The Striker of the Pitch

Anyone want to make some predictions about Wu Lei's performance in the second half of the season? My prediction is that Wu Lei will score 10 or more goals in La Liga, and 17 or more goals in the season, and Espanyol will successfully avoid relegation. Europa League quarterfinals. Let's leave the Copa del Rey aside for now.

It's well-written, with excellent pacing, and that's about it. In short, it's a very enjoyable read.

In my personal opinion, the match chapters should focus less on inner monologues and more on the action itself. A match isn't just about goals, passes, dribbling, and defense; the coach's offensive and defensive philosophies could also be explored.

I've read your last book too; it was about a plant that was raised to death.

If the author is capable, updating two or three times a day would be very advantageous for a football novel, as many football novels are practically unreadable. Aim for more frequent updates and get featured on the homepage. Updating only once a day makes the plot too slow, and many readers lose interest. The other novel is also good, but the omniscient perspective is too strong.

Just treat it as a side job or hobby. Life is full of disappointments, and things only started to get better for me this year. You're still young, don't put too much pressure on yourself.

I'm a Valencia fan. Valencia wasn't doing too well at that time, barely considered an upper-middle-tier team in La Liga. Since a transfer to a big club is unlikely, and Valencia's attack has weakened after losing Villa, could you go play for Valencia for a few years and help improve their performance? When you go, the owner will be of Chinese descent, Mr. Lim. Will he extend an invitation to you, a Chinese player? 🥺

Author, can't you just keep each paragraph simple and get straight to the point? Why do you have to break up sentences with commas? I don't think you're trying to pad your word count; some commas are completely unnecessary. Some sentences can be written smoothly without commas. Of course, I can't. This is just my personal feeling; some paragraphs have awkward pauses that make them uncomfortable to read. I wonder if anyone else feels this way!

Keep it up, I'll give you recommendation votes every day from now on.

It's very well written. You wrote it according to your own requirements. Since you're in the sports category, it's different from other categories. If you were to write it in the comments section, this book would be ruined. So your own ideas are the most important.