Perfect 2001

Relatively speaking, it is relatively bland. The short story has no structure and the plot is also mixed with singing pretense. I just skipped chapters to read. Nothing new.

I don't know who copied whom, I can't stand it anymore!

The writing is quite good. I strongly recommend everyone to read it. Everyone should support good works.

Death from poison! Find a gambler to join your gang and hit the streets!

The plot is too abrupt and the characters are inexplicable! For example, when I met Xiao Li when I was buying land, the land couldn't be sold for 20,000 yuan, but the pig's feet came and asked for 80,000 yuan! It is said that Xiao Li bought the land because he had a good vision, and he noticed at a glance that the pig's feet were extraordinary, and he wanted to join in and hug his thigh! The problem is that smart people get stuck in gambling! ? Novel can be written in a messy manner, but it cannot deceive readers' intelligence.

Why does everyone who is reborn have a goddess they can't get? Who do you think you are (т⌣̀_⌣́)? It's too fancy.

I always write about things that are irrelevant. Is this arrogance?

The biggest shortcoming of this book is that it is not exciting and makes people feel very immersive. There is also the problem of the villain. That person named Zhou, do you know what is the difference between you and the great god? The great thing is to capture the appetite of book lovers. A small villain can be killed in just a few chapters and let him get a box lunch. This is a cool point and makes readers feel happy. A gentleman's revenge is never too late. But when it comes to the protagonist, it doesn't take so long. You can directly seize the weakness and get rid of it. But you are too procrastinating. How many chapters have you written for this small villain named Zhou? It's always jumping around there, but the protagonist has no intention of messing with him, which makes people look very unhappy, you know, it's like a person is pretending to be crazy in front of you, hitting you in the face like crazy, and then you can't do anything about him, which looks very frustrating. Your book is based on the book "Rebirth of the Perfect Era". Why can't you learn from other people's villains and kill them quickly? It's simple and effective and it's very satisfying. The second point is that the development of the protagonist is too slow. You have written so many chapters and you haven't reported it to school yet. The timeline seems very messy and cannot be connected. Now you are setting up a hot pot restaurant, now you are fishing in Haidilao, now you are in a relationship with Duan Wei, now you are in love with Xie Yingying, now you have a little villain named Zhou coming out to dance. Do you have no outline? Write whatever comes to mind? The development of the timeline is too slow, more than a hundred chapters have passed, and it has not yet developed. The first villain still has him jumping around there, which is very frustrating to watch. Third point, the protagonist you wrote was reborn in 2001. According to this time, instant messaging must be started, but I don't see any idea of ​​​​entering this area, not even laying the groundwork. The fourth point is that the development of the protagonist can be accelerated. Stop being so grinding. It's like playing house. If you want to write this kind of business writing, you should write business writing well. Don't talk about so many emotional dramas. Too many emotional dramas will be messy and complicated, and business writing will not be pure. The book "Rebirth of the Perfect Era" has become eunuch. Do you know why? It's because this emotional line is so messed up that the author doesn't know how to solve this problem anymore. Just write business articles properly. What's the point of talking about so many women? I suggest you read "Top of the Rebirth Wave". This novel has a single female protagonist, the emotional drama is not messy, and everything is focused on business wars. It is very well written. Your book still has many shortcomings. You can see for yourself what you have written and look at it from the perspective of a reader. Let me summarize it for you. First: Villain Problem Second: Female Protagonist Problem Third: Career Problem Fourth: Where is the fun part? Fifth: The sense of substitution is too weak

I just read it, and I think the author's name is good. Although I am not a researcher, but there are too many flaws. New cars in 2000 were exempted from review for six years. Fresh graduates have more than 3,000 yuan a month, and a bowl of pork rice noodles costs one dollar. . . Is this data difficult to check?

When I saw Yan Da was stable, I flashed and told you a joke. My nephew asked me questions in elementary school and I couldn't answer them. Really cool!

I hope you all can support me and give me corrections.

Does God need a maid? Are you trying to poison someone? Renaissance + East-West fusion?

Why is it that every protagonist is reborn and surrounded by someone who is going to die, and they are always the prettiest ones?

Stop being a eunuch, there is someone with you 😂😂😂

I'm so torn. I said okay... I can't see it, but I can't say it's not that bad... Maybe it's because of the writing style. I always feel a little dyslexic. I feel like I'm buzzing for a long time without going into gear... The story is okay, but the writing doesn't really appeal to me! My humble opinion!

It is recommended that you read and think more about it from the beginning, and then revise all the chapters from the beginning, otherwise you will really not be able to read it anymore. I feel like I have such amazing writing skills 😓

As the name suggests, he really jumped on the street ten thousand times

The novel is still good, but it imitates the structure of the rebirth of a perfect era too much. It always seems inexplicably familiar and knows what to do next. I hope the author won't imitate too much

Abandon it, abandon it Here and there, you said that for a convenience store, you actually want to use the Han and Tang styles. You are going to laugh to death. Have you ever seen this style on the street? The business there was doing well and they went to sing and pretend to be cool for several chapters. Don't you have an outline? You can just write wherever you want. This way you will definitely collapse after a few things.

It feels pretty good, not too poisonous, but the entry point is very special, it should be a foreshadowing, right?