Grand Wizard William in Harry Potter

The last few chapters have been inexplicably poisonous, right? Snape killed the protagonist's entire family, and the protagonist crazily targeted Snape, and even used other people's childhood experiences of being bullied at school to laugh at others? Interesting? Even if Snape was a bit mean as a teacher, he never felt sorry for his students. The protagonist group was originally their own demons, and they were becoming more and more reasonable? Is it fun to laugh at other people's experiences of being bullied at school when they were young? Interesting? Did the protagonist get a sense of accomplishment from this? I couldn't see the meaning of this plot at all. It seemed that the protagonist was a mean villain? I didn't dare to take responsibility for doing disgusting things in secret, but I went too far and made fun of other people's childhood. It's extremely disgusting and despicable!

Can you add a surname to the protagonist? Germans always add a surname to their first name or a middle name plus a surname. For example, Friedrich, Wilhelm, and Nietzsche are the first names. Friedrich is the first name, Wilhelm is the middle name, and Nietzsche is the last name. Nobles add Feng before the last name. Of course, according to the legal policy after World War II, nobility are not allowed to add Feng. The last name of the nobles is basically the fief. The first name basically comes from ancient Germanic mythology. Friedrich is the hero in Germanic mythology, and the middle name comes from Christianity.

As long as the heroine is not Hermione, anything can be said

The Ravenclaw male protagonist setting is great. Hermione should also be lured to Ravenclaw to become a hawk. That would definitely be interesting.

I beg the heroine Luna_(:з∠)_Look at Luna, she looks so pretty, she still has white hair, she only needs red eyes to attack the Chinese people.

To be honest, the aristocratic background began to change in the wand shop, and then Hermione described it in her mind on the train, feeling that this persona had become a piece of silk wrapped in aristocratic skin. Hermione was licking it to the death and spending a lot of money to set it off, repeating to the readers again and again that the facial features were exquisite, handsome, rich, and she could use magic spells to spread her charm everywhere like a love saint. It was too showy and a bit disgusting. I have read books such as The Flower and the Sword, France, and the Lord of Mysteries. The characters of the aristocrats are based on language, behavior and some decent details to give readers a very natural feeling. This is how aristocrats should be. I hope the author can change it a little.

The author overexaggerates the mysterious side of Crusu, making the whole book uninteresting. There are no records of ancient pure-blood families with such high power? If there is a record, Voldemort is nothing, so what are the benefits of following him at the risk of his own life? Don't have the brains to become a Death Eater? As the most powerful wizard on the surface, Lao Deng must know? So why get a Harry because of a little Tom? As the department that rules the entire British wizarding world, the Ministry of Magic gathers most of the elites. How can you not know about Crusu? So what about Voldemort? The reason why Harry's world is difficult to write is because the entire power system revolves around Harry's growth, and its apex is very limited, which seriously hinders the author's performance. The author lowered the power system, and the protagonist was overconfident, and raised the power system. The entire Harry's world collapsed, the plot was meaningless, and the most basic substitution was lost.

A very strange poisonous point The author often emphasizes the need to find a way to prevent the biased Lao Deng from going crazy and giving the Academy Cup to Gryffindor. I emphasized it three times from about the time I entered school to the end of the semester in Chapter 90. Then there was a chapter where he suddenly said, forget it, let it go. I will definitely not let it go next semester. I was shocked. Since I didn't plan to change the original work, why did I keep emphasizing on scores and finding ways to change it? In the end, I suddenly gave in for no apparent reason. It is simply force-feeding shit to the readers. . Since you have no plans, don't keep laying the groundwork.

It's poisonous, you have to do these plots where people suddenly know all the secrets

Chapter 1: The Nobel Prize for Magic should be changed quickly. This name is really speechless.

If your brain is sick, join the old days, waste time, try the poison and give up the book. I suggest book friends to enter the trap with caution, read the comments, and refuse to try the poison.

Why did the author create such an organization? Out of place.

The writing is good. It's rare to find a book that suits my taste. I hope the author can work hard to finish it. There are too many hp fans 😁. In addition, it would be better if there is a single heroine named Hermione😄

I agree with the abduction of Hermione 2333 I have seen The Iron Triangle Dismantled before. The plot is quite interesting, but it is a pity that the update speed is touching.

I have tried the drug, and I personally think this book is pretty good (not as good as the kneeling and licking trio). The female protagonist is either Hermione, or the scene between the male protagonist and Snape is too bad. Why can't the male protagonist get along with Snape? If you are a fan of Professor Snape, I do not recommend watching it. You will be so angry that you will vomit blood. Also, the male protagonist is a bit too friendly towards his gay friends, which is not realistic. Overall good

Why does the protagonist have to go to Hogwarts? The protagonist is Ellie? She likes to seek excitement so much? Where to go where there is danger?

The Cthulhu element is also added to the setting. Are you afraid of writing it down?

Is this book going to end faster and no one will say anything about it for ten days?