My Little Sister Is Number One in the World

The post was deleted by mistake, please repost to explain clearly. I personally suggest that the author reduce the interaction between siblings and focus on the plot. In the future, as the audience expands, everything will be available in the forest, and it will be easy to be targeted by various trolls. They say that the author is stupid after reading Japanese comics, and it smells like a Japanese light novel. They catch the author's mistakes and output them for a while, and finally create a crazy rhythm in the book review area. Some people say that what I am saying here is completely wrong. This novel is originally about a girl who is obsessed with it. What else is there to read if there is less interaction between brother and sister? Can't tell if I'm really stupid or fishing? Looking for a sense of presence? Are you just a hammer? You control your sister but don't write about your sister? Indeed, this book is about the theme of girl control + immortality. Most readers are still attracted by this. The author has a great imagination and can come up with such an idea. ——Hey! And this kind of novel? Is my sister the golden finger? It feels good, I will collect one first. There are many readers with this mentality, and I am also the same. Otherwise, I would not be active in this chapter of this book. Friends who often read this chapter should have seen it often. What's going on here? What's going on? Do you want to watch your favorite author's novels being trolled to death and remain indifferent? Scold with those people? Wasn't God born to me as a keyboard warrior, and how could I spout about the eternal night? Fighting against a bunch of ZZs doesn't lower your IQ. Then make a post and suggest that the author minimize the risks in this future, and then one or two people take it out of context and set the pace, and then a group of people come up and beat up the lost dog. (What the hell, so many people are criticizing him, I will also step in.) I am the spokesperson for the novel. The rhythm of the plot is not very good now, and the plot is also advancing. How about writing a brother-sister interaction for you in Zhangzhang? The protagonist stays at home with his sister every day to increase his relationship. After staying at home for seventeen or eight years, he achieves great success and conquers all the wastelands to dominate the world. The book is finished. If there is no plot in the novel, then what is the point of reading it? emm, after reading it carefully from beginning to end, hey! Isn't this just a piece of writing about cultivating immortals? This novel is not the kind of girl-control novel I have read in the past. If you take it seriously, you will lose. Thank you to those who have persisted in reading this far. I hope we will not regret it when we reach the end of the road. If this book doesn't collapse, it will definitely become a hit. Poyin. Jpg

Come on, this book is perfect now. The author should relax and don't worry about the plot. You have to understand that this book is not a mindless yy harem novel, and not so many noobs will like it. Secondly, the character of the protagonist is also very likable, except for one thing. If you can avenge yourself on the spot, don't overdo it. The plot like Juexian is pretty good, but the comparison in terms of strength is a little blurry. I don't have a clear understanding of the protagonist's strength. After all, the protagonist has too many tricks up his sleeve, and we readers don't know either. Last point, the positioning issue. This book was destined to be a niche text from the beginning, either because readers prefer it (girl fans), or they are old readers who are not taboo about meat and vegetables. Compared with business literature, the audience will not be too wide. It will also bring a lot of criticism. The author should take this path and maintain his original intention. After all, I think that writing this type of novel must first be a work that the author likes, thinks and is interested in. Come on! So far, I don't think it will be a rush. If the plot doesn't jump out later, at least the results won't be too bad.

If this book doesn't catch on, it will definitely become a hit

If my sister gets married, she will turn from pink to bad in minutes!

The subject (title of the book) is younger sister, but you are not an orthopedic surgeon, so what's the point of writing like this? Isn't this a blatant scammer coming in to slaughter her😱

It's not easy to find a high-quality book in Qidian, a place where no-brained and cool articles have become popular, so don't complain about any bad points. Everyone has their own opinions, and I didn't find any bad points in this book. The author must stick to his own ideas when writing the article, and try not to accept too many suggestions from the audience. Although I am personally a girl-controller, I prefer articles in which the protagonist is weak or has no strength at all, but has extremely powerful supporting abilities. Well, although I try not to consider other people's suggestions, I still expressed my thoughts 😆

The safety of my sister has been threatened, but the protagonist, a girl-controller, is still cowardly? If you continue to be cowardly, your character will collapse and I'll tell you.

If you don't write about girls well, what kind of immortality will you be cultivating all day long? ? ? Ask yourself how you came up with this name and introduction. Ask yourself seriously, why did we click in? ? ? Don't lie to yourself, be a good girl and control your writing, don't talk about things that are not fancy. It's 2020, are you still cultivating immortality? After 996 blessings, do you still dare to become an immortal? Do you really think you are immortal? (refinement🙂)

I added sister control to the relationship between the characters. If you want to see sister control, please like it and let the author see the will of our sister control party.

Dapeng talks about fire books, come on