Spirit Core War I Wheel of Fortune

Keep writing and I will always support you. ——Luo Ke

By the way, should I say something? (●—●)

The contrast between Sethia and Cecilia is so cute.

Out of context or out of context? Short and weak.

It's obviously my first book, why did you cut it so skillfully?

This book attracted me, I will wait for it

I have to say, this book is too detailed. The author also mentioned that sound cannot be transmitted in a vacuum.

Well, 6 chapters have been updated. I thought there were fewer chapters/squinting smile

Leader of the group, your protagonist's role is a bit small, yes, very few. The boy lacks intimacy and sense of substitution. Novels are different from dramas. The pace cannot be too fast. You can almost write a story in one paragraph. Sometimes the pace should be slower and focus on portraying the personalities of some characters. Moreover, it is better to have more natural chapters. Well, you have written more than 50 chapters. Although your three golden chapters are useless, you have to believe in yourself. At worst, you will open a new book, ahem.

Of course, don't get me wrong, ahem, I didn't say your work is bad, it just needs improvement.

It's time to divide it into paragraphs. It would be better to add a period.

Shenlong High School? ? ? The leader of the group is named Fei.

Group leader, I will always support you, don't go out of your way.