I Grabbed 999 Abilities

After reading the first few chapters, I feel there is something wrong. I hope the author can explain it. First of all, the protagonist's superpower is very powerful, but it is an ability after all. Why would there be a dialogue similar to that of a system or a third-party manager, such as discovering similar abilities and whether they need to be fused? Shouldn't this be the protagonist himself discovering that the abilities are of the same type, trying to fuse them, and then successfully merging them and giving him a new name? In addition, does the use of abilities require energy consumption or are there any restrictions? If not, then why not quickly and continuously search for and collect abilities, fuse the same abilities, and allow yourself more time to practice powerful abilities, become stronger, and then avenge or heal your sister? But is it an intermittent collection ability that starts slowly?

The subject matter and setting are okay, but the writing style is not very good, and only 3-4 chapters can be counted as one chapter, and the rest are just low word count. Abandoned

What about the method of adding updates after they are put on the shelves?

That's good, I just hope there won't be any eunuchs

I've read almost one hundred and two hundred chapters, and the emotional scenes are so toxic, and the writing is not very good. Space bags have appeared. Why is there no portal power? It's so low every time I appear. And why does the copy power suddenly appear? There's no beginning or end.

I've finished reading it, and overall it's good. However, Lin Xuenai is too abrupt, with no foreshadowing at all. Are you not planning to write a heroine? If the heroine is directly confirmed and it is a single heroine, I believe some people will be dissuaded.

I think that for a self-written novel, the author's plot design is indeed fascinating and has its own characteristics. It is different from the sameness of many novels, which really made my eyes shine. There are definitely shortcomings, but it is definitely an excellent novel.

The explanation for this wave of bad endings is also novel, allowing readers to imagine the subsequent plot. Can you make it better? You want us to make up your own and write interactive novels. You are so speechless when you write such a good plot for others.

The recent plot is hard to describe. In order to advance, the protagonist goes to another world alone, and suddenly a bunch of new characters appear. It feels like reopening a book, which is a bit boring to read. And I have to say that now, when it comes to Yang Xi, it is difficult to imagine the image. From behind the scenes, the readers do not know who he is. They just think that the protagonist is very capable and has a great vest (especially miss Xiao Chenlong who died young). In short, I still hope that there will be more plots related to the verdict. Too many settings also look a bit messy.

This book was very interesting in the early stage, but when it came to the battle, it started to falter. I was convinced. My friends and comrades around me were fighting to the death, and I was paddling next to me. I obviously had the ability to kill the opponent in an instant, so I didn't use it. I just waited for the opponent to use their big moves to kill me. If the protagonist hadn't died earlier, I don't know how many times.

What I'm most looking forward to now is the scene where the twelve zodiac signs appear together

I feel that the protagonist is no different from the heroes of Glacier Brave. I have no regard for the lives of ordinary people. I am not a virgin bitch. I will not want the protagonist to be the savior. If I can't defeat the protagonist, I can even abandon the town. However, the protagonist obviously has the ability to instantly kill the Ryoma and train the frogmen, but he wants the heroes of Lukang City to kill the Ryoma. Fatty died. Although Fatty was not worth saving, if the Dragon Rider killed many ordinary people, you could easily kill the alien beasts. From this, it can be seen that the protagonist ignores the lives of ordinary people. Comparing the two, the protagonist is not even as good as the Glacier Heroes. At least he saved many people for the sake of profit.

People say that my book was delayed by the title. I am here to raise funds for a new title that everyone thinks will make the book popular. You must think carefully and don't make trouble. Otherwise, remember the ID and write it into the book as the villain.

The author's plot rhythm setting is fascinating, but the emotional drama is the real brother. Compared with the plot, if the former is ten points, the latter is less than three points. Even the most basic communication between the "sister control" is almost out of control, almost jumping, the sister's personality is not good, and secondly, she is inexplicably invisible. This book can be compared to "The King, Spare Your Life". I personally think that it is better when the plot is not too exciting and can be read to the top. However, there are too many female supporting characters and some vulgar scenes, that is, there are too many plots of the seven sins that the great books of gods deliberately avoid, and it is easy to lead children to bad things. This is the difference between the author and the veteran. Finally, I want to complain. The introduction can attract a lot of girl fans, but the interaction between the protagonist and the sister and the female supporting character can dissuade most of the readers. The introduction and content are self-contradictory = seeking death and dissuading. Basically, the audience for sister control = single female protagonist = the younger sister will not marry. It is recommended to change the profile or not have a harem. The only criticism of this book is that it has a ten-point plot line paired with a three-point emotional line. It is sweet at first and then bitter, which makes people want to complain more. After all, I'm not a complete noob, so the sense of incongruity is lower with three points of plot line and one point of emotional line. Having said this, don't waste your time, Godhead is still there, this book.

I'm convinced. It's too strong to persuade old bookworms to quit. It gives people a headache watching all the indescribable settings and routines.

The plot and setting are good, and the background is not missing. However, there are still a few points that I feel are not working. 1. I think the author wanted to portray the character "Fan Peng" as "vulgar" and "cheesy". It was a bit stiff due to his lack of skill. 2. The difference in power levels is not very obvious. It can only be seen that "the difference between low-level is not big, but the difference between high-level is huge." 3. There is too little foreshadowing, causing some characters to appear too suddenly, and readers can easily jump out of the plot.

This setting is so speechless. Alien beast processing center, alien power stripping! If you go to work in the processing center! If you work for a year and a half, you will be invincible!

There are too many loopholes in this novel. It's so easy to upgrade your powers, so crazy about killing strange beasts.

Come on Di Da, the water will flow slowly, write slowly, don't rush. I came here from free channels on the Internet, which is embarrassing to say. I am a veteran prostitute. I have no money and like to read books... I have read many works of great masters, and I have to say that most of their works are great. But it was not until a few months ago that I saw your work. I didn't feel that much at first, but after seeing the story of Sihai, I became more and more addicted. However, the good plot and the number of readers were completely unequal. I started to vote for recommendations in the browser, but the accumulation time and time again had no effect. Later, I realized the starting point. Now that I don't have much money, I started subscribing dozens of chapters ago, but now, in addition to subscribing to unread chapters every day, I also subscribe to previous chapters as long as I have money. Maybe this is optional for you. But I still want to say that this work had a great influence on me. I will slowly replenish my subscription now. When I get rich, I will definitely come and give you a reward of 10,000 which I never dared to think of before! (Emm The ten thousand yuan reward is 100 yuan? If it is 10,000 yuan, I may break my promise for a long time, but if it is 100 yuan, it should not be a big problem. After all, the Chinese New Year is coming soon hahaha) Come on Di! !

I feel like this protagonist, if you see a good superpower, no matter whether you are a good person or a bad person, he can forcefully explain that the superpower is for your own good, but it is of no use to you anyway.

To be honest, the introduction of the sister controller in the introduction is pure nonsense. The sister feels like a tool that provides initial skills. At least I didn't see what the protagonist did for the sister. The main plot line is not clear, and the protagonist's behavior style does not match the character. It is not very comfortable to watch.

I'll send you a notice when it's finished. It's over if you don't pay attention. To be honest, it feels like it's unfinished. From more than a hundred chapters to now. I didn't feel like I saw it.

Isn't this a hero academy with a black-robed picket officer?

Fuck, this is not the ending I wanted. Just like the world's top martial artists, all of them died, and none of them died. It's very disappointing and painful! I don't like the endings of many novels, comics, anime, and TV series. It's just so painful. I can't laugh after the ending, and I feel so bad, so painful, and it's a bit unfinished! I can say the ending is good, I can't say it's bad, I'm a little disappointed.

I hope the next book will be in the Majia style, it's too rare to see the Majia style

Has it been adapted into a comic? In fact, I think the writing is very good and the plot has highlights. Now that it has been unfinished for so long, there is nothing I can do about it. I hope the comic can be more perfect.

Compared with other books, our adjudication is still immature. I hope brothers can help think about it and build a adjudication family together! Tag requirements: 1. Humorous 2. Really consistent with the character 3. In line with the trend and creative 4. Full of positive energy! Hope our rulings get better and better!

The plot of this book is still very good. In the early stage, I saw all kinds of pretentiousness in the vest, but now it has become dull for some reason. In fact, the author still has a lot to write, and it should not be finished hastily.

No, it's gone? I'm keeping it. You tell me it's gone? Finished? Woo woo woo (┯_┯) I hope the next one will be similar, okay?

As a bookworm for ten years, I feel that the subject matter of this book is not very novel, but the writing angle is different, and the feeling is also different. From the author's writing point of view, this is a behind-the-scenes novel. Most of these articles will have many female protagonists, or there will be many emotional dramas. As for my personal suggestions, this kind of article It is not suitable to have too many emotional scenes, so I think it will be better in terms of writing if it has a single female protagonist or no female protagonist. For online novels, the most taboo thing is to have many emotional scenes, because when most newcomers write emotional dramas, they tend to write harem novels, so I hope this book has no female protagonist or single female protagonist. Finally, I hope the author can update a few more chapters. Come on, come on, come on!