Hunter's Buried One

I like the character of the protagonist very much, so I vote for it every month and push it. Sent, come on

Hunters have a huge background, and writing about them is difficult. Hunter battles are all battles of IQ.

Hunter is a very popular comic book. Compared to Naruto and Pirates, its power system has not collapsed yet. This is because the author has rigorous settings and designed exciting fights, wits plots and unbridled imagination within a certain range. This is the charm of Hunter. The essence of this is concentrated in the battle process of those with telekinesis abilities. In the Sky Arena chapter, Hanashi Douluo, an enhanced type, developed a clone, which requires the ability to manifest, operate, and release three types of abilities. In the end, Hisoka killed him like a toy. He could not directly gather energy to strengthen the attack like Gonjie or Wojin, because human memory space is limited (this was mentioned after Hisoka and Hanashi Douluang). It has become a dead rule that each person in the full-time hunter has only one core skill. Wojin and Nobunaga are both of the strengthening type. Wojin chose to strengthen himself and attack directly by gathering energy, while Nobunaga chose to strengthen his sword to make it close to the level of killing everything, while his body was not strengthened. Hisoka turned his energy into something like oak. Gum is the same as chewing gum, while Maggie turns her energy into threads, President Nitro is the strongest in the world, but his trick is to transform into a embodied Guanyin, and Kate can manifest nine weapons, but at its core it is just the crazy clown. Each of them has its own basic core ability, and the changing tricks are related to each other based on the core ability. For example, if you want to have the same abilities as One Piece Doflamingo, you must have at least a 100% degree of strengthening, operating, releasing, and materializing, but its core ability is only to control after it appears. Each person has only one or a few limited moves. This is the author's limitation on his own work, and it is also the characteristic of the full-time hunter. This article first asked the protagonist to develop the vibration ability, then realized a gourd that absorbs life force, and finally got the ability to flash infinitely in a circle. Seeing this, I knew that the protagonist would continue to have other tricks. The environment of this book is getting farther and farther away from the hunter. The author's idea is very good. The ability of the deceased can be inherited to fully utilize the power of each system. However, if we want to continue to improve it, for example, inheriting the advantages of the deceased's abilities and producing a move that can perfectly utilize the entire system, it will be more rigorous. However, it takes too much energy to perfect the structure of a world. Wouldn't it be better for the author to write an original book if he has that time? Why write fan fiction? After all, fan authors generate electricity with love, which makes us anime lovers satisfied. In the end, my speech is just to provide the author with opinions and possible directions for improvement. I also hope that the author can provide us with more interesting stories. If this paragraph is useful, I am very happy. If I feel that I made a mistake, it doesn't matter if I delete it.

Can the name be nicer?

Let me give you some thoughts. A friend said before that most of the hunter battles are IQ battles, so the second-hand player must be the second-hand player. However, there must be a few outstanding enemy characters, otherwise the protagonist will crush them all the way and it will not be that interesting. It's not exciting if you fight face to face with back and forth. It's interesting if you have to make many twists and turns and win with difficulty. The protagonist can't lose for a few games, and there are only a few dangerous situations. Without some psychological and intelligence games, and no extreme counterattack, it's not that interesting. If you look at the comics, Hisoka and Chrollo have been fighting openly and secretly from the beginning, with many reversals to the final battle. They are all cleverly arranged logically in line with the characters. The difference in strength between the two is not obvious. Hisoka has to break up the brigade if he wants to fight, and create a situation where Chrollo must fight, but in the end the protagonist group and He had a conflict, and the duel had to be postponed to the arena. Chrollo used several seemingly rubbish telekinesis abilities to set up a sure-kill situation in a specific environment, and surrounded and killed Hisoka. The various confusing actions and Hisoka's Jedi counterattack were very interesting. It was brain-burning to watch, but it was fun enough. In the end, Hisoka comes back from the dead. This kind of dark and bright plot leaves readers with a lingering aftertaste after being shocked. So it is difficult to write about hunters, but if you do, you should try your best to write it. After all, everyone pursues perfection, you and I both. I remember that there was a fan who re-developed Hisoka's telekinesis ability by changing the friction coefficient. Hisoka's speed skyrocketed. It was really shocking when I first saw it, because it was really unexpected, but it was within a reasonable range. The simpler the telekinesis ability is, the more interesting the tricks can be, and the more satisfying the brain-burning pleasure it brings to people. Just like playing games, I am happy when I show off the bells and whistles within the scope of the game mechanics. Otherwise, why would so many people choose Yasuo?

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It's boring. He looked like a human at first, and then he was just the second member of the Spider Group. When I first watched the anime and introduced the spiders, my first thought was that they were the Japanese invaders of China. From then on, I hated the idiots of the Spider Group and the Pink Spider Group.

It's rare to find a good-looking hunter fan, the author, come on 👍👍

The protagonist is very stupid, a psychopath who develops this suicidal tendency.

I'll donate a supporting role, pirate, you can use it when doing hydrography: Name: Cimarron of the Night Gender: Male Age: 22 years old Race: Yellow-skinned race Height: 1.75 Meters Weight: 80kg Blood type: O Occupation: Animal breeder Hobbies: Throwing things, listening to rock music Habits: Eat carrots with every meal Psychic system: Release system Total amount of telekinetic energy: Peak of second-rate telepathic ability Circular range: 30 meters (maximum accuracy), 100 meters (maximum sensing distance) Psychic ability: air cannon (bombing area) Air cannon: Within a circular range (within a precise range), up to one hundred air cannons with the same power as ordinary missiles can be controlled. After the air cannon is fired, it flies in a straight line and is not affected by gravity.             ，，（），，，， The air cannon thrown can be charged to increase the explosive power, rate of fire and range. The maximum charge can consume half of the mind energy.             ：，，，（，，，） (The cooldown time of this ultimate move is one week, and ordinary air cannons can be used normally during the cooldown period.)

It's okay sincerely, but it's difficult to write about a hunter. Come on, look forward to it

BUG Chapter 12 The Jade Gourd of Life Essence has restrictions on explaining it to living beings, but explaining it to Plov can be half-truth and half-false, which is contradictory to the restrictions.

I've only read three chapters, my teammates are dead, and the Wolf Gang is coming. I don't know if I can beat them, but I can't beat them. If I'm so confident, I might as well write an enhancement system. It's so good that I don't know how to complain about it.

I feel that the author is too young and not suitable to write about hunters. It would be better to write about One Piece first and then about hunters.

The protagonist's reading ability is a bit complicated, and today's readers prefer straightforward and easy-to-understand stories It is recommended that the author unify the next few chapters, and the restrictive oath can be added or removed.

To be honest, I really want to read a Hunter fanfic with Nephipete as the heroine. I haven't read this one yet.

🐷The combat effectiveness is very confusing!

Not bad, the plot is smooth and the characters are quite vivid

There are very few Hunter fans, and even fewer of them are of high quality. This book is of good quality

Beautiful and beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

I'm temporarily thinking about the role, should the pirates adopt it? Name: Shilok Fran, 23 years old, 1.8 Meters tall and 85Kg in weight. Psychic operation system, the total amount of telepathic energy is second-rate, Manipulation of telepathic ability puppets, injecting telekinesis power into objects to control them. This ability cannot be used on living creatures. The more telepathy power is injected, the greater the power. Originally I wanted to add constraints and oaths to solve shortcomings or enhance abilities But then I thought about it, it's not the main character, it's just a sidekick anyway.

Good afternoon, open it, catching up

To be honest, there are too many abilities, and if you don't talk about the bells and whistles, it's mainly a waste of energy. Chrollo has many abilities because he only needs to use them and does not need to develop them, but the protagonist cannot. Because the protagonist has to develop and train each ability by himself, which will undoubtedly consume a lot of time and energy. In fact, one or two types of abilities are enough. There is no point in having more, because no matter what the ability is, it will actually involve several categories.

Come on, write well. My favorite full-time hunter! More. Give me some extra juice!

The writing is very good, why don't you write it again? The most difficult thing for a hunter is imagination, not only the telekinesis ability but also the dark continent.

The author should add telekinesis ability to the protagonist. The ability of "Word Leaf Infinite Deception" uses deceit and lies as media, and asks questions (lying) to others through the caster. Once the person being asked denies the question (questions the other party's lie), the lie will become reality. It is a telekinesis technique that can distort reality, reverse cause and effect, and make lies come true.

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