Come On, My Host Is a Bit of a Buddha

Want to cry...

The first story was very depressing and uncomfortable to watch. All the villains have "evil" written clearly on their heads. The heroine described by the author behaves calmly, is kind to those who are useful to her, and is ruthless towards enemies. She is too rational and calm, which inevitably seems to lack humanity.

A very nice fast-travel novel, very interesting (○｀ε´○)

Nice! I really like this kind of heroine

Friends, how about I give you some suggestions. 1. Because the introduction says that the protagonist is a bit of a Buddha, so what is a Buddha? Personally, I think Buddha has the absolute ability to protect himself and ignores those who are vulnerable to you as opponents. Of course, if the opponents are of equal strength, you can try to communicate first, and the world will benefit. If you still want to fight against each other, then you can fight to the death (this refers to the later stage when you are strong). Here is a movie called Quick Travel: The Happy Way. Personally, I feel that the character is quite good. 2. For teachers, soldiers, scholars and other people who appear online who are supported and encouraged by the country, try to describe the positive points. Of course, they are also human beings and can have their own shortcomings and shortcomings. For example, the teacher in the first world could write that he took the profit and tried to get the protagonist right, but when he saw the protagonist doing many wonderful questions, firstly out of admiration (he is the god of learning after all), and secondly out of the teacher's own obligation, he could be nicer to the protagonist, but overall he was still hesitant and still trying to get right. Or after being caught by the police, you can ask worried questions first and then argue. Or it's not right. 3 In each world, as mentioned at the beginning, there are various characters, so there can be two main lines, but both main lines must be related to the protagonist. Of course, they cannot overwhelm the protagonist and focus on the protagonist. Speaking of which, when traveling in different worlds, I recommend the book "Get Out", of course, don't learn "Big Muscle Master". 4 Personally, I prefer the heroine stream, that is, relying on myself (if the author has a predetermined plan, you can do it as you want. From now on, although it is a quick time travel, the description of the characters can be fuller, not too much. In addition to the heroine, one or two in a world is almost enough (of course, if you can't do it in the front, you can take your time later, don't rush). I personally recommend the cultivation chat group. 5 If there is any writing in the later stage, When you go to a plane with a high martial arts value, you can first read the fantasy, martial arts, and fairy tales written by the great gods, and try your best to exaggerate the atmosphere. I think it is best not to have too high martial arts, in the medium and low martial arts (not like Baili Qingfeng), that is to say, the golden elixir, Yuan Ying, third level of transformation of gods, martial arts masters, grand masters, and gods. Try not to be around the big guys in the Mahayana stage, otherwise it will be difficult to write about it later. Of course, it can also be achieved by cultivating to Mahayana step by step in various planes. 6 Before each battle, there must be some development time. After all, the big guys are very busy and have no time to develop the former protagonist. Only the second generation with bad temperament will fight. But without the big guys fighting, even if the little guys fight each other, it will not be exaggerated. 7 In the plane of high martial arts, the stronger the person, the better his character, the more interested he is, and the less willing to do it himself. Therefore, the more powerful the person, the harder it is to fight. This can be exaggerated. And when the protagonist progresses, the villain will also progress, but not as fast as the protagonist. The ratio can be 3 or 2 realms for the protagonist at the beginning, and about one and a half for the villain. Later, when the strength is high, the villain can be slower than the lower-level (weak) villain (after all, the golden elixir breakthrough and the foundation breakthrough are two different things. But it should be faster than the same level, or slower. It is not much slower, but the combat power is higher (note that if the enemy is very good, he will definitely be able to challenge across levels). There must be not only a combat power breakthrough between the big realms. , The level of life should be higher. That's it. I hope the author can accept it and correct it bit by bit, hoping to make it more refined.

Dear author ~ I'm here to make suggestions again! (You won't bore me...) Actually, it's still a problem with my eyes. I found that the author likes to use sentences such as a flash of light in the eyes, but if it is used in large quantities, it will seem a bit cumbersome. If possible, I hope the author can use more action descriptions, such as "The lowered eyelids blocked the slightly crazy eyes, tight and pale The lip, due to excessive exertion, oozed a little bright red, like the only color on the white paper, which was dazzling. The protruding joints and ferocious veins on the hand, and her slightly trembling body. "What happened to me?" I think this paragraph is acceptable, if the author doesn't dislike it. My own level is not very high, and there may be some things that are inappropriate. If there are other experts who can correct me, I warmly welcome them! Sorry for causing trouble to you!

Does this look good?😠

After seeing some things the author wrote about doctors, I have something to say I don't know that there are mostly good doctors and bad doctors, but I believe there are more good doctors. But as far as my personal situation is concerned, a relative of mine had leukemia misdiagnosed twice by two hospitals, once for gastric cancer, and once for I don't know what it was? There is another classmate who has an uncomfortable stomach. He spent more than 3,000 yuan to be sent to the hospital for check-ups. Later, he had to continue infusion. He was given the infusion all night and couldn't bear it. He recovered one day after he came back. The hospital checked that he had intestinal obstruction. I want to believe that the hospital played a role before, and I also want to believe the doctor. It's much better, but I haven't encountered it, heard it, or seen it. That kind of good doctor said this. I've only seen it on TV. Others around me are normal. You pay to be hospitalized. If you can't afford it, you wait to die. This is what you should do. I understand, but the angel in white, I'm sorry, I didn't notice it around me.

I just sent the contract today, is there anyone else who wants to invest? This book is cute and obedient, so your investment will never fail~ Probably not (whispering)

Author Jun, when you write the size of space, you should write it in cubes. Square is the area.

The third plane is poisonous, very poisonous. I don't know what the author's point is in setting up a heroine from such a plane. In the end, everyone died, so what's the point of turning the heroine into a dark character? She was frustrated all the way to the end. It was clear that the superpower was very strong, and so was Meow, who could have taken action long ago. In the end, everyone around the heroine died, and the last cat also died. The host may have sacrificed his soul, merits, or the chance of reincarnation, but you can still pass the mission just like this. It's really...

This book will be on the shelves on March 1st, and it will be updated at that time, so if you want to fatten up the little cutie, you can kill it before the end of the month, otherwise the previous chapters will be charged. In addition, I expected the end of this plane to be in chapter forty-five, and there are still nine chapters to go. There are still five chapters to go by the end of the month. When No. 1 Is released, if the fifth chapter is released, it will end this dimension. Well, if the subscription is too miserable, I will guarantee two updates and not add any more~ (Chao Xiaosheng: After all, I don't have to save the manuscript, it's all naked updates, useless... And a little bit lazy.)

Dear author, please work harder. As long as you work hard, you can become famous if you keep writing like this. But if you update it once a week, no matter how much you like the book, you will be persuaded to quit it. You can't wait at all, so you will read other books. How will you retain readers? ! Not to mention that you haven't posted an update even once, this, this, this... Hey, I won't talk about it anymore, I'll give you a monthly pass, so add some fuel.

I invested, if you dare to stop updating, I will come to see you with my knife!

I really like her. Although Ling Ye is cold to others at first and her words are a bit rude, but for a person who doesn't want to live, he is a bit extreme and his logical thinking method is good. Recommended

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

It's almost the end of the month, and I don't know how the author is doing 🙂