The Witcher's Alchemy Workshop

Today, I will kill fat until January 5th. The author said that, I have some thoughts and suggestions for Taitai. Just laugh it off, right? After all, it's hard to see people carrying water. First of all, the book is a good book and worth reading! Don't be a eunuch, the readers you have gathered now are the wealth of your next book. If you fail, your character will be damaged. I write down my feelings from several aspects (only my personal opinion. Topic selection: Advantages: The Witcher series is very popular, and anyone who likes Witcher games can watch it. The author is really good at restoring the Wizarding world, and his writing is excellent. Disadvantages: The audience of the Witcher series is limited to a limited readership, and the audience group targeted by Incredible Alchemy is even smaller. Many Western fantasy movies like to appear in the starting point. White Wolf, why are there so few full-length novels about the wizarding world? Because the setting of the wizarding world is grand, but the perspective of White Wolf is very small, and the level is not high. It is difficult to balance the reading interest of wizard fans and passersby if you don't want to write a novel. Narration: The writing is great, and it has the flavor of a wizard, especially the funny role of the narration and the racing drift are like antelopes. Disadvantages: Grasp. The reader's rhythm is not good. There are too many events in the narrative, which are a bit like playing a wizard game. I just said that my favorite daughter was arrested, so why not play Gwent? It is especially obvious after coming out of Kai Island. Do you think I should cry or laugh? I suggest you learn from the three narratives of the mystery or the movie. It is soothing, sharp, and explosive. Go. Add some piling to the depressing and refreshing interludes. You can't be depressed all the time. Your later writing is a bit slow. As a result, although readers are happy to read it, they can't get enough of it. It's very difficult, and the Bobai in front of Taitai is very interesting Reader stickiness: Internet novels can stick to readers no matter whether they read daily or Shafei. Otherwise, if you stop reading for a few days, it is really difficult to pick up the new books now and you will lose readers. It's like a textbook that tells people how to write online articles. The routines are old from ten years ago, but they can make the readers go up and down. I suggest Taitai learn from it. Personal advice: I am not a writer, but my writing experience is to treat the reader as a fool. Because there is a difference between your knowledge and the reader's knowledge, it is very likely that he will not know the joke you are making. The empathy may not be the empathy of the readers, and the direction of observation of things is different. Your description makes me cry! This makes me happy! The long-lasting popularity of short stories has its merits. This is not the case with Iron Steam and Spellcaster. This is a standard story that makes readers giggle even though they are fools. It is to gather readers. Finally, it is really important to manage paragraph reviews, chapter reviews and interact with readers. Readers really have nothing to do with the author. This is the best way to make people pay. Finally, I really like Taitai's book, otherwise I would not write so many words for you. I hope Taitai will stick to it. Happy New Year!

I read 47 chapters in one go. Let me talk about my overall feelings first: the writing is concise, the plot is compact, the three views are correct, the plot is appropriate, there are no big poisonous points, and it is not superficial. It is worth reading carefully. (This writing does not look like a newcomer's) As a new reader who has never played/watched the Witcher series of games/novels/American TV series, my understanding of the Witcher is limited to a few fan novels from the starting point. There are no obstacles in reading this book. The detailed and non-detailed descriptions in the text and the chapter comments from netizens can make you deeply attracted by the customs and customs of the world of witchers. Main line: The plot arrangement from the alchemy workshop to the wizarding world is very wonderful. The alchemist is the main profession, improve the alchemy potion, and become a demon hunter in the new era. Integrating into the main plot of The Witcher 123, the original plot is quietly changed with the alchemy ability, interspersed with the interactive bonds of the characters, and continuous growth and experience during the roaming, gradually unfolding a wizard world with three-dimensional characters and full of culture. This magnificent story is what our readers expect and love. Main and Supporting Roles: The protagonist Victor has a correct outlook on life, has an online IQ, plans before acting, and is neat and tidy. The main character of the wizard is in line with the original work (reviewed by book friends). The female supporting character Angoulaine is generous yet attentive, innocent yet cautious, and has great potential for subsequent growth. I like it very much 😌 Hi of the plot: The alchemy ability comes from the Atelier game series, which is a bit like the wishing spell. The upgrade path is currently unknown. I guess that after the return of the heroine Ciri, she will return to the alchemy world to upgrade. The alchemy workshop is opened, the non-toxic herbal medicine is successfully developed, the inheritance of the demon hunter is revived, and the world pattern is changed? Turn on the demon-hunting sword in your right hand and the ability to alchemy money in your right hand, and defeat all dissenters [Dog Head Funny] Playing with jokes and colors: The time traveler's jokes are still more immersive, and the plot is cheerful and humorous. Moderate use of color is more attractive to male fans, who like to hear and see it, and get lots of comments, but it is also easy to be harmonious. Be in moderation. Operation of the work: The operations officer can start the follow-up fan base. This book is well written, and the next one can be original and non-fiction. If you continue to hone your writing skills, there will be a lot of potential for film and television adaptations. Finally: The current progress of the plot is still very slow, there are no small plots and explosive points. The rest of the plot is close to the original plot, and the protagonist has also been upgraded to give full play to his alchemy ability. Overall, it is very good. I look forward to the subsequent development and more customs and customs of the wizarding world. Vote for recommendation, give a small reward, join a new book investment group, recommend it to your friends and read it, you can arrange additional updates from the author! Above

Remarks on the end of the volume In a world where unlimited harem novels are very popular, novice writers can gain traffic by being funny and hot topics, data can be bought, and immortality, fantasy, Cthulhu, and urban are all the rage, it is so hard to find such a Western fantasy book that tells stories seriously and has excellent writing. My first reaction is actually to thank you for this unique novel I have had little interest in online games since I was a child. On the contrary, the complete and grand background of stand-alone games often attracts me, and this is a good book that makes me have the urge to play games again Maybe it limits the popularity due to the subject matter. Quantity, but in my eyes, this is really a masterpiece that can be ranked at the top, please don't be a eunuch PS. About the definition of harem: In fact, hating harem novels is not really about hating boys or girls, but also hating the author's behavior of opening a harem for the sake of opening a harem. Reading novels is nothing more than seeking a sense of immersion, but if a protagonist's sense of achievement comes mostly from the opposite sex, it will be more than worth the gain The harem should be the result, not the purpose PPS. Sex and love should be counted separately (this should be the same definition in the novel)

I have always felt that there are so many wizard players, but it is a pity why wizard-type novels have never become popular. It's rare to have a book dedicated to wizards, I hope the author can stick to it ✊

The author's writing style and driving speed are just right, making it very comfortable to read.

The first few volumes of this book are about the novel version of The Witcher, not the plot of The Witcher game. There are more than 300 chapters and the plot of The Witcher 3 is not yet reached. Ciri has not yet appeared. Readers who have not read the original version will be confused.

This book is really not many, please support it.

Gritty, self-righteous, taking it for granted that you have an intracranial orgasm without caring about the readers' feelings. You know everything you should know, and you still do things you shouldn't do. The regrets and pain in the game still give people regret and pain in the book. I really don't know why you wrote the book, just to care about yourself and ignore the reader's perspective? The above is the biggest poisonous point of this book. Period.

It's passable, but it's too slow. It takes 212 chapters to become a witcher, so don't use the title of witcher. Over 200 chapters are just a piece of cake? It wears away people's patience. Is it useful for you to become a demon hunter? Who can endure more than 200 pieces of nonsense? I'm still jumping to read it. I have to read two witcher books in the past few days and want to read it before I understand it and have the heart to read it. Otherwise, you are the only one who likes to read it. Sure enough, there is a reason why it is not popular. Dead bedding

What a capable waste. The protagonist's wizard couldn't have been through cheating, otherwise how could he not have any impression of the plot?

Seeing that the protagonist is preparing to go to the ancient elf city for a meeting and negotiations with all parties, he becomes increasingly depressed. I spent dozens of yuan on this subscription, and the content became more and more divergent. I couldn't help but want to personally attack the author, but I felt that this was not good so I didn't curse. Warning to book friends who read this book because they want to read The Witcher fanfiction, the contents of this book will always make you very depressed, the events involved are too trivial, and the fate that readers want to change has basically not changed.

This book is not popular Is it because after the protagonist leaves the Novice Village, he is basically passively involved in all kinds of troubles, disrupting the plan, and then not solving it satisfactorily, and then there is no big growth relationship? The plug-in has Super Alchemy, but is it too restrictive most of the time? There is also the long-delayed issue of the voice of the murderous sky.

It's pretty good. There are more. It improves the formula of the Trial of Green Grass. It's not bad for being a demon hunter. In that ghost place where monsters are everywhere, you can only survive if you have the strength.

Excellent: The writing description and dialogue are very close to the style of the game experience. Occasionally, the jokes are a little distracting but do not affect the overall look and feel. The interludes in Xili's Little Theater are just the author's jokes. It is more suitable for readers who have only played The Witcher 3 game. Missing: For some fan readers, the protagonist's behavior is not pleasing. It's not that his ideas are wrong, but that sometimes he seems to drift with the crowd, sometimes he seems to be ambitious but not talented, sometimes he is as witty as Emhyr galloping on the chessboard of his kingdom, and sometimes he is more like an amnesiac old man than Vesemir. ————The following content is very subjective———— If you don't want to change the direction of the plot, then it is best to give the protagonist a reasonable reason not to interfere with the plot. Either he only remembers this thing from beginning to end and doesn't know the time, or he doesn't know at all, or he'd better have his own adventure and hear the big news when he comes back. Try Tantan. In the end, your protagonist is like a marionette and always can't catch up. It's very disappointing. Once or twice, you can say that the protagonist's mentality is not correct. After a few more times, I can only say that the protagonist is not suitable for making friends in this world. It is much better to know what your teammates are going to do and what the outcome will be, not to mention how you can change it. It is much better to be prepared in advance or to have everyone go their separate ways and respect each other's choices than to be confused beforehand and be confident later. Playing with amnesia or being unable to remember key points at a critical moment requires a subtle design and invisible induction. This is difficult for fan authors who know the plot, so I really understand the author's difficulties and choices. But sometimes, simply following the conspiracy rhythm of the original work is not enough. One more talented witcher and one less talented witcher, as well as the resulting twists and turns in power and personnel changes, will become important factors for the conspirators to adjust their plans. I have just seen the place where the kings of various countries set off to the Elf City to negotiate after the Kingslayer. Up to the part before this paragraph, I feel that I have not seen the major changes brought to the world by a new magical witcher. The spoilers of future generations that you arranged between the lines of the paragraph make me feel that you, the protagonist, should not be here, but the fact is that the magical Phantom Troupe did not succeed in changing the fate of those who played more roles at key nodes. The protagonist reflects the author's hesitation, deciding whether to obey the damn plot or fate. But the demand for updates waits for no one, so the author finally reached the point where two evils are at odds with each other. It's okay if you decide to side with Letso or Geralt, but you shouldn't let the protagonist educate the team members not to wait, and at the same time wait until the situation of "choosing the best of two evils". I was already frustrated enough when watching dramas and games. Your protagonist made incredible alchemy, became a knight, and became famous as a Dragonborn. But in the end, you just finished watching it for me, and that's it? It was all very fancy, but as soon as the last key point came up, it was all over the place. Dandelion, who played the piano at the Sintra banquet, was just a stranger. If you tell me that the protagonist is powerless and a waste and has to fight two evils, then I will at best call you an old thief, because the witcher is not omnipotent. But you are not a waste, and you have the ability to change. If you still have to "follow the plot", then I think the protagonist is a failed prophet and time traveler. Even if you talk about random things, the regicide failed, and the plot settings are slightly consistent with the characters, I will accept it. Even if you write that the protagonist's efforts actually fulfilled the prophecy, and the protagonist fought for his life at the last moment to turn the tide and laughed at his fate, I will accept it. This is much better than the current situation where he is half-dead and half-dead, as if he is flirting with the main plot line. Now that I see this, I actually feel a sense of separation. After your protagonist comes to this world, Geralt is still suffering, Leisuo and the others are still working hard, Ciri still has not returned, and the king is still dying. You live in this world like a happy traveler passing by. After creating an epic with a smile on your face, you abandon others, and the supporting cast is still suffering and grudges. Should I laugh or feel aggrieved?

With tears in my eyes, I have finished this book, which makes me feel like I am still young... Victor's adventure stories have brought me a lot of joy, and Ximen Dada's words can be said to have satisfied my curiosity and imagination about the wizarding world. Thank you very much. I have nothing to repay, so I will make up for it by ordering all the books. I also wish that the results of your next book will be even better. Finished with flowers~

Just finished watching the latest update. I just want to say that the progress of the plot is too mediocre. After so long, the protagonist still has not solved the trial of green grass, and the golden finger of incredible alchemy has not been developed. 🤫 Why not change the name to "My Ordinary Daily Life in the World of Gwent"

There are many good parts in the writing, but there are too many similar poisonous points. I would not read it if it weren't for the fact that the Witcher fans couldn't find a few books. Be careful when entering the trap

I feel that the writing is great and interesting, and it suits my taste. I hope the author can stick to it 🤭

To be honest, the Skellige chapter in this book so far is the best and most exciting one, especially as a dragonborn, it satisfies the fantasy of what it will be like when a real dragonborn comes to the wizarding world. So the author might as well expand and make other dragon roar potions of Dragonborn, and let me think about it without just making fun of it. It is normal for this book to be popular. What I want to see is actually how the protagonist defeats others and gets a taste of the wizarding world.

Serious rejection of girls! Serious rejection of girls! Vivian from Toussaint! Dream diviner Colleen Tilly! It's simply poisonous!

It's been a year and a half. Last year was fine, but this year's updates are getting more and more awkward. I haven't been on the helm for 19 months. You, the author, must be ashamed! 🙂

So far, this book has not entered the plot of the game "The Witcher 1". The Witcher began with the Camel reappearing in the forest near Kaer Morhen in May 1270, and when I saw Chapter 153, it should have just entered 1270. In other words, if the focus of this book is on the game story, it has just begun now. . . As a fan of the Witcher series, I hope that the author can write a good-looking story while maintaining quality and quantity (quality first). After all, the Witcher theme is inherently niche, and it is even rarer to be faithful to the original work without making random assumptions. . .

Well, I think the main line needs to be clearer. Although the protagonist talks about wanting to become a demon hunter, he actually doesn't take any action. Emm may be obsessed with the beauty of Sister Shani and can't help himself, or there may be an author who wants to get involved in the rebellion of the Knights of the Flaming Rose. After all, it is feasible whether it is contacting the White Wolf or obtaining the mutation potion from the Knights. After all, the Wolf base of Kaer Morhen is hard to find. It is deep in the mountains and old forests and can be hidden. You have to find a good entry point to gain trust. In addition, Tousend is also good, and overseas Skellige is also good. But in several northern countries, the social status of demon hunters is very embarrassing, especially after Leitho assassinated the king.

Ahhhh! Who is it, who is crying? Ah, it's a senior official from Ximen. He's here, he's here, and he's going to become a good man in Dongchang soon! Dear friends who are still reading, please give Xiao Ximen some encouragement. Otherwise, if you join Dongchang to share the emperor's worries, you won't be able to see the book friends 🤭🤭😊

It's very beautiful, the writing is interesting, and some parts are even very touching. To be honest, the results are not consistent with the quality. The only unpleasant part is Luffy's part. In addition, the update is about to catch up and the protagonist has not yet become a witcher. I didn't expect it. Monthly tickets and recommended tickets are provided, and we will also help promote it. Come on, author!

Come on 💪Don't be a eunuch, otherwise it would be a shame. A little support👍

There are many problems with this book, and there are many things that are out of place compared to online books, so it is normal that it is not accepted by the market and even does not have a particularly good reputation. I would like to say that if the author is just for fun, then he can write whatever he wants; if he wants to make a breakthrough in the field of online writing, he still has to think about and summarize the problems of this book. If the author wants to open a new book, he can definitely write another Witcher. In addition, I think the author has aura and potential.

The severe cold of winter is already driving away the bleakness of autumn, and most intelligent creatures have learned to hide in their nests safely during the season when ice and snow are visible. Even the greediest businessman and the most bloodthirsty jackal have all given up their desires at this moment. This is the northeasternmost part of Aedirn, south of the Pontar River, at the foot of the Lomaco Mountains, and the nearest village is several miles away. In this deserted wilderness, there is only a little light coming from a collapsed stone hut. This may be a collapsed church, or a guard tower that has been abandoned for a long time. In any case, it provides travelers with shelter from wind and rain, which makes people grateful. It was very quiet in the hut - even the insects and birds had lost their voices in such weather, there was only the crackling of the fire and the sound of horses rummaging in the turf outside. "... Geralt? You are still awake, right?" A young voice broke the quiet air, "I... Actually I have been thinking about a question..." The young man stopped talking and looked at the white-haired demon hunter meditating beside the fire. White Wolf didn't look back at him, he just opened his eyes. On the other side, the one-eyed elf lying near the fire turned his head and waited for the next step. "I said, you have been active for decades, right..." The young man's tone was obvious and pure curiosity, "Have you gotten older?" The white wolf turned his head slightly, and the one-eyed elf raised his eyebrows. "... I mean, if rigorous training has provided you with knowledge, painful mutation has provided you with strength, and the law of accident has provided you with... Destiny, then what exactly has provided you with souls?" "What do you want to say?" White Wolf finally spoke. His voice was deep and rich, slightly hoarse, and full of magnetism. It was the type that would make a little girl with an Electra complex ascend to heaven on the spot. "I want to say..." The young man turned over and sat up on the blanket, scratching his head and trying to organize his words, "What is your motivation? What has made you get out of bed in the past few decades?" The white-haired demon hunter moved his mouth, but did not make a sound, but fortunately the young man did not seem to be expecting his answer, but continued speaking on his own. "I know that the ultimate ideal of every witcher is to be unemployed, but what about other than that? Vesemir likes to train new people, hoping to one day revive the Wolf School; Lambert likes to have a bad mouth, and maybe he hopes to one day compile a dictionary... What about you? Geralt of Rivia, the blade of the Sword of Destiny, you What do you want to do? " The white-haired demon hunter looked at the fire in front of him, and thought of the other white-haired girl, and what followed..."... Ciri? Yennefer? Or Triss?..." The young man's voice suddenly sounded, interrupting the smell of cloves and gooseberries on the tip of the white wolf's nose. He noticed that the shoulders of the elf opposite shook slightly. "... The mages want the same thing, power, power and fame, and more power, power and fame, no pursuit..." The young man's voice gradually became distressed, "Yennefer wants a family? Triss wants to fall in love? This girl's heart is so cute!" The one-eyed elf sighed inwardly, sat up, and stared at the white-haired demon hunter on the other side of the fire, who had completely turned his head, and the young man he was looking at, praying in his heart that at least one of them could stay calm - rescuing people under the White Wolf Sword is not an easy task, even if he doesn't want to kill anyone. "... And you, Iorveth!" The elf whose name was called had an ominous premonition in his heart. He heard the enthusiasm and confusion in the young man's voice, "Where is the elf? What does the elf want?" As expected... "I'm not talking about the current elf— - The whole world knows what you are thinking about now - I want to ask, what did you want before this? Art? Love? Or you didn't think about anything, just squandering your time and life for hundreds of years, without evolution..." The young people even danced with excitement. The one-eyed elf realized that the white-haired demon hunter's hand was close to the hilt of his sword, so he calmly put his hand on his belt. Then the elf noticed that the witcher's peripheral vision had been staring at himself. He lowered his right hand, and the witcher moved away from his scabbard. The young man on the other side also became quiet after venting. "Sorry, you two," he stared at the jumping flames and said softly, "I'm just, I'm not used to it yet... I just don't want to live to the end and the person who kills me will be myself..." "No, just don't worry. It's a brave thing to do." The white wolf's voice did not rise and fall, and it was easy for people to calm down. His body relaxed and returned to a state suitable for meditation. "I promise that I will be the one to kill you in the end." "And me," the one-eyed elf added. The young man laughed loudly, muttered something cursing and lay down, wrapping himself in a blanket. The elf and the demon hunter exchanged glances briefly, and then returned to their original positions. The time for net suppressing clouds is over.

The author is very good at telling stories, and it is indeed better than Xiaobai's novels. I wonder if he will rush out and change his vest and start a new life. What? You ask me why I rewarded this suspected street kid? Don't ask, just ask because Bixge is here.

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