There Is a Divine Court in My Mobile Phone

The storyline is pretty good and smooth. It seems relatively comfortable. But there is a feeling that the sense of immersion is not strong, and it is not particularly integrated into the atmosphere of the most important point of the plot. I guess it may be that some details are missing. For example, when the live broadcast was started before the birth of the ancestral witch, people watching the live broadcast were surprised, silent or other things. The protagonist kills BOOS in the dark. The supporting actress falls with a knife. Ends the monster. Saves the world. The two lines of light and dark. It feels a bit monotonous. Some plot aspects can be written in more details. Use more words to express the feeling. Add that feeling. The storyline is great Come on＾0＾~

The subject matter is good, but don't you think it's strange that you describe the superpowers and the realms of the Four Heavenly Kings? Wouldn't it be nice to have a system to open a vest and fuse a bunch of angel minions first? It has only been a few days since the mutation started, and all the forces you wrote about have come out. Don't others need to develop time and reaction? Also, the superpower you described is very strange, isn't it? The protagonist is enveloped in some realm of the four heavenly kings, thinking it is the same as the previous one. Then you play a puzzle game, find the differences? Still ten passes

No one? The title of the book is really good, I like it!

If the author persists, he will succeed. The word count is too few now.

A pretty good novel. Creativity is okay. It's just that this novel has a few toxic points for me. Review 4⭐

It's good to watch, come on, author, I'll give you four recommendation votes every day 😁

How to write it into daily life 😅😅😅