The Monster in My Palm

Author, your book is off track, please change the introduction.

To be honest, the writing is not bad, so why can't I read it?

About the heroine If the author wants to write about a heroine, then he should publish a single heroine.

I found this book while scanning the list today. It is well written and the writing style is also very good. I would like to support it by collecting it!

Fatty Huang Ting is so disgusting, I really can't stand him when I see him in the grave. I haven't seen a single highlight of him in more than seventy chapters! The author may want to write him as a character like Fatty Wang who is loyal and kind-hearted, but I only see his ability to cause trouble. He speaks to anyone regardless of the occasion or location, and his mouth is full of obscene thoughts. I can't see what the meaning is.

After reading the previous part, I couldn't help but comment. This fat man Huang Ting is a piece of shit. There is a pile of shit next to an otherwise good dish. Can you eat it? I believe I am not the only one who is disgusted by this piece of shit. Whether you can read this book with your brain is secondary. The key is that you can't get over the nausea level.

How can I put it, the routine is too old, Goldfinger, Wenwan Street, pretending to slap someone in the face to get to know a new character. This character is probably related to the Maserati driver or the woman in the museum. Later, a pretentious route will be introduced. As I write this, I have seen Wenwan Street smashing antiques.

Come on💪, I voted a little bit, I hope the author can keep going! I believe you can do it!

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The characterization is too obvious, especially Huang Ting's, and he borrows too much from others. The relationship between the protagonist and the supporting characters is confusing and awkward. If it fits the characteristics of the characters that the author wants to write about the background of the novel world, but the writing is very sticky,

Why don't many people read such a good book?

It felt okay, but I didn't know the name of the main character when I saw it later, and I didn't know which one was the fat guy and which one was the main character.

The heroine named Lin has had affairs with many men. She is not suitable to be a heroine. She feels like a bitch.

I want to read Fatty Huang. Without him, this book would have no soul.

It's okay. The writing and plot are good, but it's a bit messy. Some chapters are banned and the context is out of context.

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Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

The collapse at the back was so miserable. The cautious and careful impression created by the ancient tombs in the front was instantly shattered. When I saw someone taunting me, I immediately went up to fight. Wasn't the previous writing very good? Now I feel like we have become two people.

I came across similar novels when I was bored. The style is quite good. Personally, I still like it. I will save it first. The author will update soon.

There are very few books that have been written for more than ten years that I can read now. This book is good, please come on, author!

The writing is also good, but the connection is a bit off, the pace is too fast, and I feel like I can't hold it down. 😁 I personally think it's okay.