Start with a Door

After reading more than ten chapters of this book, I couldn't bear it and died of poison. If you are like me, you are a person who pays special attention to the details of books. So I don't recommend you to watch it, it's a bit poisonous.

According to the silent majority of online novels, less than 1% of the people in the book review area have spoken, and most people are quite satisfied. If it were changed based on book reviews, it would offend most readers. Therefore, if an opinion appears more than a hundred times, it can be ignored.

I think after the Luo Tian Dajiao, the protagonist should go to Biyou Village first and help Ma Xianhong complete the self-cultivation furnace before the temporary workers attack. The Shen Ji Bai Lian can be said to be the best to obtain among the eight magical skills. In the original work, if the temporary workers had arrived a few days late, Ma Xianhong's self-cultivation furnace would have been completed.

There is basically no plot, it all relies on creativity. The most important test of whether a Pirates fanfic is good or not is the battle on top. The same person under one person should be Luo Tian Dajiao, because the main character in the back has such a strong sense of presence! Anyway... Just hold on for a few more chapters

After reading the first 3 chapters, a woman suddenly appeared and wanted to take the protagonist as her disciple. It was a bit poisonous, and she left. I hope the author will write better and better in the future (it is best to change the first few chapters, it is too poisonous)

Come on Qiqi🌹

Praise! Please update! I can see what the author meant! This is to make the protagonist quickly become a capable person and follow the plot direction, rather than a routine of practicing, upgrading and changing maps!

The protagonist is an orthodox Taoist Quanzhen sect! Go and recognize your ancestors? The protagonists who worship other people are incompatible with them! The protagonist belongs to Tianwai Sanshu and most people would never dare to accept the protagonist ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ

(￣Д￣)ﾉ! The protagonist's status is about to reach the sky!!!! This is a reenactment of Confucius seeking Taoism from Lao Tzu! ヽ(`Д´)ﾉThe protagonist is about to harvest a world of Taoist luck! 666

To be honest, Dazen Temple totally deserved it. In the original work, Dazen Temple was too rich and no ruler would allow it without production. This was also the root cause of Sanwu's destruction of Buddhism.

Mr. Hou. Not Mr. Hou! There is an extra vertical line in the middle

I feel like the author's writing about emotions is very cliched. It would be fine if he writes about love well, but is it really good to forcefully lower Chan Yinsha's rationality? Xiao Sang in "The Lord of the World" is so well written. If the author is not good at writing emotional dramas, it is better not to touch it. Otherwise, I am afraid that this article will become a harem stallion + a brainless idiot, and finally become a romantic drama about harem house fighting. I have all kinds of worries. I hope the author will write it carefully and never kill himself or escape into the palace.

I haven't read the Yangshen novels. I hope the author can add more plots to the Chinese comics.

The protagonist is too indifferent and has a low sense of presence

Is this a hint that the ending is going to end?ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ

It seems a bit frustrating. The power system is completely unequal. If Qin Shi is 3, one person is 4, and Yang Shen is 6, it feels very inconsistent. Are human immortals such rubbish?

Does the protagonist not know the world under one person? Why don't I feel like he doesn't try to get good things, such as the Eight Magic Skills?

I have a copy of "The Origin of Qi Ti" here that is destined for you. It is only sold for 998, the quantity is limited, first come first served.

The power systems in the various worlds here are too confusing, and there is no comparison.

The power system is chaotic, and the protagonist is a bit of a virgin

It's confusing and illogical, and it's so awkward to watch that I couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters.

It feels like the main character deliberately wrote the romance to show it to girls. The entire text feels like the IQ is below a negative number. It's like trying to make up the word count or being out of touch with the main character. I don't really like this type of genre. I feel bad when I look at it. The subject matter was actually pretty good, but the writing turned out to be rubbish.

Is it because I read it too casually or because your writing is too messy😥😥

Damn it, you broke the chapter a lot, you broke more than a dozen chapters out of 60. Awesome

It has been several years, and I don't know if the author can read it, but there are some contents that I still want to mention. The time rift that appeared when Wang Ye defeated Ma Xianhong was not due to the ability of the three orbs. The three orbs have a very strong protective function, but there is an upper limit. Originally, everyone worked together to break the three orbs, but when Wang Ye saw that Ma Xianhong was in danger of life (he broke the three orbs directly, and everyone's combined efforts were enough to kill the horse), he turned on the Luanjin Tuo, which prevented everyone from hitting the horse.

This way, no one should be reading your novel.

What's the new book?(`Д´)ﾉ

Forehead! ,,, Am I dying?

The author thinks that the Laotian Master in "Yang Shen" is probably similar in strength to the ghosts and immortals of several tribulations?

When I saw Chapter 35, I thought it was about twins, so I almost gave up.