The Emperor of Romance Theory Crookedly Reached the Peak

I read the first dozens of chapters, and there were a lot of criticisms. I also read other people's book reviews. To be honest, I couldn't help it anymore, so I came out to post a complaint. This book has fully implemented the nonsensical style from the beginning. Everything happens suddenly and inexplicably. The writing is filled with a lot of useless psychological activities, which breaks the already incoherent plot into a mess. The author has a great imagination and a lot of ideas, but it may be that he lacks writing power, which makes the writing very fragmentary. I was a little tired reading every thought he came up with. In addition, there seems to be no embellishment in the dialogues between the characters, they are very straightforward and direct, which makes me look very pale and feel that each character is a little lacking in IQ. . . When I read it carefully, it really made me sleepy (I actually fell asleep while watching it intermittently). It was full of flaws. Now I am posting a complaint but I don't know where to start and where to end. However, I have written a lot and I won't go on. I can only say that I hope the author can improve his writing skills, at least to the average level of Liangcao. Com, so that he can show his ideas to our readers clearly and interestingly. That's all.

Others have talked about a lot of advantages, so I won't follow the crowd and talk about some of the shortcomings I feel! First, the main line is not very clear and is a bit trivial. The first few dozen chapters have the most serious problems. After reading it, I felt a bit messy. The later chapters are slightly better and there is progress! Second, what can I say about the character description? The description is not profound, and there are not many supporting characters with online IQ. It is not very successful, and the emotional line is not very well created. Maybe the author is not very good at it. Third, there are too many descriptions of psychological activities, the language is relatively straightforward, and the article has poor coherence. It fails to capture the reader's psychology. It's a bit embarrassing to grasp it better! Generally speaking, the author's writing skills need to be strengthened. The story is a good story and the ideas are very novel, but it is a bit difficult to control. I hope the author can hone his writing skills and write better and better!

Lin Lin was defrauded of a huge amount of money, but on his way home, it was suddenly detected that his high-energy mental body had reached the standard and was bound to a strange thing. I thought that since I had passed through the book, I was going to have a scene where a domineering president fell in love with me, but I was told that when I absorbed the power of space, my body was damaged and I turned into a piao inexplicably. Good guy, the author's imagination is not yours. It's so strange, but so strange that you can't imagine, hahahaha... In order to survive, we, Lin Lin, relied on our own little tricks to successfully recognize a very lucky cousin. We thought that we would reach the top of life from then on Isn't it a dream? Do you believe it? I don't believe it... Lin Lin: "Don't believe it? I'll make you believe it by pressing my head!"

After reading this book, it is simply one of the best nonsensical books in Dian Niang. Watching Lin Ling change her music inexplicably every day. See if she comes up with new ideas every day, and she has some new ideas in her mind that she wants to put into practice. The author's creativity and unconstrained ideas brought me great surprise. The only drawback is that there are too many settings in the early stage, and I was a little confused for a while. I wish the author better and better as he writes.

I came across this book on the recommendation of a friend. This is the first fast-traveling book I have read. I am new to it, so I am still a little used to it. I started reading it a few days ago. When I first saw the beginning, I had a different feeling. It felt like the process was a bit slow, and maybe the author was worried that the readers would not understand it well, so the writing was relatively detailed. However, maybe the control ability in the early stage was not too strong, and it also gave people a fragmented feeling. I haven't read the rest of it yet, but at first glance I thought the writing style was brisk and joyful. I have collected it and can follow it slowly. I hope the author can write better and better!

The author, come and give me a boost! I have read five chapters, and I have read less of the quick time travel. This is the first book that I read seriously for 10 minutes. Let me talk about the advantages first. The heroine's character is very cute, and she is a character that I like. In addition, the author's language is also very interesting, and some paragraphs are very well designed~ The disadvantage is that it takes almost 3 chapters to explain the quick time travel system, which is easy for impatient readers to give up. In addition, I still have a question, how does the heroine trigger this system? I started to wear it as soon as I felt it, which made me a little confused~ Also, there are many words that do not need to be abbreviated. For example, the dragon roars hahaha. Some people may not understand the above~ What is the author?

It was a dark and stormy night for a month, and your uncle accidentally got impulsive~ Hahaha (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia, successfully hooked up with the fake cousin, a billionaire, the son of luck, who doesn't love (⑉°з°)-♡~ The witty start is good No one else has the ability to hang things up. After eating this rainbow dough, you will be an organized person, go ahead, Pippi Shrimp~ Sleep to unlock knowledge points, bind with blood~ Only you can't think of it, there is no way you can't write it~ If you don't have talent, what should you do if you are not as good as a genius? Just wipe out all the geniuses, this operation is completely the villain's character wow⊙ω⊙~ Cultivation as an immortal is not as good as farming, and cultivation as an immortal is not as good as raising pigs~ Be smart and clever, look at the cleverness or not~ Tuan Ge floated over: I can screw you (; 一_一)~ The most miserable heroine in history, is it okay to have a southeastern branch? ╮(￣▽￣)╭? What, not satisfied? Cut branches ~ step on branches ~ break branches ~ Not only being blacklisted by the system, but also being dissected by the scientific research madman~ Although it has a bumpy start, I believe that witty spirit will become more and more courageous with repeated defeats, with repeated defeats, the soul is immortal, and the struggle will not stop, drifting farther and farther~further~far~ witty spirit (｡ò ∀ ó｡), please hug the lap of the son of luck and be as cool as you like~ For those of you who haven't entered the pit yet, I believe Xiaotuo, this article is definitely a funny one ٩(๑^o^๑)۶～ Such a joyful fast-traveling article, what are you waiting for, I'm waiting for you in the pit (∂ω∂)~

Go through the story quickly, the first chapter will make you breathless. System binding should not come too suddenly, people are not ready yet! 🤭 Maybe only time travel can satisfy the dreams of us ordinary people! Can Lin Ling realize her ideals in another world? What surprises me most is the author's unusual structure, refreshing paragraph arrangement, and full two-dimensional style of painting, which are all my favorites. This is a good and imaginative book, worth reading! 🌹

The setting at the beginning is very rigorous. There are 123 problems encountered and 123 solutions. The protagonist can think when encountering problems. It is not a brainless novel. The foreshadowing was carefully thought out, and the characters are more fleshed out. Already invested (no.86), Already subscribed for the first support, looking forward to the follow-up, keep up the good work!

Let me write one first~ Although I am not good at writing book reviews (๑´∀`๑) This book is different from the previous ones that are quick to travel, torture and slap in the face, etc. It is refreshing to read, and the imagination is very big~ And it is worthy of being a science student, with all kinds of scientific knowledge mixed, and there is no lack of philosophy in the imagination~ The characters in the book are also very distinct, Xiao Lingling, Xiao Yiyi, An Yan, the magical dripping cloud flow... And there are many good things. What super-personalized friends, they are all interesting (๑˃̵ᴗ˂̵)👍 The only thing that makes me want to complain is the emotional scene. It is said that it is affected by the author's great emotions, but I am so impatient 😂 Lingling said: Xiao Yiyi is such a good man, you don't want me to take him away~ 😜 I look forward to the day when the heroine understands love~ Let's write these first~ Come on, come on~ I'll take good care of you~

I took a look at the female channel recommended by a friend and found that the writing style is generally good. The author also explained the problem of cluttered articles. The writing style still needs to be improved_(:_‖∠)_ I hope you can work hard!

1. Pay attention to segmentation. 2. The characters are well drawn, but I feel like there are a bit too many words. (Personal opinion) 3. Pay attention to... The use of punctuation marks, where they are suitable and where they are not suitable (I personally find it a bit confusing). 4. I can't stand it anymore. Long paragraphs give me a headache. I personally don't like paragraphs that are too long. 5. The storyline is quite interesting, so... Come on ٩( 'ω' ) Let's encourage each other

Oops, I don't know if I can read this post, but I still have to write it~ I've been thinking about writing something. In fact, I've been feeling a bit low recently and I've been busy. I realized that time is tight and I haven't been able to write a book review for Lin Ling~ There are more than 300 chapters. Anyone who has written a book will understand the hard work and discomfort of persisting day and night. However, our Lin Ling has also grown up under Da Da's writing style. I like Da Da's writing style, which is relaxed and free. People always feel better when watching it, and will be filled with emotions along the way. Da Da, come on. Every time you write, it is actually a kind of progress. You can still see that Da Da Da is very attentive to showing us a different fast-traveling novel. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Writing it one by one like a table feels like an argumentative essay. Many background aspects can be put into the preface, or some character discussions! It's a bit unnecessary to point out some specific time points. The author can keep them and put them in the book, just like drawing with auxiliary lines, but the auxiliary lines have not been processed! When reading novels, I personally feel that I still want a sense of immersion, taking on the role of the protagonist, and then exploring the world bit by bit! Instead of asking the protagonist to tell me what should be done here, and then what the protagonist will do! The one at the end of the chapter can be used as a memorabilia orz! However, the progress is still visible to the naked eye, because it was revised later, and it feels like a fragmentation! Just my personal opinion, another long one is under review, I guess it won't work tonight!

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Thank you Mrs. Kinoshita~~

This day was a rare leisure weekend. Lin Ling started playing gongs and drums early in the morning with great interest. "You'd better give a suitable reason." An Yan said with her hands on her hips fiercely. "Yanyan, you haven't had sex with Yunliu for a long time!" Lin Ling said flatteringly. Looking at Lin Ling's fully armed appearance, Yunliu immediately struck and said: "We can cultivate relationships here, there is no need to go out specially." "This feeling is so different, I don't care, the four of us will go play together today!" Lin Ling said roguely. "Did you grab some group buying coupons?" Xiao Yi looked like he had seen through everything. "No!" Lin Ling said proudly that she was not so easily seen through. But then she added, "A new self-service restaurant has opened nearby. Let's exercise first, and then go there to kill everyone." Lin Ling looked like he was going to make the boss poor. "Oh, come on, you three." As he said that, Yunliu wanted to go back to his room. Originally it was nothing to eat at a buffet, but the exercise Lin Ling mentioned made him quite concerned. He always felt that it would be very frustrating. "Yunliu, I found a very good candied haws shop a few days ago, and there are many kinds." Lin Ling squinted her eyes and smiled evilly. "Silly girl, do you think you can get rid of me with a few bunches of candied haws on a stick?" Yunliu raised his eyebrows. "That shop also makes candy figures. The kind that spin in circles and draw prizes." Lin Ling said happily. "Who doesn't know this thing, but sometimes it's good to appreciate ordinary people doing some quality things." Yunliu said, looking like he was getting ready to go. Seeing this, what else do An Yan and Xiao Yi have to say? Of course I will sacrifice my life to accompany the gentleman. And it turns out that women are really talented in talking nonsense. Lin Ling said to exercise well and spend half a day just shopping. Fortunately, the work of carrying things is naturally done by Xiao Yi, and Yunliu is only responsible for concentrating on tasting his beloved candied haws. Originally, Xiao Yi naturally had no objection to the matter of taking things, but the question was, what did the huge single dog food in his hand mean? Looking at the joking glances coming from all directions, Xiao Yi's face turned expressionless. No matter what others say, he doesn't admit it. An Yan and Lin Ling, who were walking at the front, held hands affectionately, not knowing what they wanted to buy. The store changed from store to store, and the milk tea in their hands changed from cup to cup, but except for the extra large bag of single dog food, they didn't buy anything else. "Don't you want to buy something?" Finally, Xiao Yi couldn't help but ask. To be continued~~

Dangdang needs emergency surgery and needs to recover for half a month after the operation. During the training period, I cannot update on time, please forgive me! You can also cheer for Dangdang under this post!

The character I like is different, and that's "Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow If anyone knows this person's name, please raise your hand! 😜 At first I thought it was a crybaby, but the more I read it, the more I liked it. It likes to cling to the protagonist in all kinds of cute ways, and is an indispensable supporting character in this book. Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu... I'm not crying, I just like you! 😍

Characters My favorite character is Yunliu. Although he is a supporting character, he has a heart for scientific research and is also a financial backer. Compared with other characters, this person is not only talented but also rich. He is a character as important as the protagonist.

This is so hard work! Thank you all for your support!

I like the heroine Lin Ling, she is cunning, cute, smart, and can act coquettishly and cutely, which is very realistic. ☆ﾐ(O*･ω･)ﾉ The heroine is so cute that I want to take her home and raise her. ꉂꉂ◟(˃᷄ꇴ˂᷅ ૂ๑)༡л̵ʱªʱª✧ I like this novel. The writing style of the novel is very good, and people are hooked without realizing it. The plot design is also quite good, cleverly avoiding embarrassment. The content of the book is quite innovative, and it is different from the previous ones in the same genre. It has its own style. The article has a full sense of tension and immersion.

It's a pity that as a ten-year-old fan (here's the key point), I like Lin Ling! She does all kinds of nonsensical pranks in the book, and Xiao Yi and Yunliu come to help her. Bring me joy! Thank you also for your hard work, Mr. Dang, for allowing my happiness to continue. You still have to work hard →_→ It's the winter solstice, don't forget to eat dumplings!

Oops, the author is jealous 🤭, send another one Solemnly declare: The author is also very beautiful, really, I have seen the photos 😁

The management is so cool, the people are beautiful, and the heart is even more beautiful

Good afternoon to the beautiful and witty little spirit🌹🌹