I Have a Tibetan Martial Arts Building

I feel like the eldest lady of the Zhou family was forced by the author to make things difficult for her. And it's not good for her senses.

This book is far worse than the previous one. 1. The protagonist's semen reaches his head, he sees a woman flirting with another woman, he eats the food in the bowl and looks at the food in the pot. 2. The protagonist's behavior has no purpose, no priority, and is led by others. The main plot in the early stage was revenge, but the protagonist put revenge aside. The conflict in Jindingmen was about to break out, and the protagonist went to other places to engage in martial arts, flirt with girls, and gain reputation. Time in Jindingmen seemed to be frozen, without any change. 3. The protagonist's martial arts configuration and frustration. The author's world view is very poorly set up. All martial arts come from classic novels and have their own factions. This leaves the protagonist with only scraps of martial arts. Once the protagonist uses a well-known martial arts, he will be hunted down by the forces to which the martial arts belongs. A very important and exciting point of online novels is that "I have what others don't have, and I have advantages when others have them", but this book is the opposite.

The author writes very well, I like it very much and support it.

After reading eighty chapters, it was uneventful and uneventful. It looked like a running account. I just learned a lot about Songshan Sword Technique.

Isn't the latest chapter a bit too ridiculous, as if it was written just to keep the story going? So his sister is a master? This is too fake. You are doing this just to be lazy and not want to think of a good plot. I can see that, layman, you are somewhat disappointed.

Come on author, I like this style

The new book feels like it's more than one level worse than the last one. Although the previous book has some flaws, the word "martial arts" is beyond criticism. Martial arts are practiced by oneself, techniques are created by oneself, and strength is gained through constant fighting. In this book, in addition to the secrets at the beginning that you have to find by yourself, the subsequent exercises are automatically optimized and your understanding is automatically increased. Also, the most criticized thing about the previous book was the description of emotions. However, this book is only eight chapters long. They are either loyal beautiful subordinates or beautiful lolita. What on earth do you want to do? There is also the character of the protagonist, which does not require much determination. After all, the protagonist also needs to grow. But you can't just be a second-rate person, right? When he sees a beautiful woman, he goes up to her and flirts with her. I feel sorry for my investment quota.

After reading it in two minutes, should I meditate for ten minutes?

Alas, Yue Jiaonu finally gave it away. . . Green,,,

The author is a shoegazer, I guess. Every book has a heroine who plays a very important role and a supporting character. If this is not well written, it is simply disgusting. . .

The protagonist is too cowardly. He wants to take revenge and wants to join the enemy sect, look for opportunities to fight back, and practice magic skills to kill all the Jinding sect directly? Are you still thinking about giving your daughter away and building relationships to learn martial arts? Nausea

With full expectations for the previous book, I hoped to see the martial arts mythology like "Heavenly Sword" and Xiang Yang again, but after reading dozens of chapters, it was indeed as bloody and poisonous as a newcomer's new book. Forget about recommending anything.

Please stop writing emotional dramas. You are here to make money, not for fun. Just let yourself go.

Has the author's account been sold? It feels like it's too different from the previous book.

The change in the author's writing style is like changing from a reserved Gu Liang to a woman who can't control herself.

It's green! Is Yue Jiaonu, a charming lady like this, sent out in exchange for martial arts? ? ? But the author's writing is getting better and better, with a flavor of the world of thousands of people and different faces, rather than a cookie-cutter upgrade article!

What rubbish. If you can't write emotional scenes, don't write them. You have to write a disgusting pig's foot.

The author writes novels and likes to explain a lot of nonsense. Is it you, the author, who is talking to us readers, or is the protagonist talking to us? For example, the efficiency issue mentioned in this chapter, after explaining it, I still don't understand what you want to express? There are also times when the author will say things like "like how we are in reality" while writing. Every reader has his own definition of the characters in the book. Although the characters are portrayed by the author, you also have your own definition, but you should not forcefully explain so much and have to let the readers recognize your definition. I've seen other authors provide examples like this in their books, but they always briefly mention it and then return to the topic. The author's writing of the book gave me the impression that he only cares about one thing and not the other.

There are too many poisonous points, the protagonist is unusually stupid, the martial arts skills are not good, and the storyline is extremely rubbish! I wanted to write that both the decent and the villains have IQs, but it's a pity that they were all written crookedly! The villain is stupid, the protagonist is stupid, and they can just do it at first. They go to the mountains to become apprentices, but they don't take the time to practice and use their golden fingers. Then the whole little loli starts to play with their IQ, making people say *shit*! It's so rubbish, it makes my head hurt when I read it. I want to read the book even after reading the title and introduction. I want to curse when I read the content. It wastes readers' time and energy!

I just want to say that it is not good to be a human being. In the early stage, there are girls who have troubles. If you have to join a garbage sect and become a dog, you will still be a dog that is run over by people everywhere. The dog has been used to it for a long time and can no longer stand up? Does the martial arts story about grudges and freedom have anything to do with what you wrote? The plot is still old-fashioned

This book disappointed me so much that I haven't even read the public chapters. The first part was pretty good, but when Guo Qing came out, I was disgusted to death. Is this the author of the villain system and the police officer? This account has been sold, I guess. Personally, I don't care about the male protagonist being a philanderer and starting a harem. I like Ji Cha's Asking the Red World very much, but if you don't have the skills and insist on writing a love story that you are not good at, you are asking for trouble. Don't you know how many people scolded you for writing the heroine in your last book? This book exploits its shortcomings and avoids its strong points. No wonder it has lost so much popularity. Most of the readers who support you like you because you are good at describing strong-willed, decisive, and calm-minded protagonists. To be honest, what you are doing now is really disappointing to those of us who have been supporting you since the villain system. It's a pity that one of my favorite authors is no longer here. It's so difficult these days to find an author who fully meets my hobbies like Cuiyu Wenzhaogong. The writing is a bit long and dense, because I am so disappointed with this author, and I have a lot of things to complain about.

Has the author ever thought about why some people make negative comments and don't delete them? I have read 2 books and this one has obviously improved a lot.

Is this the level of a Level 5 author? ! I would rather believe that the account was sold.

What to say about this book: 1 There is no main plot, the protagonist is everywhere causing trouble and seeking death! 2 scumbag men with no bottom line. When they see beautiful women, they go up to tease them. After teasing them, they are irresponsible!

The author's god-level detective is just a hair away from becoming a god. But this one won't work. The author did not summarize the advantages of god-level agents. You see, each of Tiancan Tudou's books is very similar, but they succeeded in the end.

This is the first time I have seen a martial arts drama that can make the male protagonist look like a bitch.

Is Yuejiaonu finally going to give it away? 😓 Wouldn't it be bad to let Bai Xiwen and Qu Dongliu die together?

Hey, let's change the category to romance, I can't stand it anymore

The best book written by this author, I have only read The God of Martial Arts. The other works were so bad that I couldn't stand them. I took them out after looking at the catalog 😂😂

In the martial arts category, layman's writing is pretty good, but it's just not popular 🤔