The Bald Sword Saint Is Invincible

I accidentally saw it and was shocked. More updates can help the author avoid being bald.

No, how can a bald man be a swordsman? ! Of course, it's only for playing with knives and sticks

I don't understand why the protagonist always wants to save points for emergencies... Shouldn't he have used them earlier to adapt? Do you really want to save every time you explode?

The writing is good, but "senior" is a bit distracting 😥 Generally speaking, most ordinary people refer to older people when they call them senior, while in martial arts and fantasy or fairy tales, it usually means that the gap in strength is too large. There are several times in the book where I call my seniors an inexplicable feeling. Japanese light novel style. . . Don't look at strength, just age or seniority. For example, the relationship between seniors and juniors in Japanese schools and superiors and subordinates at work. When the protagonist joins the team, when he has conflicts with others, or during competitions, the person next to him shouts "Senior" to come on, which makes me read strangely and inexplicably feel that the writing style does not match. Nowadays, except for light novels, other types of novels generally mean that people who join a team are brothers, right? It's a youth competition, and I've never seen anyone calling seniors to cheer for them. . . 😅. In addition, I would like to give you a small suggestion. For the description of the heroine, you can follow the author's own ideas. It can be multiple heroines or single heroine. As long as you write what you think and the ideal girl you expect, you can basically write the heroines' own style. It doesn't mean that singles can't write about girls. After all, there are so many girls in life to learn from. (Tnd,,, why do you feel that it hurts your heart? 😭)

I feel like it's well written. Even those villains and supporting characters who cause trouble for the protagonist seem to be useless. I hope the author will adopt it.

Cherish it, your hair will be gone on the third page

Forcibly suppress the protagonist's strength improvement! It would be better to change the lottery to a shopping mall!

The author's language organization is not good, many places are not fluent, and it is difficult to read.

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After seeing the first picture, I was a little worried. Ninth-level swordsmanship 😅, is there 87654321? That's a metaphor. Is there any mysterious difference between the ninth grade and the eighth grade? In other words, it limits the upper limit of power. Anyone who uses it will have ninth grade power. It's okay to say that there are many levels of strength. It really feels like an online game when there are many levels of skills.