A Conferred God

Come on! I'm optimistic about you, the fish-fishing author.

Clear, but a bit smooth

A eunuch? I'll wipe it, okay, okay, respect the author, alas.

First, first, come and occupy a sofa

It's well written, but I feel like you're going to fail at it. Why do I think that? I guess all the novels I rated have been in disgrace 😏 Funny

Is the protagonist's name Louis Koo + Daniel Wu 😁

The book is good. . But it can be said that the beginning of the second volume is the main text. . .

I thought it was an invincible article, but it turned out to be an apocalyptic survival article

Report No. 6, 66 Dashun 😁

Lots of updates 😢

It's not that the protagonist's first love becomes stronger when he turns around and forgets his first love. I said before that first love was so beautiful when the protagonist was decadent. I want to forget about it when the protagonist turns around and is rich.

I think it's too watery, and the plot progression is a bit ink. What do you think? Although I know that the number of watery words is her strength.

It's quite interesting, but I feel like the protagonist is in such a bad situation now that he can't think of any way to make a comeback. There's surveillance everywhere, so it feels a bit hopeless. All I can think of now is to keep improving the protagonist's combat power until he becomes invincible. There is nothing else he can do. It would be nice to have some companions

I found this book at noon today, read it, and cut it up for me in the evening, mmp, it's pretty good, I think

There is no need for the author to open a new book with a new outline. You can start writing directly after the author wakes up from his dream, and after a period of ups and downs in the plot, escape to the occupied area. This way, you can open a new book.

I didn't watch the normal ending. Every work is too cheap! What happened?

It's entirely possible to combine the dream volume into one or three chapters, starting directly from the hero's awakening. The front part is too long, and the connection with the back part is optional. Just explain the background. In the first few pictures, the male protagonist discovers the darkness of society and directly plays a little girl, so that it will not be dull. The previous thirty or forty chapters are condensed...

Author, I feel that the ratio of your contribution value is wrong. A missile has a contribution value of 5 million, but a crystal that can change the physique to level 3.5 Is only a million. Doesn't it mean that 500 million contribution points can create 500 people with level 3.5 Qualifications?

I heard that I resigned from the hospital to write full-time, so let's take a look.

This novel is very good, please support the author.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

I looked at the author's other works and the results were good, but the results of this novel seemed a bit poor. I checked and found that there were no updates. The author decided to start a new novel, so I followed the author to see what the new novel was.

Dear author, can you give each other chapter recommendations? Thank you very much. If not, it doesn't matter. Someone said that a big book looks pretty good

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~