Battery Mage

A peak start, and then... How should I put it? It's the kind of life where there are ups and downs... And then you're poisoned to death.

The beginning of the book is all about buying gold medals with money, but the writing at the end is a mess. It was not written by the same person at all, and the painting style and character are completely different from the same person. If I can persist in reading almost 50 chapters, I am really good. Those who have read a lot are the masters.

If this book is really bad, I'd be joking. . . But it's really like a ghostwriter or selling an account. I'm not identifying it, I'm just saying it's too similar. To give you an example, the early prologue of escaping from the castle is well written. The male protagonist uses powerful fire skills to start with, but the gap between the subsequent plots is also too big. Not to mention the follow-up plot of a sweet series of short stories, you at least meet the title and introduction. Ah, the story is bitter from beginning to end, interspersed with tragedies. The fire fist that the male protagonist got at the beginning so far makes people feel very strong. In the follow-up, he will all learn auxiliary defense and control spells. What the hell is this called an ordinary mage? Is it worthy of the word fort in the title of the book? To give another example, how much of the plot in the early stage describes that high-level college, and even the introduction is written, and then it is forced to be sent to the cannon fodder camp in spite of the situation? There are a lot of high-level top mages who are optimistic about the male protagonist, and a wise and bright spirit can be regarded as a grandson in just one sentence? The top female mage on the front foot said I would protect him, but on the back foot the assassin + light spirit + Lily incident was of no use at all? Just cover up the remaining traces one more time? I feel like the male protagonist appears to be a bunch of awesome teammates, but they all turn out to be stupid. They are of no use at all except holding him back and getting miserably. The male protagonist is the only one who has to endure the humiliation of being a grandson. I came here to read your profile because I want to read casual articles, not to see the grandson of the team. . . To be honest, jumping around in the plot can really improve the sense of reality, but can you jump a little less? There are really a lot of bugs. In the early stage, the Archmage was written to kill the light spirits at will. In the later stage, when you become a god, will you be the strongest? The Lich on the front foot can extend his life and the back foot can't be extended unless it's a god? The front light spirits seem to be killing humans wantonly, and the back light spirits and humans are fighting with a 50-50 split? Forget it, stop complaining. . . This random plot is really weird.

A very unique book In the Internet age, the tradition of San Shao, a book co-written by multiple people, is carried forward here. Not only that, it is also combined with Lao Ba's gesture of withdrawing his master's degree. This is worthy of my encouragement. Let me praise this book: 1. The original author absolutely forced me to write a book. This is the third time I have seen this book in various recommendation columns. It has been written like this and I have seen it 3 times! You can see the whole picture at a glance, and you can see the great support of the original author; 2. The unique introduction and title of the book, this kind of introduction and title can definitely deceive many sbs like me into killing. If you are forgetful like me, you may be deceived three times! 3. Logical thinking that is close to life. Life does not talk about logic, and neither does this book. It will definitely make those with unique tastes call themselves experts! 4. Reading the comment section of this book is more enjoyable than reading. No wonder the original author supports this book so much. In the era of traffic, controversy comes first! If it can make people sick, it will be a good thing to write a book. Have you learned this posture?

As a long-time reader, before leaving the castle, I almost thought it was a sacred book. The author's description of the protagonist's character is so disappointing. Maybe the author wanted to write about the slow growth, from the humiliation and burden in the castle to the rhythm of whoever he meets. It is undeniable that the author wrote The world view is great, Wonton Sea, and the World Stone are all great ideas. From the protagonist's aversion to upper-class clothes and light spirits, it made me position my camp early and made me appear in Spear and Shield. This is a book that is second to none and I am the boss. My personal opinion is that the author is not to blame.

? ? ? Did the author sell the book? Or are you looking for a ghostwriter? The plot before the escape has the potential to become a god, but the plot after the escape is like a novice novel from fifteen years ago, and it is still illogical.

The author deliberately ruined the plot by placing an indescribable object in the middle of the road. He doesn't even let you go around it, but has to step on it. It's just disgusting. It's okay to say Poison, the writing is very good and the characters are full, and the plot of Long Aotian is not too problematic, but I watched him eat shit without paying attention, and the author stuffed it into his mouth and couldn't even hide. It doesn't matter if I stepped on it, I cleaned my shoes and left, but I risked being kicked by the person behind me so I blocked the door and didn't go in! There's shit in there!

I have to say that this chapter is quite disgusting. You can enter the academy with a good route, but it is in this ntr-like style. Emmmmmm, I can't say anything, but it is disgusting. In terms of writing, I have to say that it is quite good. If I can continue writing, I still think the author can write well. Even if I want to persuade him to give up, I still think he should handle it better.

To put it simply, God's opening is that the human nature in it is too dark. The only shining point is the first girl and the mercenary. In the end, the girl gave up, and it was unclear whether the mercenaries would show up before they came over. The black mage didn't give up despite the difficulties. He had to arrange for the girl to die at any time. I gave up in Chapter 57. Even a dog who has been dependent on each other for five years would not compromise so easily. Later, it seemed that the military mage wanted to get rid of the girl before he reacted. Why don't you want to write for such a character? And I really want to ask if you are writing a mage? ? ? I'm not saying that knowledge is priceless, but it feels like it's all about how to get ahead. It's completely about how much gold a spell costs, how to care about everything, all kinds of scheming, all kinds of calculations, and how dark the world is. Sorry for whining bye

I don't understand why the reviews for this book are all negative. I don't know where the poison is. This book is written fluently, logically, with detailed details, interlocking plots, compact and complete, and builds an entire fantasy world. Many contents in the novel are mutually corroborating, from the "physics" such as the worldview of the source of magic, to the "social science" such as the impact of the power system on the social structure, making people completely immersed in it without any sense of being in a drama. Coupled with the good plot and writing, it can be said that there are really not many novels that can compare with this book. Among the many online novels I have read, this one ranks at least in the top ten.

Long-lived species and short-lived species have different concepts of time. A mayfly lives and dies, and one day is its life. For humans, one day is very short. If the mayfly had a society and a country, would humans care? Of course they wouldn't care. Just play for a few days. I have changed several batches of ephemera. In the long years of immortality, fame and power are just clouds. Only power is the truth. Look at those immortal heroes who basically have no contact with the secular world. The reason is that their life span is too short. It is nonsense for immortality to compete for power.

I do not subscribe to or comment on the content of the book. It is completely irresponsible to post a book review just to criticize the editor's recommendation.

The author is great, I think we can let the protagonist learn the enchantment magic in the future to make the statue come alive 🤓🤓

Before Chapter 35, the writer should have bought the opening. After Chapter 35, someone else has written it since I boarded the ship. The level can only be evaluated by [Flying Down Three Thousand Feet]. It is recommended to abandon the trap before Chapter 40 to avoid being poisoned by novices.

With excitement, passion, ups and downs, a strong sense of involvement, the rage of revenge, detailed descriptions, and a grasp of key points, this book will become a hit.

Great article, thanks. Conscience can ward off evil spirits. Everyone is different. It doesn't matter what you call it, thank you.

Level 5 writer? Did someone change the writing after leaving the castle? The gap between the front and back is different, what the fuck?

The protagonist of a novel is still restricted by so many restrictions. Although it is very close to reality and very real and reasonable, I always feel a little unhappy when reading the novel. The writing is good, but it is not close to the cool novel. It is an old routine.

I haven't seen the poisonous spots yet. The author's writing style is a bit like the orthodox martial arts of the past. The protagonist is upright and perseverant. Although he lacks intelligence but has good luck, he can climb up after encountering many adventures along the way. The road is bumpy but he can always get through it. In the end, it should be a direction of overcoming all difficulties, going through the vicissitudes of sorrow and joy, and reaching the pinnacle of magic! This book was okay in the past, but now it seems that it is more cliched and not interesting enough. Especially the tragic plot that readers could accept and sigh with emotion in the past seems more poisonous now!        ，，，，，！ You can read this book to see if the previous martial arts routines applied to spells suit your taste, recall your past feelings, and look at the characteristics of the past writing style, maybe! I kind of like it, right? I can accept this style, right? It's okay if you don't accept it, just change the book and don't start a fight! I often watched this style of martial arts when I was a kid. It was a bumpy journey, with sadness and joy, and it can't always be called a happy ending. It felt more literary and artistic, so I could accept it, but I still changed the book. I didn't have a choice before, but now I want to be smarter and more fun! 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

Well, first of all, I am not a fan of Mo Xiang. I remember that I was looking at a list of books with only female protagonists but no female protagonists, so I put this book on the bookshelf for no reason. I didn't read the book clearly when I opened it. After reading all the chapters, I saw the three big words "Serializing"… Ahhh, it's even more painful to follow! ! ! How should I put it, I was pleasantly surprised when I discovered this book, because the author's skill and style can be seen from the first few chapters. Although the protagonist Roland has a system/golden finger/hack, his ability is mediocre. If you ignore it accidentally, it will not cause resentment, and it can well support the protagonist's growth. The protagonist will not give up his mind even when the game is over, the supporting characters rarely lose their wits, and many battle/intrigue scenes are written with great care. Although I don't yet understand the role of time travel/hang-up in the story line, at least the current main line, growth ladder, and enemies of this book are well shaped. It's just that... I still can't accept the emotional line. Roland hasn't thought of Lily anymore for a while, and Alice's reappearance is also very suspicious. ⋯⋯And Weiss! Why did my sister just forget about it? So does my wife! Is Roland too scumbag? Just do your business, can't you? ? (Turns over the table) Ah, I regret it. Why should I open the book? It's so painful...

What the hell is this setting? The mage restricts his own spellcasting.

I did feel a bit like a gunman after arriving in Turin.

The recent writings by Mrs. Friel are so real and rubbish. After all, she is also a great mage, so she is just at the mercy of others? They all said they wanted to die, why didn't they just blow themselves up? Being manipulated at will by Femilson? One moment she said it was for the sake of her family, and the next she begged for her mother's death. It was contradictory. I almost made myself sick after reading these chapters. This lady should commit suicide immediately.

The beginning of this book is pretty good, it feels like you have endured all the hardships and soared into the sky Then he crashed like Icarus, first he hooked up with the witch for no reason and forced Jiang Zi, put the dagger on his neck, and he still saved the two female mages with peace of mind Then Soldier A and Mage B directly pulled it into the recycle bin to delete Directly hit the line of the two female mages, just open it! After the test, I said a few words, (the author was replaced), and overturned the old mage line in front of it There were various foreshadowings along the way, but the foreshadowing couldn't be connected What I couldn't stand the most was the protagonist's emotional line, which was pulled out and ruthlessly. There is not a single paragraph from beginning to end. One person. A force. A book! It can support the plot and make the book less empty.

It's very beautiful, come on, work hard for RMB

I recommend good books. It's not easy to find characters with online IQs. It can be seen that the author has carefully arranged the plot, and the battle scenes are also very compact, and there are usually surprises XDD (It would be a bit bad if the IQ cannot keep up with the protagonist) Mo Xiang doesn't often jump out to talk, which feels... Very refreshing. (?) But just... My wife works hard and the bad boy Roland shows mercy everywhere... Is there really no other good man in this world...? (Shouting to female readers who also want attractive male characters... Kant does not count!) Remember that if you open the starting point, they will vote for you, come on. _(:зゝ∠)

The protagonist is a bit too stupid. He does a lot of useless things and fails to do a lot of things he should do. He is like a fool. I really can't stand it anymore.

A female mage who was almost killed by the protagonist A female mage who was later saved by the protagonist A female mage who forced the protagonist to participate in the trial regardless of his wishes A female mage who forced the male protagonist to join her organization A female mage who used the male protagonist's sister as a person He forced the female mage to join his organization In the end, the female mage succeeded On the premise that he had the ability to overturn the table, the male protagonist compromised and gave it to the female mage. In exchange for the opportunity on the premise that his sister was being coerced, he went to study with a mage arranged by a female mage. Is this really a man who can: suffer for five years in the Necromancer's castle eat rats and earthworms every day endure the ** of the Necromancer and finally kill the Necromancer through his own plans and efforts - Roland Is this a choice that such a person can make? I can only say one thing: the author is awesome But this reader is even more awesome, the poison resistance is overflowing

The recent writing is so irritating that I can't stand it anymore! Come on over and let off some steam! The protagonist leaves the castle and is now a fool!

I read Chapter 45, and now I'm confused. It's a world of high demons, a world of magic. I was obviously confused when I first saw the statue, and then threw it back in various ways. In a magical world, anyone with a normal mind would think that there is something wrong with the statue. However, the protagonist actually thinks it is someone else's prank over and over again? There are exactly two people in the previous castle. Is this written by the same author? 🤔🤔🤔