Sunagakure: the Death Surgeon

In the current state of the protagonist, there is a high chance of rebelling against the village. He has no bonds and no sense of belonging. If he has the ability in the future, will he not rebel against the village and become the Wind Shadow?

Due to well-known reasons, I am currently in the countryside and cannot return to the city. Except for the first three chapters, which were typed out on a computer, the rest are all coded on mobile phones 🙏. In order not to deviate too much from the original work (comic), I basically code a few words on my phone every day, and then read the comics on my phone... And so on. Actually... The contracted webmaster arrived on the night of the seventh or eighth day of the lunar month, but even then I couldn't send or receive mail through the blockade. Having said so much, my central thought is to thank you for your recommendations and comments... I am not very good at saying thank you, I want to use practical actions to repay my gratitude. Try to make the story you want to write richer and more comfortable for everyone to express your gratitude🙏.

I wrote 110,000 words and didn't make a cover. With a little management, more people would read it. Pass by, add it to the bookshelf, and read it when you have time.

What should I say? The work is very good and very realistic, but there is a problem that I can't tell whether it is good or bad. The sense of immersion is not strong. The bad thing is that it looks unremarkable, but considering the main line of your novel, this is still a good thing. If the sense of substitution is too strong, people with weak resistance to poison will abandon the article. So the sense of immersion is not strong, and I can't tell whether it's good or bad.

What would happen if the room could be opened to the ninja world of a village and a country? I have seen several books about Naruto with surgical fruits. However, the protagonists actually used them to transplant blood stains, and the fruit development did not keep up. Fighting relied entirely on the transplanted Sharingan and Uzumaki bloodline. I hope this is not the kind of book that wastes gold fingers.

The old amnesia genre? Farewell

Deleting the memory is really a bit unbearable 🤭 I'd better keep it first!

I have read a Naruto fanfic about the same Surgical Fruit, but the protagonist has put the cart before the horse. He didn't develop the ability of this fruit well. The ability of this fruit is completely beyond the world of Naruto. I personally feel that this devil fruit directly cultivates the law. , The protagonist of that book, he used this Devil Fruit to add many bloodline limits to himself, and then he used these bloodline limits completely when fighting. Where did he forget his fruit ability? I don't even understand. I feel it is completely unnecessary. Your ability to directly develop this fruit yourself is already very impressive. But that book was putting the cart before the horse. I hope that won't happen to you this time

Isn't the style change too much before and after?

Do you think you are a eunuch? This baby is scared to death.

The subject matter is good. I haven't read it yet, but the word count is too small. I'll give it a try and see if it's still there, right? After all, there are too many fellow eunuchs and they have no reputation.

It feels like the author completely let himself go after deleting his memory from Chiyo.

Well! What details will appear later, what materials for protective clothing will be shown, the book will be useless, you can develop your own abilities, the results of the surgery will be interesting only if you combine it with your wild imagination, you can rely on the playfulness of a few children to attract people in the front, but it will be just a formality in the back

It was written so well, but it turned out to be a eunuch. . .

Isn't there a big difference between the two volumes before and after, and there is no trace of the protagonist being ostracized in the latter volume? In the Mysterious Volume, so many people harbor ill will towards the protagonist, and the entire village knows about his relationship with Scorpion, but in the second volume, everyone loses their memory? Can Chiyo's amnesia be used on an entire village? It's so messy!

After reading more than ten chapters, the book always says that the protagonist uses the Clone Technique. How can it have the effect of the Shadow Clone Technique?