Wizarding World Legends

Recommendation: Read the first three chapters first. In terms of wording, the author needs to review it more. Some words feel very stiff. Then there is the plot, which is the same routine. It is best to write more details and add more content (story, plot, setting, etc.) In the chapters, which will enhance the sensory experience. Then there is the description... Sometimes it feels a bit perfunctory. You can express emotions with objects, which is my most commonly used method. It can not only deepen the reader's impression of the environment, but also allow the reader to feel more deeply about the character's emotions.