Heaven Sequence

Hard to swallow. The protagonist is given such a high status from the beginning. He is great at every turn, the source at every turn, and supreme at every turn. It seems like you really want to write about pretentiousness. But where is the core of the protagonist? After a hundred chapters, what experiences did the protagonist have to create him? The protagonist is empty and soft, and the character cannot be established at all. Do you have any personality charm? If you want to write about a great protagonist, there is no problem, but your protagonist must have a core, you must have something special, you must have a distinctive character, and you must be able to stand up. Otherwise, how can you differentiate yourself from other bullshit supporting characters? It's not that the author wants him to be great. The supporting characters say that he is great and noble. Just code and set it up. This kind of realistic nonsense makes no sense. Pretending is not so hard. You have to pretend to be fresh and refined, to be natural, and to make readers immerse themselves in it, instead of making readers feel disgusted. If you want to imitate Wang Li Qiye and be the supreme being who came back from the lost era, then you should honestly exaggerate the glorious past instead of writing about weak and feeble bad guys here. If you want to follow the example of the Dragon Clan, where a poor boy stumbles and grows up in the beginning, then write it in an approachable and approachable way, and reflect everyone's feelings, instead of being like Long Aotian. There are invincible elders above, and there are groups of younger brothers below, hugging left and right, and beautiful women in groups. The author said that you copied it here and copied it there, and stitched it together to create such a four-dimensional image. It has all the elements, but there is no protagonist of your own. You can copy anything, why can't the protagonist also sew someone else's character? Do you think you are so handsome? It doesn't mean that if you put a hot-blooded and relaxed label, you can output it directly without logic or cause and effect like anime. Many fantasy animations do this, but how dare you, a story written purely as a text carrier, not even establish a protagonist, but just force the blood to show off? It really doesn't make sense.

You must finish it, the author. Although I was a little confused in the early stage, the puzzles in the middle stage are revealed step by step. It is still very interesting. Some parts are quite exciting, and there are also some parts that made me cry (maybe my tear point is low). At worst, even if I can't finish writing, I still hope there will be an ending. Seeing others saying that the author wrote this for self-pleasure, it doesn't matter. Even if it is really self-pleasure, I still want to accompany the author to the end. In addition, I will give you a monthly ticket to cheer up ＾0＾~

This is a self-titled work by a mature street-fighting author. This is not Gou Wen, nor is he a coward. This is a protagonist who needs some time to grow up. I don't write about protagonists who are overflowing with the Virgin's heart, nor do I write about pure darkness that is cruel and bloodthirsty. Well, I strive to have at least one million words for this book. I don't want to include any advertisements. It's meaningless. Let's just leave it like that for the results. Furthermore, I delete posts based on my mood because of my frustration. I am willing to accept well-founded suggestions and criticisms, but some things that affect my mood will be deleted without any thought~(￣▽￣~)~ Don't ask. Ask and do whatever you want! (Manual dog head) In addition: This book pays homage to hairy hair a lot, and is mixed with the author's obsession with reading books and watching anime. Sometimes the author will fall into a pretentious and greedy mode when his brain is twitching. [Sequence Path]: Heaven Sequence: Celestial Path (Weather and Meteorology), Celestial Path (Stars Path) Gaia Sequence: Earth and Mountains, Hades, the Ultimate Power Molten Gold Sequence: Alchemy Path, Fire Throne Path Life Sequence: Dusk Path, Life Path (later renamed ) Aether Sequence: Mind Path (Sage Path), Glory Path Abyss Sequence: Return to Ruins Path, Arakawa Path Tentative March 3, 1333 was known as the Day of Destruction. There were a lot of gaps and gaps in the memory of all mankind, and ancient history was "erased" from human memory. This year is also called the Twilight of the Gods, which completely separates the old days from the present world. The [Jedi Heavenly Power] that shrouded the world was broken, and humans trapped in the gods saw the vast world outside the country. After exploring the ruins of the past, humans gradually discovered the sequence path belonging to the gods and took it into their hands. From the original four elements of earth, fire, feng shui, it gradually evolved into the later heaven sequence, Gaia sequence, abyss sequence, and molten gold sequence. After the fifth element was discovered from the ruins of the past, the fifth sequence called the ether sequence was born. In 1833, the World Tree sapling rooted in the north gave Joseph Angela a gift and opened up the sixth sequence-the sequence of life. At the end of the 22nd century, Akunos opened up the Twilight Path of Life Sequence, also known as the Fantasy Beast Path, allowing legendary creatures that only exist in legends to come to the world. (The above is roughly the evolution and formation of the six major sequences) Division of power: [Guixu Haiguo], which is adjacent to the eastern border in the four current realms [Arakawa Osawa] is adjacent to the southern border [Yuyuhai Kingdom] is adjacent to the western border The [Borderless Mountains] adjacent to the northern border (This is the closest overseas empire to the four realms in the world) [Mysterious Realm]: A mysterious world that is only owned by the ethnic groups where [Kings] exist. The core group lives here, and every mysterious realm is an empire. [Kings]: The kings of the lands beyond the borders, each of them rules a huge empire. [Ancient One]: An ancient creature that has awakened from its sleep since the Second Era, or even the First Era. Derivatives: In the only exploration of mankind, the first era was called the Star Era, with the Star Empire claiming to unite the world, and the top of the Stars stood high above the Empire. The second era is called the Age of the Gods. The gods walk around the world and spread their blessings until the arrival of dusk. [The highlights of this book are as follows: Fenggg's Apocalypse, Stealing Stars in September, Dragon Clan... Well, there are many anyway, but there is no plot setting plagiarism. You can watch it with confidence, if it looks like it. Trust me, it just looks like it! (Looking at the sky)]

The introductions to both books are somewhat discouraging. The author, I 🙏, 🤭 don't want to be popular! If this book can reach more than 120 chapters, I will do my best to promote it to you. I personally still like this kind of work very much, and the author, your writing style is really good 👍👍

There are a little bit of dragons and apocalypse predictions. I quite like the world setting, but it was a little confusing in the early stage. It was too much explained at once, but it can actually be suppressed. Come on, author! !

After reading the first few dozen chapters, I felt a bit bored. . . Under the attention of various big bosses and the government, the protagonist doesn't feel that there is any room for development, and after writing dozens of chapters, I don't see any advantages in the protagonist. Instead, there is a girl who pays attention to the protagonist inexplicably, saying that he is pitiful. Is she deliberately trying to write a novel like a dragon? Don't draw tigers instead of anti-dogs

After reading Chapter 20, it felt like a bunch of Riddlers telling riddles.

After reading thirty chapters, I feel that it is very confusing, the narrative technique is not good, and it is a bit confusing. The subject matter is quite novel, but the story is confusing and patchwork. I have no choice but to say goodbye...

Eunuch. . . Don't force yourself,

If a person suddenly has 100 million, he will buy a car, a house, a company, and strive to join the upper class of the pyramid. If a person suddenly has the power of a superior, I don't know what he will do, but he will definitely amplify his will infinitely. Gods will eventually rise to the sky, while mortals will always be buried in the dust. This is human nature.

Enlightenment, non-human limitation, strategy, saint, never fall. But what is the state of kings? There are also natural disasters! Is the throne a level above the rest? What about the gods?

The logic is too messy, and it's not as exciting as being a cool writer. I didn't even figure out who Ji Changan is after reading the first volume.

I can't watch anymore. There are so many personalities, the protagonist is cowardly, what is it about? I really don't have the desire to watch anymore. Of course, the settings are correct. Many of the settings are based on anime.

There's something wrong with the portrayal of the protagonist. Apart from his vague strength, I don't see any shining points in him. It means that he is outstanding in a certain aspect and his presence is not strong.

Although it's a popular one on PC, it's a bit cool, but I heard you can advance! So please cast two votes~~~ I want to revise the introduction, but it seems that the editors are also on spring break (face covering)

This kind of author is really speechless. If the results are not satisfactory, he will write casually. If he doesn't want to write, he will just eunuch and start a new book.

I saw the author's own setting in the comment area, and found that it was really slapped in the face. Has it been replaced? According to the comment section, 1333 was the Twilight of the Gods, so it should have been Chang'an who did it, right? Then the time in the book should be one thousand years after this time. But! What does the year 1136 of the Third Age written in the first chapter of Volume 3 mean? Do you eat it yourself and set it yourself? Then, the author writes many settings in a very complicated manner. At this time, long sentences with many attributive adverbials and complements are used to describe them. If you are not careful, ambiguity will arise. I feel tired after reading it. I think this is a key point that dissuades many people from this book. Reading a novel has to be like reading comprehension, connecting the context and finding the correct meaning of the ambiguous parts of the article. It's very tiring, okay? I really hope that the author can write more short sentences, first express his own language clearly in short language, and then write long sentences. Otherwise, I will write a long sentence for you now without any punctuation. Do you think it will make you tired? Especially when you often confuse the subject and the predicate object in a sentence, and you are unwilling to write more, and add a lot of modifiers in the middle, it will be really tiring! To be honest, if this didn't seem to be such a crazy thing, I wouldn't be able to help but want to give up. In addition, the further I go in this book, the more I feel that my writing skills are failing me. If you really can't continue writing, even if you say you're not a prisoner, you can finish writing the things and pitfalls in this world, and then clearly explain the identity of the protagonist. Otherwise, when you change the map, you go to another world, and then find that that world is just a small one, and there is a bigger one. It is very annoying to go endlessly, especially when the scene is bigger, not only the imagination, but also enough pen power to describe it. I'm really not optimistic about the current writing power.

Come on, I really like this kind of similar book, but maybe I am stupid or read it too fast, and I feel a little confused 🤭

I think the author should write very well, but I think the article is too complicated and I don't want to use my brain, so I didn't understand it.

I have read Chapter 50, the part where the eldest brother came out to confront Gu Sabi. Gone with the Wind, so Gone with the Wind The setting is very large and the author has put a lot of effort into it. But when I read the story, it looked like a paste. It's cloudy, especially when it comes to the male protagonist's secret, wow, that's even worse, stirring it up to death is like looking at cotton candy, it's so empty, it's all blown up. Pile up with various awesome words. Pretending to be mysterious. The author really might as well read Japanese comics and Dragon Clan. No matter how many settings there are, a story is needed. Telling the story well is worse than anything else.

It doesn't feel that refreshing, it doesn't look like that person, so I won't talk about it. It's very depressing, without the ups and downs.

My assessment is no surprise. The fate of this type of protagonist is determined. Although the plot of the protagonist seems very mysterious, readers who have read many such articles can still guess the author's intentions quite easily. At first glance, I think the identity of the protagonist is awesome, but when I think about it more carefully, I find that I am still controlled by fate.

I have only read four chapters, and the protagonist seems to have been arrested by law enforcement more than once. The protagonist is very cowardly, and the protagonist does not seem to be strong. Elephants will not be enslaved by mice.

Okay, I should be almost a eunuch. In two days, they will say that I have this or that disease, or something happened at home or at work. I am familiar with this routine.

I think this setting is okay, but the author is a bit afraid to read it. The eunuch has only one or countless copies

This opening is a routine from ten years ago, but it's awkward to read now.

I'm begging you, last time I didn't update for a few months, this time I updated a few pictures and then stopped for a few days. Just be a human being.

The author probably doesn't quite understand what schizophrenia is and what split personality is. Having a second personality is definitely a split personality. The second personality is a living person independent of the main personality and will not disappear inexplicably. The end of split personality is personality fusion, where multiple people become one.

I think what the author wrote is okay, although there are some problems. That is to say, I look forward to future works~

I read this book several times through different channels. Occasionally, a few times can lead to the author's line of thought to achieve smooth reading. The biggest shortcoming of this book is that the author often thinks that the readers know that there are actually few or even no hints (I want to give the author a kick and help him write a paragraph), causing the plot to sometimes feel like a piece of cake. It is a stumbling block to read and extremely challenging to the reader's level.