One Piece: I Have a Breathing Technique

Can the protagonist change his name? The name Lin Xi has a particularly strong sense of violation in this kind of fan fiction. Many people like me left immediately after seeing this kind of name. This has nothing to do with the writing style and setting, but because I have read too many of this type of writing. When I see the protagonist pretending to be cool or fighting, a Chinese name suddenly appears. The sense of dissonance is like taking a hot bath in winter and suddenly having a basin of cold water poured over me. One thing that One Piece brings to us that cannot be ignored is its worldview. Background, language, theme! The name is something that cannot be ignored in the background. For Haimi, who has been chasing him for many years, it is so inconsistent to have a Chinese name suddenly appear in this world with a Western background. Because the impression it gives us is more Western.

If you are over 2 meters tall, you will have no sense of reality. 185-190 Is the most perfect figure! By the way, the protagonist is about the same age as Luffy, right? I hope you won't rob the crew. There's no point in robbing the crew. Recruit your own original crew.

This is a bit like the Seven Deadly Sins. Meliodas is equal to Captain Lin Yi, who represents anger, and Ben, who is guilty of the sin of greed, is also immortal.

Only more than 150,000 words, updates are guaranteed, and there will be more and more votes. People nowadays are most afraid of sudden

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What strength does the protagonist have now?

Breathwork? The one who slays ghosts? If so, it feels very weak. . .

Can the author finish the topic of boating in the next picture? Seeing so many photos are topical, all related to ships, and it seems that only one episode is updated a day. There have been no updates in the past few days. It's not that there are two more episodes to be updated. Anyway, there are very few these days. I hope you can update more.

I suggest you update more, one chapter is too little!

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง!

The name of your protagonist is really losing fans

The beginning is too exaggerated. Write about the advantages of the protagonist. What is the beginning?

Can the author design a plot? It is to let the protagonist destroy the Celestial Dragons in the later stage. This race, when watching One Piece, feels that the Celestial Dragons are stupid and stupid. I was very unhappy watching the Celestial Dragons at night. People who have watched One Piece should not like the Celestial Dragons very much, unless they travel to the Celestial Dragon race. By the way, the author wants to say one thing, can you add another skill to the protagonist? The protagonist only has one breathing technique, which isn't very strong. Even if the protagonist creates his own breathing technique, it's still a good technique! You can set the talent of the protagonist to be a little stronger, and then let the protagonist create a skill by himself. For example, the ruthless empress in Zhe Tian. The sky-swallowing demon skill he created is very strong, but it was not very strong at the beginning. It became like that when he perfected it one by one. So, you let the protagonist create a very ordinary skill using the breathing method as a guide. In the later stage, when he ascends to the advanced world, he can make this skill more awesome.

I feel a bit awkward and don't like it, so goodbye (ー_ー)!!

How did you come up with such a retarded name for Big Thunder Breathing Technique? The Breathing Technique of Thunder is just the Breathing Technique of Thunder. If you want to express the difference, it would sound better if you add a word change at the end.

Author, I would like to ask, what kind of fruit does that little loli eat? To be able to make a giant look like a little lolita, it still depends on the appearance. If you want to have a body like that little lolita and a face like an uncle, I felt like vomiting that day!

If you want a crew member, I will write one. Occupation: Boatman, scientist Name: Dr. Becasis Origin: Descendant of the Last Kingdom, a member of the Bega Punk tribe. A victim who escaped from a science unit accident. Fruit: Mechanical fruit, ability, can refer to Iron Man, Doctor Octopus and other scientific figures. For awakening, you can refer to Transformers' 1 fire, which can transform the machine, and 2, the source bomb, which can change the material ability. Mechanical nemesis.