Linde's Gate

The author's writing was quite good in the early stage, but once the players started entering the game, the level dropped. It gave me the feeling that it became disorganized and watery. The plot progress was not slow at all, but began to describe the behavior of each player. What I want to see more is that the protagonist uses players to carry out farming construction, personal development, and promote plot development. The focus should be on the protagonist, right? If the player becomes the protagonist, then I probably won't continue watching.

It's a pity that this book It would be nice if I could continue writing Some chapters look messy, but it's actually because of the perspective problem The author's perspective switches the reader between the "protagonist" and the "player" The perspective of the "villain" is hidden, which makes the reader feel "messy" and "invisible" "Understood" In fact, they are all pitfalls. They are the world view and setting of this book, which will be reasonably introduced later It can even be said that almost every stroke has meaning, whether it is echoing before or after, or shaping characters It is a pity that this writing method is more suitable for the real thing, rather than an online novel that is updated every day. After all, if you can't read it all at once, you will want to die.

The author's opening chapter is really good. It can be seen that the writing is good, but it is too paranoid. To describe it as a game, it is a hardcore niche, the kind of game designer who has his own ideas but is unwilling to take care of everyone else's ideas. Obviously, it was good to write about palace battles and extraordinary upgrades in the early stage, but as soon as the players came online, it turned into a city industry development report. Some people said that they didn't like to read the players. In fact, the author was also very good at writing the player plots and upgrades, but for some reason, he just had an obsession and wanted to write about the industrial development setting. . . Before it was put on the shelves, there were long paragraphs and future industry development prospects, which made people lose interest in reading. You said that your writing style is so good. Before it was put on the shelves, wouldn't you write something about the protagonist mastering new skills? Wouldn't it be nice for the protagonist to have new subordinates? Even if there is a wave of demons coming out of the protagonist's territory, I will follow them. In short, this is a writing practice written by a very capable author for himself (that's all I can think of). Looking at such complicated settings and the energy required in the current mode, it is probably all dependent on love power. I hope the author can make a breakthrough in the later period. The next book will no longer be a collection of settings, but a wonderful story that can truly show the author's strength.

The reading experience is very uncomfortable, it feels like a mess with no logical order.

It was very well written before there were no players. After having players, I feel that the reading experience plummets

I read thirty-five chapters in one go. The setting is quite interesting and the writing is smooth. The fourth natural disaster was so real that it made me laugh to death. It's just hard to wait for updates. Will the author update four times a day? (No)

If you write it to the player, it will lower the level and you can delete it.

It's really good. It's the only one I've read that respects the players instead of treating them like monkeys.

I found that many people criticized this book for its confusing plot and various pacing. I was shocked when I first read this book and thought it was not going to work. Later, I came back to read this book due to an unexpected book shortage. As a result, in my opinion, the plot is pretty good, with plenty of laughs and content. They say the plot is messy, but I think it's pretty good for a new author. Even as a reader, I don't feel uncomfortable. As long as I calm down and read it, it won't feel abrupt. As a book whose theme is obviously about players farming in another world, I think it is normal that there are many pictures. Do we have to keep writing about the main character upgrading the monster-fighting outfit to 13? Then why not just go out and turn left to read the urban-style King of War?

Everything else is fine, but to be honest, as a player streamer, you might as well start an industrial upgrading stream in another world. Because you, the player, are too fragmented and not like the game. It is true that some players like to play Minecraft-type games, but the fun part of Minecraft is building houses. Instead of developing and surviving too realistically. In a game like the real world, how many players have the patience to slowly make cement and collect it? You can write about individual players of this type, but don't write too many. What's more, you chose the anchor. Are you sure it's okay? A streamer's main job is to live broadcast. Will a streamer continue to play a game that cannot be broadcast live? The player you selected at the beginning, the anchor cannot play the same game all the time, because their main job is to play the games they want to other players, and your game focuses more on personal gaming experience, or is completely realistic, and is not something that anchors can play at all. To be honest, when the players didn't show up at the beginning, I felt that there was still a sense of expectation for the players to show up, but when the players appeared, it felt too inconsistent. There is no spell to build things, and the entire game experience feels like a waste of energy points digging trees. It is not that there are no real games, but the reality is that almost no one plays real games. The initial version of Final Fantasy was very real, but then the operation was cumbersome, and in the end few people played it. Now, take a look at what types of so-called life players are.

I really like the author's writing. Why do so many people say that it doesn't look good with players? It's more interesting with players. The author insists, as long as you continue writing, all my monthly votes will be yours.

It's boring. Nowadays, there are more and more books with this kind of template. The first one is very interesting, but the subsequent ones are not interesting.

To be honest, this book is top-notch in terms of writing style, jokes, and plot. Although the subject matter is the latest to become popular, the author has a good grasp of it, the writing style is top-notch, the jokes are essential and not redundant, the plot is reasonable, and the characters can stand up. Even if they don't write about this subject, the author's online articles are absolutely praiseworthy. I understand that the word count is small, after all, it is relatively high-quality. I still encourage the author. I have already started voting. Although there are not many people reading this book, I have to say, please don't give up, author. I like this subject very much and prefer this book written by the author. Even if the book ends up not going well, I will still pursue the next book. Really, the basic skills are here, just like the Arcane God Throne and the Record of Abnormal Creatures. I am optimistic about the author. I'm really worried that you'll be hit, so please don't give up.

I don't know if it's an illusion, but I always feel that the descriptions in many places are inexplicable, and I have no idea why this happened.

The author laid the groundwork very well in the early stage, but I don't know why the writing became more and more confusing later on. He wrote here and there, and even while reading, I had the illusion that I didn't know what the author was doing.

Those people who criticize in the book review section are talking nonsense, right? I feel like the players are super righteous. In the beginning, the protagonist had too many roles as thieves, and the comment section was crazy about criticizing it. However, now it has been changed to have too many roles for the players. The author has good writing style and good jokes. What else do you ask for when the fourth natural disaster is written like this? The most ridiculous thing is that some people say that there are many such books? Could you please recommend a few copies to me? Thank you. I don't think there are more than ten. I've seen games like Super Mechanic, Yggdrasil, and so on, so don't recommend this one. And let me tell you secretly, the literary ability of the author of "Super Mechanic" is really low, and I can only read the plot.

The author is out, come out and update it soon, the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this (ugly face) gif

I can't wipe pigeons anymore...

I think many people say that this article is not new. It seems that I have read a lot of similar articles. I quite like this book. Please tweet. Requirements: 1. The protagonist travels through another world instead of logging in to obtain NPC status. The protagonist cannot go offline 2. The main line is the development camp and is not obsessed with improving the protagonist's strength 3. The protagonist must have enough contact with the players, at least in the early stage 4. The protagonist's three views must be correct and reject stallions.

I obviously like this type of novel, but I don't know why. It's very difficult to read. I know every word, but when put together, it feels very confusing and difficult to concentrate. Just look at it and get distracted.

It's really well written. It's my first time to be a top fan. I vote for this book every month as long as I have monthly votes. It's really because of the ideas and writing of this book. It's really a good book that has been hidden. There are many excellent books in the book list, but this one is not popular. I hope it can help make it more popular. Just for this book, I will definitely vote for every book by the author in the future.

It's a pity that it's too much. Such good natural disaster articles are too rare.