Pokemon of Konoha

I thought it was funny, but in fact the readers looked like fools.

Isn't this book poisonous? It's a psychic beast that can cast A-level ninjutsu (Pikachu), and then it says that this person will be a big threat in the future and needs to be eliminated? Anyone with normal thinking who encounters this situation will think that this person is a genius and should be cultivated, right? Whenever you meet someone who is awesome, you have to get rid of him. Is this a spy sent by someone else? Very poisonous

It's so belittling of Pokémon, it can even be said to be mindless. Pokémon has the level of the God of Creation (Arzeus). In Naruto, there is at most the founder of the ninjutsu system (Kaguya Otsutsuki), or the founder of the ninja world. Then he said at the beginning that "cute little elves are useless, and they are not like wolf and gray sheep." In short, I couldn't stand it after reading less than 10 chapters. The title and creativity are obviously good...

When I saw Uchiha Shizuku dragging the oil bottle and causing the protagonist to almost die, I gave up. I really don't understand someone who clearly knows that he is holding back, but still insists on deliberately leaning in and hiding to the side to peek. . Isn't that seeking death?

There are many routines in Naruto fan fiction. . . I'm not saying the routine is bad, but I want to mention it. Danzo is definitely not as unscrupulous as most people say. If a genius appears, he will catch him. Do you think that the third generation does not exist? After all, no matter how gentle and kind the third generation behaved. He was able to suppress Danzo for so many years. At least he won't be a fool. Danzo just secretly made some small moves outside. They openly kidnapped people in the village. If you can hide it from the third generation, the third generation really doesn't have to mix it up. And no matter what your reasons are, the third generation is the Hokage of Konoha. You kidnapped someone in Konoha and didn't even say hello to him. What did you take him for? You said you were doing it for the good of the village? Since you are doing it for the good of the village, why can't you tell me? Are you guilty of being a thief? Do you still think of me as Hokage? What's more, if he really turns out to be a genius. Danzo can directly threaten and induce without saying a word. The third generation has long been ignored. . .

It is impossible for Pig, Deer and Butterfly to be separated in different classes

The subject matter is indeed very novel, but the author's skills are too poor, there are a lot of bugs, and there are a lot of poisonous points. It feels like the author has only half-read the story of Naruto and Pokemon.

I was speechless after reading dozens of people who thought it was a good book, but now I am 10 years old and become a super-Tsunade, who has just escaped and opened the kaleidoscope. It's just too poisonous. If Yin Escape could really open the Kaleidoscope, no one would rob the Sharingan. What even Uncle Snake couldn't do, you can do it by directly pouring Yin Escape into your eyes? Self-written article. Farewell

No wonder Boruto ruins the classics so much. It turns out that even the author was replaced. Masashi Kishimoto is so pitiful because he was replaced by others. However, we will not support Boruto. It is garbage. We only support the original Naruto

When I read Chapter 12, I found it a little baffling. He was a bodyguard for no apparent reason, and he was a coward for no apparent reason. Did you, the author, not understand the era and year? This was not the peaceful period in Naruto's early days, so Kakashi let Naruto run wild. Not long after the end of World War I, World War II came. This period was very serious. The school did not teach Naruto to study for 5, 6, 7, or 8 years at that time. Kakashi graduated in one year, and the same period When he graduated in three or four years, he knew that it was a real war academy prepared for war. Kakashi graduated quickly and smoothly. At that time, it was very troublesome for Naruto to graduate early. As for the death of the rope tree, it can be seen that at that time, they were taught how to kill, rather than very few killings like Naruto's period. So author, you might as well write about the Naruto period instead of the Minato period.

As soon as I get started, it's like being in heat and looking at whoever is my wife. Tsk. Not interesting

After seeing the headache, I hope it can be more serious and not everyone becomes the same psychopath after seeing the author's pig feet.

When I see other people having Pokemon, I immediately don't want to look at them. Is this writing about Naruto or do you want to write about Pokemon in Naruto? ? ? An organization suddenly appeared that can use Pokemon. I don't know what the meaning of this is. What's the point of having a system? It's better to just write that the protagonist got the Pokemon from that organization (I haven't seen how that organization got it yet). I'll just say how could the results be bad? It used to be that although it was a bit toxic in the past, you could still watch it, but now no one can watch it anymore. (The above personal opinions are for reference only)

I want to know if there is any unknown relationship between Yamanakamiya and Tsuchimamiya.

In Chapter 6, the protagonist actually felt sympathy for the enemy, and even mocked the Uchiha who came to support him. This is awesome, protagonist. Farewell.

The back part is inexplicable. How many clothes does this book have? Does everyone have the protagonist's golden finger?

When the special ability of the protagonist in the novel is no longer unique, the reader's interest will drop a lot. So I have no interest in this book anymore.

How did it reach level four with such poison?

The front is pretty good, but the back is too yy.

Yamanaka Haiichi's younger brother, four generations at the same time The painting style is good, the plot style is brainless and funny Looking at the outline alone, it is easy and smooth, top-notch! The writing is so-so, and the protagonist is good enough The addition of the Pokémon power system is reasonable But it will clear up the eyes in the later stage? The power system is a bit confusing Although this book is a bit mindless, the more I read it, the more I want to laugh. The more you write in the back, the better! There is no description of facial expressions throughout the whole process, just pouting, frowning, or beady eyes. It feels like it was written in a hurry. Personal opinion on the plot: There is still a lack of daily life to deepen the foundation This plot does not kill the three generations, I always feel that something is missing The plot of the Nine-Tails Rebellion is very bloody The rhythm of the plot in the later period is a bit chaotic, a bit like a snake's tail

From the moment I saw your battery car, you could only walk home 😏

Chapter 2 is really disgusting to me, I'm going to die

I could barely see it at first, but the Sharingan in the back really made me sick. What the hell? The kaleidoscope can't blind me. I really can't stand it if I force it to cheat. Goodbye.

"Trainer Xiaohong" comes to visit,

No, the author has never understood anything about the Naruto timeline.

What on earth is this author thinking? Matt Dai died prematurely, and training without Dai would basically be useless.

I want Pikachu! Does the author send a contract? I have apples and beer

OMG! I can't stand it, I can't stand it!

Why are pig deer butterflies separated

Wu Di! Why is my 999 ability permanently banned! . . I just can't bear to think about it and get angrier.