Sword Forged Shinra

One problem that comes to mind is that I always write about heroes. Heroes are about to rise, taking the first step and so on. Firstly, it will cause visual fatigue. In fact, there are not so many heroes in an era. Of course, I understand that the author wants to write about the time when all the heroes come together in a time of great chaos. Secondly, heroes should be able to do things that ordinary people dare not do and cannot do. Strength is only part of it, their ambitions, ideals, and actions are important parts of what constitutes a hero. In other words, a hero is not what you say he is, but what he does and says, he is. Take "The Romance of the Three Kingdoms" as an example. When Cao Cao first appeared on the scene, he was Yuan Shao's follower, a figure who was invisible to everyone. Through the beating of eunuchs, the assassination of Dong Zhuo, the Battle of Guandu, and the previous counselors who voted for Cao Cao instead of Yuan Shao, and proposed ten wins and ten losses, Cao Cao's heroic image was gradually established. Zhuge Liang was very strong when he came out, and he had foreshadowing. He had songs and was recommended by Xu Shu. Moreover, after Zhuge Liang came out of the mountain, he immediately gained a record to prove his strength. Or take online novels as an example. Feng Jiuge in "Gu Zhenren" is a good example. As soon as he is said to be strong, he immediately uses the protagonist to escape from the dead. In the following, he builds a strong image by describing his past achievements, establishing a moral image by avenging his friends, etc. So far, the many heroes written by the author, including Bran, the Black Prince, the Son of the Viper, the Rose of Highgarden, etc., Cannot support the image of heroes. Only Tamerlane and the First Bow of the East China Sea can leave a deep impression. Ashukele is probably just a template for Yuan Shao and cannot be called a hero. In short, I think that when writing about a heroic character, you must at least tell us why this hero is a hero, what qualities he has that can be called a hero, what he said, and what he did. Instead of saying he is, he is. Secondly, you must be cautious when introducing new characters. They should be mobs. Characters with elite monsters must not be brought into the BOSS position. Important people must not appear out of thin air

The real Rome +10086

Neither holy, nor Roman, nor imperial

The author wants to write a fantasy novel with a medieval background, and then focus on fantasy, and put the historical background in a secondary position, emmm, I think, your title is Shinra, so the people who want to read this are probably mainly historical readers. For historical readers, history and fantasy are like dumplings with pineapples inside. People who like to read fantasy may not be familiar with the historical background of the Middle Ages and may be bored by the complex relationships and characters. So you are very likely to be unhappy with both sides. Of course, I didn't know the author's performance from the beginning, but I'm not very optimistic about it personally. I think there is a book that can be used as a good reference. I am Louis XIV. He also has a historical background and fantasy elements, but he is based on history and pays attention to details, and fantasy is just an adjustment. (Only represents my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it)

I hope the author is happy every day. For now, you are no worse than some so-called great gods. What you need is an opportunity, and of course you need to have enough patience. I hope you can become famous instantly and I hope you can keep your original intention and work hard. As long as you work hard and persist, you will definitely succeed.

I skipped through it, but after reading dozens of chapters, I really didn't understand what the story was about. It felt like I was reading a dozen stories. I am also an old bookworm, and I can't figure out the development of the protagonist. When I think he is going to fall apart, he is not, and when I think he is the protagonist of a refreshing novel, he still wants to take the affectionate route. It is still the feeling that I don't take more steps and only take one small step. . . . . . Although I can't understand this novel, I was greatly shocked!

Come on, big brother who writes Shinra

Seeing the cuckold situation, I came. Quack quack

Balkan Rose

Lord of the Three Rivers

When I read the title, I really thought it was a historical article. After reading a few chapters, I realized that it had nothing to do with history. If the author likes fantasy settings, it is recommended to refer to the medieval warhammer settings, which will be much more reasonable.

Is there a dark world mod?

Find Rome in Holy Rome, find your wife in wife cake 😏

Is there a big island of Venice?😁😁

Not holy, not Roman, not even an empire

The author's writing style is good, and it is very immersive to read. As a player of P Club, I can't help but feel that the author is knowledgeable and very pleased 🙂🙂🙂

The book was well written in the early stages, but after going to Swabia to get married, things became inexplicable and illogical. First of all, the princess has become sickly. I will not talk about how much the princess likes the male protagonist. First of all, as the eldest princess and the king's favorite granddaughter, in order to prevent the granddaughter's other half from being a problematic person, I arranged for some capable people to take care of the princess and monitor the male protagonist. Is this a problem? You want to say that the one who monitors the male protagonist is her mother, which is fine, but how to deal with the problem so roughly that she directly kills the whole family and forces the male protagonist to marry into his wife? You directly tied up the male protagonist and then forcibly married him. What ability does the male protagonist have to refuse? Then, in order to make it tragic, he arranged for the princess to spy on the male protagonist, causing a misunderstanding. The male protagonist arranged for guards to check and check, which was so lonely. If Venice arranged an assassin, you would be dead. This is written too harshly, Kai. Isn't this person easy to use? He arranges events to directly slander the male protagonist. There is no need to do so many things to deal with a down-and-out person Then there is the death of the Pope. The male protagonist in front of me can understand it. After all, it is barely reasonable, but I am really numb about this. Chai Su arranges for one person, Yi An, bribes a chief priest and a cardinal, and the chief priest arranges for people to enter. The cardinal invited the acting pope out. Damn it, it was so easy to kill the pope. Then the Frank the Great was just a fool, and the humiliation of Carossa was a joke. Then Chaisus entered Rome and took control of the Holy City, the Knights Hospitaller became independent, and the Temple fled? I was immediately dumbfounded. Take a look at what was written. You said you arranged for a cardinal to become pope, why? Compared to Tunisia, aren't the peninsular countries not as close to you? Compared to national power, isn't Frankfurt stronger than Tunisia? I won't say anything else. The whole thing really happened without being discovered by anyone. Chai Suwei was not suspected. It is not you who controls the Holy City. Whoever controls Rome has the right to speak in the Catholic cultural circle. This must not cause competition among all Catholic countries. It is so simple to give up. It is even more funny. The Knights are not involved in the investigation. From the Flower of Evil chapter to the death of the Pope, it directly made me want to delete the book. You have countless ways to write about these questions, such as feelings, is the aristocratic conspiracy unreasonable, the whole story is like watching Love in the Rain, Regarding religion, unite other cardinals and hostile acting pope countries, England has not passed a bill, win over this group of people, and directly change the Pope. Isn't it possible to win over the acting pope? It's not the same person. Can't we achieve our goals through negotiation? Why do we have to use the most outrageous method of killing the Pope?

I feel that the pace of characters appearing is too fast. I still haven't remembered the name of the first person. Several more people appeared later. When I saw a bunch of unknown names at the end, I was confused and it affected the reading experience. The storyline is very good. The author will continue to work hard.

I think it's best for the plot to evolve from the main character to the branches. Many of the plots written are parallel to the main character's plot. The two plots won't converge for quite some time. And the writing is so thorough and straightforward. For example, regarding the Snake Eyes palace coup, the protagonist (reader) can only know that there is civil strife in the Snake Eyes palace at first, and then the protagonist (audience) can get the inside story from the mouths of the siblings. The plot effect will be much better this way. A good masterpiece often has a long and long dialogue. The protagonist's ideas and thoughts are constantly communicated and collided with various figures from various walks of life at that time. It is also easier to see the interests, needs and ideas of all parties.

I love this author so much. He is really an author with great imagination and writing style that is not stiff. The more I read the article, the more I feel it. The more I write, the better it reads. Who can resist such a beautiful novel?

When I first started reading, Chapter 5 felt a bit too subtle to be able to stand. The world background set by the author is very good. I think it would be great if the protagonist could inherit one of the two systems, and it would be a incomplete system. The main line becomes fixing the system and finding another system. It became clearer all of a sudden. Now it feels like it lacks an easy main line.

Author, would you like to play a supporting role for me? 😁😁

Yeah, sister is so awesome, come on, sister, my whole life, I have been crazy about my sister, crazy about my sister, and bumped into big walls for my sister. Well, my sister is fierce to me, but I am so handsome even though my sister is fierce to me! ! ! 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔Why does this chapter remind me of this line gag 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔

This is actually the Warring States Period in medieval guise, right?

When playing CK, I still like to regain Britannia and become Pendragon 😌. I haven't had much contact with Shinra.

I've already read Chapter 30, and the pace is so slow.

I saw the episode about amnesia, it's extremely poisonous