What Should I Do If I Travel Through Time and Become Maitreya?

It's good to have a bit of a strong character at the beginning, but then you start traveling through modern times... The combat power is a mystery, and the style is out of the ordinary. A Buddhist should be a high monk, but he doesn't reflect his character. In short, it's quite strange.

First of all, this book is very well written, but like another book friend said, I feel that it is not very good to classify this book as a derivative fan, which will narrow the path of the book. After all, there are many netizens who have read InuYasha, and many people are deeply impressed by InuYasha, but InuYasha is different from Naruto One Piece. In fact, I think this book is a bit like Time Travel Ning Caichen's book. That book is honestly pretty good among fan rebirth novels, and its classification is Xianxia. Therefore, I think that if the author does not completely chew up the plot, as long as he mentions traveling to Inuyasha in the introduction and classifying it as a derivative fan, the effect will be similar. Changing the classification to Xianxia will have better development prospects.

This book shouldn't be placed in a fanfic, it should just be a cultivation novel.

The wind cave was given by Naraku. Where have all the monsters that were sucked away gone? Naraku can also swallow monsters and become stronger. I always thought that the Wind Cave sucking monsters was working for Naraku.

Author, are you here to embarrass yourself? I wanted to continue reading, but when I saw your comments, I knew you didn't understand anything and you still wanted to make money from the Chinese people? You say Japanese monsters are stronger than Chinese monsters? This is your logic, right? Then prepare to accept my questions. 1. Do Japanese monsters have any orthodox training methods? Second, what do Japanese monsters have besides accumulating demonic power? Three, do you think China's thousand-year-old demon is not as good as Japan's century-old demon? Fourth, does China's thousand-year-old demon practice magic? Five, you said that Sesshomaru is a rich second generation, so he is better than a genius, right? Sixth, you said that the second generation of rich people don't need to study, and they can learn arithmetic like one, two, and three, and they are better than graduate students at Peking University. Are they awesome? There is no logic in this horse racing. There was still hope. I read a few chapters with a hungry heart, and I was instantly overwhelmed and furious. You can't lick Japan like this if you lick a dog without thinking, right? Did you know that at many anime exhibitions in Japan, those old monsters are basically from China? Japanese people are self-aware. It's a good thing for you, you lick it without thinking when you come up. China's thousand-year-old demon is not as good as Japan's century-old demon. Just because the century-old little demon is the second generation demon? Did you know that all monsters in China are graduate students? Without the cultivation method, you cannot become a demon at all. You actually said that a graduate student or postdoctoral fellow is inferior to a rich second generation who only knows arithmetic? Logically, where do you see the Japanese century-old monster being stronger than the Chinese thousand-year-old monster? Is it because when you watch anime and movies, the impact of the images makes you develop this mindless licking personality? Haven't you seen A Chinese Ghost Story, how big is the battle scene with the old monster from Montenegro? Also, Japanese monsters do not practice magic arts, so Japanese monsters cannot attack the soul. Japanese monsters rely on monster power to extend their lifespan and do not have any magic skills. A monster that even ghosts cannot touch. You actually said that you are more powerful than the local snakes in the underworld of China? I admire your licking, stick out your tongue, and lick you well. I couldn't bear it anymore, so I climbed up first. The Japanese are self-aware and know that the monsters in their country are grassroots and grass-roots teams. You actually wrote that China's graduate students are Caotai team. Japan's Caotai team is written as the rich second generation. They can only count one plus one, and they are better than China's graduate students. China's top graduates have become grass-roots teams? I'm done with it, I'm done with it.

The wind cave is invincible, and even the most poisonous and miasmatic things cannot be withstood. Are Chinese monsters worse than this? What kind of evil spirit, corpse poison, ghost energy, demon poison, tree demon grandma, thousand-year centipede spirit, are these things worse? The old demon of Montenegro, the giant demon whose centipede spirit can swallow up the fate of the country, is not as good as Sesshomaru, a three-hundred-year-old dog demon.

I feel that the beginning of this book is good and has a bit of a fantasy feel, but when it comes to the time travel to Hong Kong movie, there are really problems. First of all, the protagonist no longer has the feeling of profound Buddhism, wisdom and foolishness that was created in the previous Liao Zhai story. Secondly, the combat power is getting weaker and weaker as the writing goes on. The few brats in the Hong Kong movie can tease the protagonist. When I return to Inuyasha, I feel a little bit like before. Did the author hire someone to ghostwrite the Hong Kong movie? The style is too different.

Since you are writing about Maitreya, you should write about a monk properly, and don't talk about those messy power systems, conquering demons, and merits to increase strength. Isn't it good for him? He can't even open the golden finger, and the ability of pig's feet is really messy. The Warcraft you wrote is very thoughtful, but also written in a mess. The high-demon world does not improve strength, does not study extraordinary things, and actually plays politics. How can it attract readers? The author has never thought about what readers want to see from beginning to end, and how to attract readers. No wonder the results are so poor.

The protagonist's strength is always a mystery. He first fights the tree demon, the old black mountain demon, Pudu Cihang and other big villains, and then fights various modern ghosts. Another 50-50

The protagonist's character is the same at the beginning, the same in modern times, and the same as Inuyasha. Does he have schizophrenia?

Two poisonous points, first, the ancient line was in danger twice, and would have died if someone hadn't saved him Second, traveling to Hong Kong, being caught as a stowaway, fighting wits with a few ghosts, and acting with a group of teammates with low IQs, why are you talking about Hong Kong? How can the monsters in Inuyasha's world have such magical fighting methods, as well as glutinous rice and salt?

I always feel that the protagonist's combat power is very erratic. He even defeated the super demon national master who devoured the country's destiny, but he frequently suffered defeat when encountering several small bosses. The special debut is to kill the tree demon grandma, a thousand-year-old demon. Then he overturned the boss of the underworld, Black Mountain Old Demon. As a result, if you hit Naraku now, you tell me that even A can break the defense, and no one is hurt, which is a bit painful. No, under the unified world view, are mainland monsters so good? How did that moth manage to wreak havoc in Japan after being beaten to it? Japanese monsters are so awesome. Why are you leaving Japan alone? Why not go to the Central Plains Flower World to play? I don't mean to say this to be critical, I just feel that the male protagonist has been busy for so long, why is he still making soy sauce? He is usually very reliable, but he overturns when big things happen.

This book is quite well written, but it received too much criticism. Wouldn't the author give up on it? In fact, it is not unacceptable to write that the mysterious power of foreign countries is stronger than that of China, as long as a reasonable explanation is given. It's boring to just talk about how ancient and mysterious China is, and how foreign mysterious forces are scum in front of China.

I have written so much about Buddhist scriptures and my state of mind, but in the end I am not a monk. Sword Immortal? It feels quite weird, as if I watched the beginning of the movie and thought it was a war movie, but turned out to be an idol movie. Surprised

. These plots are like a jumbled puzzle piece.

I just re-watched Spirited Away. The author had better write this down. After all, My Neighbor Totoro, you already wrote about Cat Bus.

Image! That's it, maybe the expression should be kinder and not so wild

How can anyone be willing to teach the protagonist if his understanding is so poor? But modern society is easier to deal with. The protagonist should know about lost classics of Buddhism and the like! Swap with him

By the way, have you read the book Reincarnation of Inuyasha? A batch of h.

Where is the group? I want to meet the author! !

In A Chinese Ghost Story, I fight against the old monster of Montenegro, kill the Centipede Spirit alone, a courteous young monk with great Buddhist teachings, and then travel to Lin Zhengying's world, where I can't kill the weakest zombie, but I still have to be the same as the original cast, careless, timid, like a bald rogue, it's incomprehensible!

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This book was okay at the beginning, but I can give it up now that it's modern times.

Finished? Don't you want to continue traveling?

The writing is okay, but don't write about the comparison of the combat power of Chinese and foreign monsters. It's very poisonous. After all, the settings are different. If you really want to compare, the old monster of Montenegro is a bug in Inuyasha, an invincible existence.

What are you writing about? It's poisonous, I really can't stand it anymore

Looking at the character setting, there is no female protagonist in this book?

The writing is very good, the research on Buddhism is in-depth and professional.

I suggest the author take a look at "The Days of Being a Dog in the Demon Warring States Period", a fine product.

Not to mention character, when it comes to the Hong Kong plot, it's just verbal, and the characters all feel like NPCs.