Days Spent in Uncle Jiu's World

Brother, I'm here! Write this one well!

Each realm consists of early stage, middle stage, late stage, very late stage, perfect stage, intermediate perfect stage, peak perfect stage, and great perfect stage. This is an old way of writing; is it still used today?

First, the names themselves deterred a group of people; Second, the description of the realms in the first chapter might deter a lot of people. You can't write something original just by changing a name! Uncle Nine's world is based on the Taoist tradition of refining essence into qi, refining qi into spirit, refining spirit into emptiness, and refining emptiness into the Tao!

I dropped it as soon as I saw that the female lead was Ren Tingting.

It's baffling. Even with the chance to refine within the mist, it's suppressed. It acts like a complete idiot, just bragging without any regard for others. Are all the other people pigs? The refining system is powerful, but the person using it is a moron.

The zombie movie protagonists that everyone else writes about are serious, discerning, and upright. Even if they aren't upright, they can still be considered heroes. But the protagonist you write is like a loser. The difference is immediately apparent.

Where do you get the confidence to teach others how to do business? Market research? Have you even researched the characteristics of that era? You know how to choose a good location, so you can snatch the best locations from others? You know how to define your target consumer group, so there will be more wealthy people in Renjia Town? And they'll all go to your coffee shop?

The main character's name is so awkward, I can't stand watching it unless the name is changed.

Congratulations, author! Your protagonist's name has successfully scared me away. Shi Jin, you really know how to come up with names.

Uncle Nine, whose real name is Lin Fengjiao, is a doting father who spoils his disciples.