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The emotional intertwining of the characters needs to be polished. Traveling to another world, the shock brought by it, Encountering an attack, a life and death situation, the feeling of blood rushing to the forehead and fighting hard, Then it has calmed down. In a different world, a group of people face an unknown future, Will there be conflicts and differences, their various ideas about the future and how to face it, In such a writing style that favors the market, everyone is following a simple and unsophisticated approach. The language and character behavior may not need much polishing, because you can write a lot of supporting characters, and not all of them are necessarily human beings, movie kings, or poisonous people. But the entanglements in it are particularly important and prominent. For example, the most common quarrels, From a literary point of view, it can be said to be the collision of two people's thoughts. If you observe in life, why are there so many people who are born with different horoscopes? The reason for their conflicts and quarrels is rationality or sensibility. What is the starting point and empathy, and what is substituted? R> Let's take your article as an example, I traveled through time, and one person yelled "time travel", and then the monster jumped in the face and everyone panicked. It was really time travel. At this time, various characters reacted, and their expressions changed Now they are determined to go out, and they just killed someone. Under the psychological pressure, they will at least look for self-defense tools, right? Insecticide spray is paired with a lighter, which is a miniature flamethrower, a steel pipe under the bed, which can kill wild dogs when straightened, a screwdriver, and a utility knife. One can make a deep hole when stabbing someone, and one tied with a cloth strip and held in the hand can kill dozens of people. Centimeter Kouzi Wait, wait, etc The plot is generally correct, but the details still need to be polished In the end, it is still a person who never changes from his roots. What everyone is thinking about: How to write more interestingly Look at those big writers, platinum writers, when they write about life and death conflicts and a group of small characters, they may write something funny or something small. Self-mockery, you may also write about the humble but great aspects of the characters, you may also write about ambiguity, their little thoughts, etc. How to write a novel with flavor in various proportions is indeed very critical.