly the master. . It seems that the heroine hasn't told the master to accept the maid as a registered disciple. This is such a big heart. In the first few chapters, when we were in Donghua Mansion, I felt that the heroine's IQ was quite online. Why did her IQ drop off once she became an immortal? Now that I have read Chapter 20, I hope that the rest of it won't be so nonsensical.

There are so many loopholes that I can't afford to complain about it, so I decided to abandon the article!

Just write the heroine as a waste

The heroine has all kinds of imaginative ideas, and the supporting characters have all kinds of bad characters.

After seeing so many complaints, I decided not to read the article anymore. Reading the complaints is more enjoyable.

He praised himself in all kinds of ways, and reduced the original heroine to nothing except the halo of the heroine. . . . I can't stand it anymore. . . . . This article is so tacky and white that I really can't stand it. . . . .

After reading dozens of chapters, I always felt that the heroine was hopelessly stupid.

Can anyone tell me if there is a male protagonist? I really don't like reading romance novels with fairy tales.

After reading more than fifty chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. This novel is really rubbish.

What kind of writing style does the author have? There are typos throughout the entire article. The whole text is very logical. I admire it.

When I saw the heroine's name, I felt like I couldn't stand it anymore. It should be suitable for readers who are into the trap.

The protagonist's IQ is the author's IQ. This author doesn't even know what he is writing. At the beginning, the protagonist who traveled through time had no feelings for his father, but later he started to have feelings for his family when nothing happened. I started to feel resentful that my master didn't give me any elixirs or magic weapons, but later I felt that my master was good, but he just wrote whatever he thought of, which was completely brainless. The inexplicable protagonist is stupid and selfish, the inexplicable author

I like the part before the ascension. After the ascension, I feel that the progress is very fast, and my feelings for Houdu are also inexplicable. Although there are also reasons for Houdu to be cautious, I still can't accept it. At the end, the space evolves into a new fairyland. There are many such jokes, so, it is difficult to write, and it is difficult to control this speed. Cheers for you, I hope you can have better works.

I just want to say that I can't write, so I won't say anything else. What the hell.

What about addiction? Did you ascend with the snake spirit man? Or was he swallowed by the snake man?