
Divine Body Warlock
神躯术士
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.3M Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Sword & Sorcery
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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914Fans
524Chapters
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I read Chapter 15 and some directory names. My personal feeling is that it is confusing, logically confusing, background confusing, and descriptively confusing. Let's talk about the logical confusion first. The behavior and fighting of the male protagonist and surrounding supporting characters are like child's play. For example, after the male protagonist gets off the escape pod, the escape pod and the body are left alone? The subsequent battle with the bandits was even more mentally retarded and did not reflect the training he received when he was a guinea pig. The background is confusing. In the first 15 chapters, a bunch of setting words are written. Those useless nouns have no meaning at all. It is like a newborn baby who already understands that he is in the solar system. As for the description, the search for officers on the spaceship, the treatment of the mysterious man at night, and the interpretation of superpowers are all a mess. You may want to set up a foreshadowing, but will your foreshadowing really work? Read it yourself. Can you feel the tension and crisis that the male protagonist feels when he first meets a strange environment? Don't be like a documentary. You are writing a story. You don't need to write down everything that happened during this time period.
Bad review, there is no body touching part. . .