
Linyuan Trip
临渊行
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First AnniversaryWalking across the abyss is like walking on thin ice
The first anniversary of "Journey to the Abyss" is already halfway through the plot. What impressed me most was the values conveyed in the text, "Walking into the abyss is like walking on thin ice." When Qiu Shuijing wanted to protect Yuan Shuo from being invaded by other countries, every step he took to transform a powerful country was not to take steps against the abyss. Under the abyss is a pile of withered bones, above the abyss is the Yuanshuo family pulling on the crumbling Qiu Shuijing, and even the emperor is pushing it from behind. However, Qiu Shuijing took root at his feet and sang a song of change on the moon. He sang it sonorously and powerfully, and it was soul-stirring! The scene I wrote is still vivid in my mind, and the first anniversary has arrived as scheduled. I wish all book friends of "Lin Yuan Xing" to go up to the abyss and step on the moon and sing loudly!
[First Anniversary] Congratulations on Linyuan's first anniversary
In the blink of an eye, Lin Yuan Xingcong is about to celebrate his first birthday. Since it was uploaded on December 15th last year, to today, it has reached 2.5 Million words (this number is really a coincidence). On average, the number of updates per day is about 6,000 to 7,000 words. Zhuda is still as steady as ever. In fact, a lot of things happened this year, from the second child to Zhuda's welcome to the little daughter, some business trips, illness, etc. Many times, I saw people telling Zhuda not to ask for leave to take a rest. Don't be in a hurry for a few days. Maybe sometimes, it will be delayed or delayed due to some things, but I think the average of 6,900 words per day is enough to prove the diligence and hard work of this author. So sometimes, if you don't see the update at the time of the update, please don't worry. Look at the end of the chapter in the previous few days. Generally, there are any arrangements that may affect the update. Zhu Dadu will tell you in advance. If not, then it probably happened suddenly and there is no time to say it. Please trust Zhu Da's character. In the early days of Zhu Da, it should have been a fanfic written at the beginning. It was probably too old. I just found an interview description like this. On March 28, 2008, Zhuda uploaded the first chapter of "Rebirth of Journey to the West" on Qidian. The results of Journey to the West were pretty good, but the results of the subsequent books were not so satisfactory, including Throne of the Barbarian and The Unfinished Water Margin. Later, Zhuda also tried to open a small account (for example, check out Xianlu Xingluo, the author's bookstore). Being the only one in the world should be a turning point in Zhu Da's writing career. "Heaven moves vigorously, and a gentleman strives to constantly strive for self-improvement." This is probably a more suitable description of the life of a handsome man. "The ancestors are not worthy of law, and the way of heaven is not worthy of fear" is the core that runs through Emperor Zun. The Supreme Humanity is like an epic of revival, and the Shepherd expresses that "the way of the saint is no different from the daily use of the common people." The selfishness of the Saobao is to take care of himself, while the leader's divine dynasty is to benefit the world. The burden of disasters is the clarion call of revival, and the fungus carries the banner of reform. And I am catching up in the middle period of Humanity. At that time, I was still an ignorant senior in high school. I joined the group when Mu Shen opened the book (so, if you say that Emperor of Humanity knew me even earlier, you got the wrong person.). Now, I have been working for more than a year, and the group friends I have met have changed one after another. Sometimes they occasionally bubble up and evoke memories on the spot. I really feel that the years have really flown by. It's the first anniversary of Linyuan, and Linyuan's story is still going on. I hope, I hope Zhu Da's story gets better and better. You are still here, and the Divine Dynasty is still here. PS: Can you give me a more serious role next time? Wei Yong will not mention it. Why do I show up as a city in this book (turning the table), otherwise I will show it to you, wow!
[First Anniversary] It is not a sin to look up at the sky.
Looking up at the sky is not a sin, it is my favorite sentence in "Lin Yuan Xing". Su Yun just raised his head and glanced at the sky before falling into darkness. However, he did not obey the destiny. He did not choose the window, but bravely opened the door without fear. The light returned to the abyss, lighting up the sky and the scenery in front of Su Yun's gate. Only when the dragon raises its head and is not afraid of the depth of the sky can it fly freely. Only when the trickle raises its head and is not afraid of the vastness of the sea can it flow far across the sea. Flowers raise their heads and are not afraid of the ruthlessness of the season, so that they can bloom in spring. For the scenery in front of the door and for the beam of light in the abyss, it is not a sin for us to look up at the sky.
"Studying medicine cannot save Yuan Shuo," said a person from Yuan Shuo who did not want to be named.
Easter Egg Chapter [Shuofang City]
If you have a certain MC foundation, you can work together. After all, it is a big project. It is really difficult for me to persist in doing this one person, one city.
Compare your feelings to the characters every day
[Shuofang] 22. Are you willing to follow me into the devil? !
At the end of Wu Dynasty, officials were corrupt and harsh government was rampant. The people were starved of food and corpses were scattered everywhere. The world has been suffering for a long time, and rebellions are gradually rising. The emperor is busy suppressing the rebellions, and it is difficult to take care of the beginning and the end. Shuo had an enemy from the north, Hu Qiang, who took the opportunity to take one hundred thousand troops and attack Quantai City, the throat of the northern border. The Hu people's soldiers and horses are tyrannical, and one person is as brave as ten. It took two days to send troops to defeat Quantai City, and three days to capture the ancient river. The trend of going south is unstoppable. By the end of the month, half of Yuanshuo was taken. The emperor was speechless when he heard the report. All the ministers were so frightened that they could not stand. They almost wanted to fall down and their backs were wet with sweat. The emperor's voice was hoarse: "If you have any good suggestions, please ask me!" For a long time, no one came up with any suggestions. The emperor sighed: "That's it, that's it. The people who deserve to perish, and the country that deserves to perish. These people..." Before he finished speaking, the emperor burst into tears and was speechless. In a city called Shuofang, in the front hall of the Marquis Mansion, dozens of generals were standing in neat rows in cold armor, silently. The leader of the line was not angry and proud, he looked around with tiger eyes, and his voice was like a soldier's steel: "Nowadays, civil strife is everywhere, the people are suffering, and the barbarians are showing off their cruelty, looting and killing endlessly. In the near future, Shuofang will come. If we cherish our lives, Shuofang will not survive, and Yuanshuo will not survive! All our compatriots will be dead souls! Our wives and children will not be able to escape the humiliation! I don't want to. I have been waiting here for a long time, so I want to go north to meet the enemy! Although I know that it is difficult to go back, I know that I will die if I go north! I want to teach the barbarians that there are people in Yuan Shuo who are not afraid of death! I will not force you to stay. If you don't want to go with me, you can leave on your own. " Zuolie, the leader, took two steps forward, bowed and clasped his fists: "We are willing to go with the general, and we also want to taste whether the barbarian flesh and blood is delicious! If it is delicious, when the general leads us back in victory, he will cut one hundred thousand catties of barbarian meat and divide it among the people! So that the people can know what pork tastes like!" Everyone laughed loudly: "Go together, go together! Eat meat, eat meat!" The general laughed and scolded: "It's full of nonsense!" It was night, the generals said goodbye to their wives and children, gathered their subordinates, and waited for orders. At dawn, the whistle blows. The order has arrived, go north to meet the enemy! Shuofang's soldiers, more than 20,000 strong, left the city silently, with no one looking back. Night, deep. After marching for two days, the enemy camped hundreds of miles in front. The general summoned all the soldiers in front of the tent and climbed up to look around. "Tonight, when we attack the enemy camp at night, there will be a hard fight. The enemy is twice as big as us, and if we fight recklessly, we will definitely be defeated! I have a formation, which I learned when I was young. However, this formation is cruel and harmful to the peace of the world, so it has never been shown to others. This time is different from the past. Only with the help of this formation, can we have a chance to win!" "This formation is called the Demonic Entrapment Formation. It consists of a huge black iron coffin with thousands of meteorite iron chains. The people in the main formation need to be at a higher level than Yuan Dong to be able to exert their power. Each of the thousands of chains locks one person, and is connected with the black coffin of the main formation to form one. Once the formation is formed, one person will be hit, and the harm will be equally divided among thousands of people! If the enemy does not have someone with extraordinary strength, you will be almost immortal! It is beneficial! It is bound to be harmful! Once the body is bound, it will be difficult to break free! Even if the body is dead, there will be no reincarnation! This array is very harmful to the world and is contrary to ethics. If it were not for the powerful enemy, I would never sacrifice it! Please tell me the benefits and harms, should I use it or not? In front of the tent, the flags are flying. "Use! Use! Use!" "I swear to kill all the barbarians!" The general stopped talking and waved his hand with eighteen black coffins falling in front of the formation. The officers and men were stunned. There were too few coffins but too many people to use them all. The general said: "I need two thousand people who will not fall behind in the battle to be our vanguard and paralyze the barbarians. Who among you is willing?" After saying this, he pulled a main formation chain and tied it around his waist, and all the soldiers grabbed the chain. "Brother Wang! How can you grab my chain?!" "Hu Si, you are the vanguard, you still have a chance of reincarnation! Don't be confused!" "You bitch! I don't care about bullshit reincarnation! Brothers in this life, I haven't done enough! So what if I don't enter reincarnation! Brother is here! I am happy!" "You bitch! Don't talk nonsense! Reincarnation with peace of mind! I will entrust my descendants to you!" ... Eighteen magic trap formations were formed in an instant, and the remaining soldiers who failed to grab the chains cried out: "I don't want reincarnation! I only want brothers!" Everyone tied the chains, laughing and comforting them. The crying gradually stopped, and everyone stopped talking, looking quietly to the north, just waiting for the child's time! At dawn, Human was defeated in Pingcheng, with more than ten thousand corpses abandoned. Liyuan went to the upper border and was beheaded, and the five trapped demonic formations were released! Four days later, they were defeated by Suiling City again, with more than ten thousand corpses abandoned, and the three trapped demonic formations were released! " Twenty days later, barbarian reinforcements arrived at Quantai City and fought a decisive battle in Quantai City. At this time, there is no one alive under the general's command, and there is no more pain! More and more tyrannical! Quantai City, recovered! The barbarians fled north! Yuan Shuo is saved! There are only four Demonic Trap Arrays left! The emperor appreciates the merits of the general and greatly rewards the soldiers of Quantai! Decree General Li Mu to be the Great General of Zhenbei! His son is the Marquis of Shuofang, and he is hereditary! Exactly: The barbarians invaded Nanxia and were about to collapse, unwilling to accept the suffering of the people and going in the opposite direction. Eighteen trapped magic formations, and the battles made the barbarians fearful!
Summary of Linyuan trip, participating in the "Grand Finale" event, and suggestions for Zhaizhu
Summarize Linyuan Xing, compare it with old works, and give some comments on Zhuti {"NickName":"Zhaizhu","UserId":20448952} Linyuan Xing is over, and Su Yun's story is over. Unlike in the past, Zhai Zhu did not give an open ending like "Humanity Supreme" and "Mu Shen Ji". At least Su Yun seemed to have really solved all the problems in the local universe, and finally left gracefully. Su Yun is perfect, Qin Mu is perfect, Zhong Yue is perfect, and the three protagonists are all perfect again. But the house pig is disabled. "My whole body is swollen, including my penis, which is two big" Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha . I didn't laugh, just helped me up. Again, the three protagonists are perfect, but "Lin Yuan Xing" deviates from the original intention of Zhai Zhu. Zhai Zhu's book has a characteristic. The whole book not only has clear main lines and hidden lines, but more importantly, it has a spiritual pillar that runs through the entire book. Fight to the end, Fuxi, who never admits defeat, should be on the road of eternal struggle. Fuxi who kneels is no longer Fuxi, and the person who stands up is still Fuxi. The growth process of Fuxi's big breeding cattle seems to be a process of constantly unlocking Fuxi's genes, and it is also a process of constantly regaining Fuxi's glory and retrieving Fuxi's spirit. Fuxi's fate is to be on the battlefield, and the big breeding cattle will be trapped in the Taoist world for life, which is not a bad ending. Human life is greater than heaven, gods are used by people, people use their talents, and heaven is built for the people. This people-oriented spirit has existed in Chinese history. It is the spirit of Mu Shen Ji. Qin Mu's growth process is to constantly understand this spirit and constantly practice this spirit. Spirit, his goal at first was to protect Daxu, and later Yankang. He met Yu Tianzun, was inspired by this personal and era spirit, met the sages of every dynasty and every generation, his "people" expanded and became the entire universe, and finally he took on all the burdens. Fuxi gives us spiritual strength, while Qin Mu gives us goals and methods. The combination of the two is the epitome of the great rejuvenation of the Chinese nation. However, the road to revival is not always smooth, nor is it always a victory. Sometimes we are struggling, and we face desperate situations countless times. Our success is actually due to countless coincidences. God bless China, and it is not an empty lie. "Lin Yuan Xing", just like Zhai Zhu's novels, you have no idea what the title means in the first 10 chapters. But when Su Daqiang and Huahu left Burial Dragon Tomb, walking on the edge of the cliff in darkness, I thought I understood. Walking across the abyss is like walking on flat ground. I know that the protagonist of this book is destined to constantly face the abyss and desperate situations. He will be more difficult than any other protagonist. All situations are unknown and the future is dark. Even in this dark and unknown time, you must stick to your heart. Every step you take must be resolute and accurate, wandering between life and death. Going to the abyss is a setting that makes concessions to the plot but also forces the plot. It seems to be compatible with all plots, because there is no fixed spirit and direction, so any plot, as long as there are difficulties, seems to be able to overcome the abyss. Actually, it has extremely high demands on the plot. How can we truly approach the abyss? How can it seem like walking on flat ground? How can we "leave the Yuan" in a reasonable way? Zhaizhu set up four complete "Lin Yuan Xing" in the early stage, which is the pinnacle of "Lin Yuan Xing". The first time: Su Daqiang mistakenly entered the Longling Tomb. According to the situation here, he used his blindness, willpower and sense of responsibility to finally escape alive under the suppression of Longling. This plot is the pinnacle of my writing skills that I have seen in recent years. I was as nervous as the little fox behind Su Yun throughout the whole process, holding my breath and concentrating. It was as if I was transported to a dark cliff, and my five senses were blocked one by one. Maybe even if I die, I will not know, just like this, I was "carried" by Su Yun and buried in Longling. This paragraph seems to be Zhai Zhu's conclusion to the prologue, and it is also telling the author what "Lin Yuan Xing" is. When I saw this, I exclaimed in my heart: Zhai Zhu is working hard to break through himself! The second time: Shuofang outsmarts the eight aristocratic families and Han Jun, and uses his humble strength to mobilize all parties to save the people of Shuofang This plot has a lot of foreshadowing, and is very detailed, with more and more foreshadowing interspersed in the seemingly ordinary narrative. Finally, there was a bang. In the last ten chapters, the saint Xue Qingfu suddenly came from behind the scenes to the front desk. The settings of Thousand Sail Boats on the same day were all eye-catching. The climax fell. Looking back, Su Yun's strength was still mediocre, but he had already played such a big game and even overturned the table. I am a person who doesn't like suspense and reasoning, but I fell in love with it. In the end, Xue Qingfu won almost everything, which made me sleepless and sleepless. Zhai Zhu was not good at writing such short-term conspiracies before. Although his previous novels were rich in conspiracies, they often ran through millions of words. This allows you to write a shocking conspiracy in a hundred thousand words, and the novel does not feel lagging, and even promotes the plot normally, and even adds a secondary protagonist, a lustful character, and vivid supporting characters. Zhai Zhu, I couldn't do it before! Pig, really trying to break through yourself! The third time: Kill the emperor in the capital, demote the prime minister, and undermine the saints In fact, from the moment Su Yun entered the capital, he was involved in a huge palace battle. Who would have thought that the prime minister was Qin Wuling? Are the five generations of saints the same person? Both of them have true dragon skills, and have developed into external incarnations? Who would have thought that the Yellow Emperor was so fatuous? All you can think about is your own immortality? One difference between Zhai Zhu's novels and Xiaobai's novels is that he uses plot as the core to promote character growth, rather than character growth driving the plot. Here, Zhai Zhu was forced to play the game because he did not want his combat power to collapse prematurely. In the capital, there are five parties with interests: the emperor, Qin Wuling, Han Jun, major aristocratic families, and Qiu Shuijing. Zhai Zhu seems to have restored the history of the Hundred Days Reform, vividly showing the most essential contradiction between the emperor and his subjects in Chinese history. This is the first time I have seen such an explicit exposure of the emperor's problem: in the emperor's heart, the world will always be there, and there will always be capable ministers. The final thing is always to stay in the emperor's position for a few more years, and everything else is secondary. The "emperor" here is not necessarily the emperor, but also represents someone similar to the Empress Dowager Cixi, or other figures who actually hold power. Su Yun killed the emperor because of the emperor's crime, which brought disaster to the country and the people. I was surprised by the designs and strategies of Xue Qingfu and Han Jun. I admire Zhai Zhu's design for the emperor. He allowed Qiu Shuijing to attack all the worlds and implemented the so-called "new law". In the end, all conflicts were directed at Qiu Shuijing, but the emperor was clean. This is probably the true current situation of the imperial court. If Su Yun hadn't cheated, he would have died in the hands of the two of them anyway. In the end of the plot, Han Jun and Qin Wuling were juxtaposed, looking down on the world, but it had its own flavor. Su Yun was forced to leave Yuanshuo, and the third trip to the abyss ended. Su Yun lost, Qiu Shuijing was demoted, and failed to realize his ambition. He also won, he did not die, Qiu Shuijing did not die, and the people did not suffer any loss. The fourth time: The mountains and rivers are exhausted and the demons are killed Ember is the big BOSS of the local continent. From then on, this place belongs to Su Yun's territory, and even Yuan Shuo has already referred to Yuan Shuo + overseas countries. He is the second most oppressive BOSS so far, second only to the Holy King of Samsara, but I don't know why, but my despair seems to be worse than that of Burial in the Dragon Tomb. Zhaizhu's ingenious idea is that the strongest point of the human demon is to control the Taoist heart of the person, while the Taoist heart of the saint's secret knowledge is stable, which constitutes the weakness of the invincible BOSS. Su Yun almost wiped out the team several times, but finally managed to win because of a bug: even if the Gray Tribulation Monster resurrected, it would still turn into a Gray Tribulation Monster again. So far, Lin Yuanxing's "Earth Chapter" has ended Zhai Zhu's writing power is obviously gradually being exhausted. This is my first trip to Linyuan, and I feel like the words have been carved countless times. The second trip to Linyuan also obviously went through sentence refinement and unnecessary plots were deleted. The third trip to Linyuan is still good, but the writing style has become a little lazy, and the "unknown feeling" of the first two times has been lost. It is difficult for me to describe this feeling. On the fourth trip to Linyuan, Zhai Zhu was obviously trapped by his habits for many years. The writing style restored the humor of the past. The invincibility of the protagonist gradually became more prominent, and the women fell in love with each other. Although the outline still restrained Zhai Zhu and led to the route of a last-ditch battle, in the end, I just followed the book in a dull way, and there was no sense of excitement and urgency at the beginning. Books can't find their soul, and they remain in the superficial words of "leaving a way out for poor children" and "to save all sentient beings" Is changing society just a matter of saying "leave a way out for poor children?" I have said something before, who are the people who promote social progress? The significance of poor children is to supplement these people, not to be the main force. What to do, in fact, "Mushen Ji" said a lot Su Yun, from now on, no longer walks near the abyss, but "walks around the abyss." I don't know whether Zhai Zhu was influenced by his book friends, or because of illness, or because his habits are too strong. The early stage of "Lin Yuan Xing" is a good book that is very different from other works, trying areas that Zhai Zhu has not touched. Gradually deteriorated in the later stages: Han Jun and Qin Wuling both have extremely high talents and IQs. It was extremely brain-consuming to control such characters while ensuring that the plot does not collapse. Zhai Zhu completely gave up writing such characters in the later stages. Even in the later period, all the supporting characters in Zhaizhu's books were reduced to intelligence, and this is the characteristic of Xiaobai's novels. The most powerful people in the universe, even the Queen of Heaven and the Fairy Queen, can't even tell whether it is more important to save Emperor Chaos or to take revenge and kill Emperor Chaos. If you are afraid that Emperor Chaos will fight with foreigners, why not just kill the foreigners and save Emperor Chaos? He even turned against the protagonist because of this. The worldviews overlap significantly, and even the universes intersect. The narrative style and even the mode are completely consistent, Yingying = Xinhuo = Longpang. Qiu Shuijing's intellectual enlightenment, fighting against his opponent, an old man who had been stuck in the eighth heaven for countless years, was completely plot-killing. A man who was said to be invincible in wisdom just walked into a dead end? Didn't Qiu Shuijing hit a dead end? After Chai Chuxi saw the true situation of the Sixth Immortal Realm and the Seventh Immortal Realm, she knew that the so-called "Immortal Realm" was fake, but she still stubbornly left Ascension. Is this obsession or a "plot"? Difeng is known as the No. 1 Sword Immortal, the one closest to the tenth level of swordsmanship. He can even complete the world of swordsmanship without being interrupted. In the end, even the heart of the sword cannot be penetrated? As Su Yun said in a phone call, Lian Jianwan was about to abandon Di Feng? After being resurrected, the disciples killed by Di Jue will really stubbornly believe that to seek revenge from Di Jue, they must destroy the world that Di Jue protects? The problem is that this is the Seventh Immortal World. This Immortal World is just like the Immortal World he used to live in. It is not a world protected by Di Jue. Di Jue has died long ago. The first immortal, his realm is so low? I don't have to be so strict, but I wrote it so well before. However, this is a book written by Zhai Zhu. I have met the Ten Heavenly Lords. They are either domineering, forbearing, far-sighted, or talented. Each of them has his or her own richness and heritage. I saw the four great masters of Heaven, who had ideals, ambitions, and IQs. Some of them later found their dreams, and their blood surged, but they were by no means just passionate. Some of them helped Heaven, and designed to separate and divide the Kaihuang Heaven. I see that Xue Qingfu and Han Jun are no less intelligent than the Ten Heavenly Lords, or even better than them. However, they stop at Yuan Shuo, and then become embellishments at the end of the article, and the stronger villains in the later period always have lower IQs. I had no choice but to sigh: It's too serious, why bother? To summarize, I would like to ask about Linyuan Xing In the early stage, Zhai Zhu was passionate about writing a different novel, breaking through himself, stepping out of his comfort zone, and writing a different book. The design is clever, the plot is reasonable, the villain has a very high IQ, and the protagonist is walking on the edge of the abyss In the middle period, Zhaizhu gradually returned to his comfort zone due to physical decline, or being trapped in his family, and there were too many worlds and characters. The protagonist travels around the abyss In the later period, he completely gave up on breaking through himself. Instead, he connected the worlds of the previous books, summarized them, made improvements, gave an ending, sold his feelings, and rested on his laurels. The protagonist rides on the abyss The front, middle and back are just like a person's life. I saw the efforts of Zhai Zhu, and I am also willing to give 10 points to the early stage of Lin Yuanxing. But "Lin Yuan Xing" is over. This is not the Lin Yuan Xing I wanted, and it is definitely not the Lin Yuan Xing Zhai Zhu wanted. Suggestions for Zhai Zhu's next book I sincerely suggest that Zhai Zhu should be cautious in his next book. Everyone has a mid-life crisis. During this period, people's health deteriorates, family matters increase, and their work habits and styles are established. It is true that many people rest on their laurels at this time, but there are also people who made huge breakthroughs during this period. I hope that Zhai Zhu can take good care of his body and deal with family matters first, and not be forced by the pressure of the XX editor to rush to the shelves and follow the same old path. Take good care of your body first, relax your body, reduce stress, and at the same time learn from others' strengths to create plots. Only when you have enough accumulation and confidence can you start a new book. Don't publish 13 Douluo books like the Third Master, and don't completely follow the chapters like a potato! You read their books, does anyone else read them? In particular, your book fans are really demanding! After I finished "The Shepherd God", I did not choose to start Lin Yuan Xing. Instead, I went back and read the other three books again. When I took out my hand to read "Lin Yuan Xing", it was almost finished. I only posted this article today because I just finished reading it today and my heart was so excited that it took me an hour to type these words. So Zhaizhu, there may be a lot of comments from new readers in the early stage of your book, and they can't understand it, but you have to trust your old readers. Didn't you find that most of the people who followed later were old readers?
[First Anniversary] I summarized Su Yun's golden words and shared them with you.
1. I heard that after a person dies, his spirit is immortal, and if he falls on an animal, he will turn into a demon. Therefore, the demon may be human. I also heard that the spirit of a demon is immortal after death, and it may also fall into the body of a human being. Therefore, what is wearing human skin may not necessarily be human. (Chapter 15) 2. The steel forest in the city is indeed much more dangerous than the tree forest in the countryside. There are more man-eating monsters here than in the countryside! (Chapter 49) 3. Some aristocratic families occupy the best resources, have power, and money. They not only eat people, but also want to gain and gain fame, and they also want to claim it. Some people, despite being stigmatized and misunderstood by the world, still work tirelessly without asking for anything in return, doing the dirtiest and most dangerous work and taking the blame for it. People are really different! (Chapter 110) 4. It is my right to tolerate you because I am stronger than you, but it is not your right to criticize me. I can tolerate you because of my good intentions, or I can kill you because of my evil intentions. (Chapter 288) Everyone is welcome to add~
"Lin Yuan Xing" Illustrated Book (1)
[Xiangliu] "The Classic of Mountains and Seas·Overseas Northern Classic": "The minister of Gonggong is called Xiangliu, with nine heads, and he eats in the nine mountains. The place of Xiangliu Arrival, Jue is Zexi. Yu kills Xiangliu, which cannot be planted with grains. Yu Jue, Sanren and Sanju, is the platform for the emperors. The one who is Xiangliu is in the north of Kunlun. It has a human face and a green snake body. " [Yinglong] Yinglong is a winged dragon in ancient Chinese myths and legends, also known as flying dragon and yellow dragon. Other scholars speculate that Yinglong was named after Gengchen; originally lived in heaven, as a general of the Yellow Emperor, he killed Chiyou and Kuafu, had used his tail to draw the land into a river, helped Dayu to control the floods, and captured Wuzhi Qi. [Zhulong] The mountain god of Zhongshan is named Zhulong (Zhuyin). When Zhulong opens his eyes, the world becomes day; Zhulong never eats or drinks, and has no breath. Once he takes a breath, the world becomes windy. His body is like a snake, his length is thousands of miles long, his face is like a human, and his whole body is red. Taotie One of the ancient strange beasts, "Taotie" Legend has it that Xuanyuan fought Chi You, Chi You was beheaded, his head fell to the ground and turned into a Taotie. Its shape is like a sheep body and a human face, Its eyes are under the armpits, it has tiger teeth and human claws, Its voice is like that of a baby. Pixiu The body of Pixiu is like a tiger and leopard, its head and tail are like a dragon, its color is both gold and jade, its shoulders are long and have a pair of wings that cannot be spread out, and it has a horn on its head that is tilted back. Pixiu can swallow all things and never release them, so it has the meaning of receiving wealth from all directions. Chinese tradition has the custom of "Pixiu". Like the dragon and lion, it has the function of driving away the evil spirits of the place and bringing joy and good luck. [Baize] The famous mythical beast on Kunlun Mountain, whole body is white in snow, can speak human language, understands the emotions of all things, and rarely appears. Unless there is a saint who governs the world at that time, he comes here with a letter. It is an auspicious beast that can turn bad luck into good luck. [Chilong] There are two theories: One is one of the origins of the dragon in Chinese legends. Also known as Chiwei, it is a sea beast. Someone said during the reign of Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty that Chilong is a water spirit and can prevent fire. It is recommended to place it on the roof to avoid fire; It's like having a beast's head." (The shape is like a beast, and its habit is to look around or take risks. It has become the dragon on the roof of temples, towers and pavilions, or the beast on the top of the house, or the beast in the corner of the temple. The characteristic of this dragon is that it has no scales and fins. [Mirage Dragon] The mirage is a very rare dragon. This is all because of the mirage's reproductive method: Snakes and pheasants mate in the first month and lay a very small egg. This egg will attract all the sky. Cloud thunder, lightning strikes the egg and pushes it into the soil. It will turn into a coiled snake at a distance of tens of meters. After two or three hundred years, the soil around the egg turns into stone and begins to rise toward the sky. After finding the moonlight, the rock collapses, and only then will the generated mirage appear. As for those eggs that were struck by lightning but did not enter the ground, they could only grow into pheasants. Many pheasants were hatched from eggs that could not turn into mirages, but if these pheasants jumped into the sea, they would turn into mirages. Mirages like to eat swallows, but it is said that they will eat nothing else. But swallows are fast-flying birds and rarely touch the water, so the mirage will make phantoms to lure swallows into its mouth. [Nine Infants] The monster of water and fire can spit water and fire. Its cry is like a baby crying, so it is called Jiuying. Yao came out and caused harm to the world. He was shot and killed by Yi in the fierce waters of Beidi. The theory first appeared in the Han Dynasty. The legendary fire and water monster. Also used to describe evil and cruel people. [Bi Fang] In ancient Chinese myths and legends, it is a sign of fire. Bi Fang's name may come from the crackling sound made by burning bamboo and wood. Bifang looks like a red-crowned crane, but it has only one leg (some say it has only one wing), the body is blue with red spots, and the beak is white.
[Shuofang] (30) Wutong - the history of the girl next door's darkening
Outside Shuofang City. A man in black is walking limpingly. If anyone observes carefully, he will definitely be attracted by his strange behavior. He tilted his head as if he was talking to someone, but there was nothing around him... "Senior, do you have any requirements for finding a host?" The man in black whispered. A gloomy voice came from the side, "Anyone worthy of my possession must not be an ordinary person. Originally, the little blind man from Tianmen Town was very suitable, but there are too many ghosts and gods around him... In this Shuofang City, I wonder if there is anyone worthy of my possession." ... Shuofang City, bottom floor. "Auntie, I'll do it." A pretty girl grabbed the bowl from an old lady's hand and started washing it. "Tongtong, how many times have I told you, don't call me A Niang anymore. You are about to take the big exam. You are extremely talented and will definitely enter a school. You will become a big shot in the future. We are all monsters and we cannot let your origins be stained." These low-level people who seem to be no different from ordinary people are actually monsters who come to Shuofang City to work. As for Wutong, she was abandoned in her early years, and these little demons at the bottom were also kind-hearted people. They adopted her since she was a child, regardless of whether she was a foreigner or not. This is so similar to Su Yun. "Aniang, without you, I would have starved to death on the streets. Where would the Wutong tree be today? Aniang, you said that the Wutong tree in your hometown is beautiful, so you named me Wutong. I can't forget this great favor." The girl looked at the aunt and laughed playfully. "Next time Auntie returns to her hometown, she must take me with her." "This..." Auntie hesitated for a moment, "I have already treated you as my biological daughter. You don't mind my humble status as a foreigner. I have not raised you for more than ten years in vain, but... When you go back to your hometown, please don't say anything about what I did in the city..." "Yeah." Wutong chuckled. "Damn monster, please die for me." The roar outside shocked both Wutong and Auntie. The aunt walked out. "Damn you, you finally came out and asked, did you steal some cloth from the factory when you were at work today?" A middle-aged man who looked like a butler, led five people and looked at the old lady fiercely. "I don't dare, I don't dare, I don't dare. Although I am a monster, I have always worked hard and don't dare to steal..." The aunt hurriedly knelt down and prayed to the middle-aged man. "That's enough. If I say you stole it, you stole it. Today, I will kill this monster and get rid of the harm to Shuofang City." "No, Aniang has been doing her job properly. Why do you need to frame her up? Do you have evidence?" Wutong came out of the room and looked at the group of men. "Huh?" The leader looked at Wutong. He came this time because he had received a kickback from the cloth outfit and was afraid that the master would check the accounts and wanted to find a temporary scapegoat. I didn't expect to meet such a pretty girl. The young master likes beautiful women the most. Taking this girl back will definitely benefit him. I saw him grinning ferociously and saying: "Come on, get rid of this old witch and take this little monster away." Naturally, he could see that Wutong was not a monster, but just to avoid the sanctions of robbing civilian girls. The aunt immediately fell to the ground after hearing this, "I stole it. I stole it. It has nothing to do with her. She is just a human girl. She passed by and begged for water. We didn't know her. I stole property because I was disrespectful. Kill me. Kill me... It has nothing to do with her." "Auntie..." Wutong listened with tears streaming down his face. Three middle-aged men have gathered around. Although they have mediocre qualifications, they still have their own spirituality. They are already spiritual men. Wutong has not even developed his spirituality, let alone three against one, and he was quickly restrained. When the aunt saw Wutong being captured, she suddenly saw a flash of white light and turned into a white sheep, which crashed into the three people surrounding Wutong. The head butler seemed to have already judged that she had behaved like this. He drew out the long sword from his waist and stepped forward to stab her. The long sword directly penetrated the aunt's body. "Old woman..." The residents around them shouted, but the six of them did not step forward. Isn't this kind of thing rare in this low-level area? "Aniang..." The tears in Wutong's eyes stopped, and her eyes were blood red. She wanted to break free, but the person who captured her was too strong. "Take it away." The butler waved his hand without even looking at the corpse. Several other people came forward and prepared to kidnap Wutong. "Is there still justice in this world..." Wutong asked himself. "Is there any more Wangfa?" Wutong struggled desperately and screamed desperately. The kind-hearted monster deserves to die, but the hypocritical person lives? Is this the rule? Is this human nature? And I am helpless? Her head was buzzing, as if something else had appeared. "Little girl, if I said I could give you the power to break this damn humanity, would you be willing?" Wutong looked at the butler's grinning face. "I do." "Are you willing without even asking me who I am?" The voice sounded sinisterly, and seemed to have a hint of bewitchment. "I don't care anymore. As long as I can break this hypocritical human nature and break this world, I don't care who you are or why you helped me." The voice hesitated for a long time. "Little girl, do you have any last wish?" "Is it okay to bury my mother's body under the sycamore tree of her parents and engrave the tomb of the sycamore mother on the monument?" "Yes." The girl's body flashed with black light, and she broke free from the shackles of several people in an instant. A group of people panicked and tried to run away, but were silently passed by by a black figure that flashed out. All six people fell. Standing there was none other than Jiao Shuao. The girl stood for a long time and asked Jiao Shuao to give a sum of money to her neighbor so that her aunt could be buried under the sycamore tree in her hometown. The tomb of the Wutong Mother was engraved on the stele. The girl absorbed the temporary despair of the six people, and actually recovered some of her strength. It seems that there is no need for a big killing test, which gives me more plans. The man in black and the girl left. The human demon looked at the girl Wutong's experience and felt a little envious. She smiled, finally able to understand the happiness of the little blind man in Tianmen Town. The feeling of being of a different race but being treated as a family member. She wondered, as a human demon, would there be people who didn't treat her as a foreigner, as a relative, or as a friend? This absurd thought disappeared in an instant. I, the demon, am back...
[In your heart] 22. From the God of Shepherd to Linyuan
(Writing this book review was completely impromptu and I didn't even write a draft) I came to qidian in April last year. The specific reasons were mentioned in the Mu Shen book review event, so I won't go into details here. When I was at Mu Shen, I transformed from a passerby to a participant. I always adhered to the concept of doing whatever I wanted to do, and posted many posts in book reviews. Except for the book review activities, most of the other posts were questioning. Question the setting, question the characters, question the details. Anyway, whenever you feel something is wrong, you will always post a post to question it, which will trigger all kinds of criticism. Look, look, look at the Goddess of Shepherd, and defy the heavens and the earth to denounce book friends. Anyway, just fight. The best result is that one day and one night, I fight against a group of book friends by myself, so please call me the King of Fighters. ——The above is all nonsense, now let's get to the topic. When I was in Mu Shen, I once made a post saying that when Qin Mu was weak, the villains (Tai Di, Tai Chu, Ri Tian, and the other Ten Heavenly Lords, the third son Ling Xiao, and the fourth son Zi Xiao) did not kill Qin Mu when he could. They all saw Qin Mu's potential. They had countless opportunities to kill him, but they found various excuses not to kill him countless times. If you are a book friend who has read Mu Shen and understands the closed loop of future time, you will naturally know that the reason why the Third and Fourth Young Masters did not kill Qin Mu when he was weak was because the Seventh Young Master was in charge of Miluo Palace, so they did not want to break up with each other for the time being. The villain of the seventeenth century is a matter of closed loops in the past. After all, Qin Mu has meritorious deeds and is a senior member of the Celestial Alliance. It is not difficult to kill Qin Mu. Unfortunately, it is difficult to deal with Qin Mu's death and his own reputation. The ten deities restrain each other. No matter which deity takes action, the other deities will seize the opportunity and take the opportunity to suppress him. Anyway, there is a reason (the reason is what I think, if you don't think so, you are welcome to discuss it). What about Linyuan now? For what reason did Qin Wuling and Han Jun choose to exile Su Yun instead of killing him? At this moment, Su Yun has the least foreign aid, the research value has been almost drained, and the Eight-sided Tower has been obtained. I wrote in the introduction to this chapter yesterday: Wouldn't it be nice to just kill Su Yun? Then a book friend replied that Su Yun could hide in the Book World and the Fire Cloud Cave (it's impossible to hide from that. If you hide, would you still be Su Yun? Besides, you can't hide. There are too many clones of these two people. They are everywhere, and Xing Jiangmu can't be trusted anymore), so I had an idea and came up with this book review. It is understandable that Yu Yandao has a weak heart and does not want to kill Su Yun but wants to convince him before dealing with him. What about Qin Wuling and Han Jun? Qin Wuling still has a teacher-student relationship (teacher-student relationship is vulnerable in the face of real interests), what does Han Jun have? I still haven't figured out the meaning of the phrase 'you've really grown up'. So, are there still big and big foreshadowings waiting for us here? Should I say 'Stay tuned' at the end? !
[Green Silk Flying Fish] Single Chapter Review: Ranked 4th
Chapter 68 Ranked 4th 1. Tigers and leopards are crouching in the mountains, and unicorns are hidden in the fields With broken ribs and a sallow complexion, Bai Yuelou withdrew from the sky. Compared with the physical pain, the psychological blow is even more painful. The saint's disciple became famous at a young age, which brought Bai Yuelou too much vanity, making him arrogant and complacent. The smooth journey made him particularly unacceptable when he encountered setbacks. At this moment, he remembered the saint's teachings in his ears, "Beware of arrogance and impetuosity, and act prudently." It is not difficult to see that Bai Yuelou grew up in a relatively simple environment, with saints as his teachers and the adulation of his classmates. He would forget about it after achieving temporary results, not knowing the ancient saying that there is heaven and earth. There are tigers and leopards crouching in the mountains, and unicorns hidden in the fields. Su Yun, who was born in "Yeluzi", is full of wild language and excellent talent, which brings an unimaginable blow to Bai Yuelou. Fortunately, Baiyuelou still belongs to the category of "curable", so I can humbly accept Huahu's comments. If I can work down-to-earth and study diligently and steadily in the future, my future achievements may be better. "Beware of arrogance, impetuosity, and be cautious." These eight words are also a warning from Zhaizhu to all book friends. I hope that all book friends will encourage you. 2. Success comes from talent + hard work + a little bit of luck Bai Yuelou withdrew in defeat, Su Yun crushed and won. Unexpectedly, Li Zhuxian, a girl with double ponytails, could also win at the buzzer. This energetic girl with twin tails seems to be different from the moment she appears. She doesn't have much scheming, is smart and cute, and has won the love of four big and small foxes in a short period of time. From the perspective of combat effectiveness, Li Zhuxian was only at the upper-middle level. With the help of terrain and a little chance, he managed to kill thirty or forty people. But sometimes luck comes and cannot be stopped. Su Yun killed everyone with a score of 62 to 99 in one operation. Li Zhuxian got a score of 61. A combination of circumstances can lead to second place qualifying... It reminds me of the UEFA Champions League group stage in the 2013/14 season. Naples ranked third with 12 points and was eliminated, while Lyon ranked second with 6 points and advanced in the other group... Luck is sometimes very elusive, and sometimes it is very important. For many of us ordinary people, sometimes we only get lucky a few times in our lives. Those who seize the opportunity can skyrocket, or even leap over the dragon's gate; if we fail to seize the fleeting opportunity, we may work hard and eventually lose everyone... Of course, when luck does not come, we cannot wait foolishly. We still have to work hard when we should, and at least we have to get a score of 61, right? 3. The blood sacrifice of humans and demons is full of variables Wen Lifang, Tian Wuji, Tong Qingyun and others all dealt with the incident of humans and demons from their own standpoints. Even Zuo Songyan did not jump out of this barrier. If he had not mistakenly thought that Su Yun was the emperor's messenger, Zuo Songyan's choice might not be much better than these people. Every bustle in the world is for benefit, and all the hustle and bustle in the world is for benefit. It is obviously unfair to evaluate these people from a moral standpoint. After all, they represent not only themselves, but also a large number of interest groups behind them, who do not want them to suffer losses. However, everything has its own laws of operation. If they don't want to be damaged, then someone must lose on their behalf, and this "loss" may very well include lives! When the big guys are plotting against each other for their own interests, who cares about the interests of twenty genius candidates like Su Yun? If twenty people's lives are sacrificed in exchange for the happiness of millions of people, it seems to be very worthwhile. The deceased is gone, should we consider more for the living? But some things cannot be exchanged in this way, such as fairness and justice. Today they can sacrifice the twenty people Su Yun for themselves, and tomorrow they will definitely sacrifice others for themselves. They always care about gains and losses. Will they one day be "sacrificed"? And if they choose to find a way to save the twenty people Su Yun, and Not to mention that these twenty people themselves are talented young people with outstanding talents. Even if they are ordinary people, if you save them and give them "hope", they can also give "hope" to more people in the future. Justice and justice can be passed down from generation to generation! What if you are not rescued? I did what I should do, and I have no regrets. These big guys are all engaged in education. Many times they preach and teach, and actions are more convincing than words. However, judging from the development of the plot, it is basically hopeless to count on these big guys. The battle of wits and courage between the human demon and the other nineteen geniuses is the next key plot. The wildness and choice of the protagonist Su Yun will be the biggest variable in the development of the plot. If you know what will happen next, wait for the update of Zhuda!
Grand Finale—Miscellaneous Talks about Protagonist Linkage
1. The currently known protagonists who will definitely collide include Yuxu Tianzun Ye Xu, Fuxi Taihuang Zhongyue, and Hongmeng Suyun. Comes with popular supporting characters, Chaos becomes the spiritual emperor Chaos, and the wizard follows the sect's path. As for Jiangnan being too strong, the side description is great. Qin Mu's strength is second only to Jiangnan, and he can't end up. He can only pave the way for others to collide and be a passerby. 2. The issue of the idea of the avenue 1. Su Yun's intention of the avenue is higher than that of Palace Master Miluo, but it is still within the scope of Hongmeng. So it is still called Hongmeng. 2. Emperor Zhongyue's Yi is endlessly changing and endless. Zhong Yue opened his own Taoist realm and did not imprint the universe, resulting in his Taoist realm, with high Taoism but low cultivation. So the showdown between him and Ye Xu is worth watching. Yi Zhi Dao's intentions are very high, so Zhong Yue's strength is improved by perfecting and improving the power of Dao in the Tao realm within his body (reaching a level that imprints the universe). 3. Yuxu Tianzun Ye Xu has the same avenue, and all avenues can be attributed to the same word. Because Ye Xu has one certificate and four certificates, namely: physical body, soul, magic weapon, and Hongmeng Avenue. So it has some characteristics of Hongmeng. Ye Xu's Hongmeng intention is not as good as Su Yun's, but he has other avenues that have come to an end. This is how Ye Xu's strength grows - making more avenues come to an end. This method cannot reach the true origin, but it is powerful. It belongs to the realm of Taoism, and the cultivation level and avenues increase with the increase of the number of avenues mastered. Look forward to the collision between Taihuang and Yuxu! 4. Qin Mu's Avenue of Chaos. This is the real avenue of chaos, encompassing the sea of chaos, between existence and non-being, and can be transformed into all runes, even Hongmeng. The intention is extremely high, second only to Yuanshi (except for the avenue of annihilation, I personally feel that it is impossible for anyone to achieve enlightenment on the avenue of annihilation, so I ignore it). 5. Explanation of the so-called chaos and Hongmeng in "Emperor". Chaos is innate, and those who achieve are empty. Hongmeng Xiantian, the enlightened Qingdi. It's not really the Avenue of Chaos and the Avenue of Hongmeng, it's just two achievements of Tao Fruit. I have posted before, so I won't go into details here. 6. Regarding the relationship between Hongmeng and Xiantian Wutai. The so-called enlightened ones among the Shepherd Gods are all Heavenly Kings, that is, at the level of the Great Emperor. And above the 40th level of the Dao Realm is the end of the Dao, which is the Tao God. Hongmeng is a kind of avenue above Taiyi. The development of the universe is such a process. I have posted before. Here is a brief description: Chaos is characterized by disorder, gestation, and possibility. From chaos to chaos, it is characterized by order and evolution. Tai Yi is a ball of Hongmeng Qi, the original state of the universe. In the beginning, there was no form or quality, and it was innate. Afterwards, through Taishi, Taisu, and Taiji, everything in the universe was completely formed. The strength of the Five Supreme Beings is not much different after they become enlightened, that is to say, when they are in the realm of the Heavenly Lord, their strength is not much different. Taiyi is most likely to realize Hongmeng. However, a simple fifth prince can also directly prove the Tao. In "Emperor", Nanguo Xianweng is the innate Taoist fruit of Taichu. The power of Tao to prove the Tao is much stronger than the physical body, and the soul can prove the Tao. However, due to the "one" characteristic of Hongmeng's enlightenment, Hongmeng's magical power is extremely high, almost ten thousand times stronger than the simple Five Supreme Enlightenment. If the other four masters want to realize Hongmeng, they have to go through Tai Chi to reverse Taisu, reverse Taishi, reverse Taichu, Taiyi, and finally Hongmeng. Therefore, Taiyi's innate starting point has a huge advantage, and it is easiest to realize Hongmeng. In addition, the innate Qi of the Taichu state is the vitality of Hongmeng Avenue. Taishi, Taisu, and Taiji are the expressions of Hongmeng's characteristic of transforming all things with "one". 3. The most controversial question - is Qin Mu the true Yuanshi in the end? The latest chapter shows that Qin Mu learned about Yuan Shi from Jiang Nan. One thing to note is that at this time, Qin Mu can say Yuan Shi in Taoist language to directly let others see the illusion of Yuan Shi. This is similar to the reason why Su Yun suppressed Hongmeng's high intentions when discussing Taoism with Fen Universe. Su Yun had already understood the principles of Hongmeng at that time, so he could speak the true meaning of Hongmeng in Taoist language. Therefore, Qin Mu must have understood the true meaning of Yuanshi before he could speak out (he also understood the true meaning of Hongmeng), but he has not yet arrived. You don't have to cultivate to the end of this avenue before you can speak out. In short, one thing can be concluded that Qin Mu must have transcended the Avenue of Chaos at the end of Mu Shen, but it is not clear how far he is from the beginning of the Yuan Dynasty. After all, Yuan Shi can open the sky with a single thought. Even if Qin Mu cannot reach it, he can use some of Yuan Shi's characteristics to solve the catastrophe and reopen the universe when he is close to the realm.
[Brain Monster] 42. Senior brother, please look back!
In Chapter 238, Wen Guanshan pretends to admit that he is Mr. Yehu and also admits that he is a wonderful painter, which means that he is the team leader Qin Wuling. So, everyone is now very curious, who was the person who led Su Yun into the secret room? This person seems to be living in Wen Mansion. I couldn't help but wonder, could the truth of the matter be like this? Wen Guanshan has extraordinary qualifications. He has been a disciple of Cen Sheng, Taoist Saint and Holy Buddha since he was a child. However, he is the closest to senior brother Danqing. He always sticks to his senior brother for nothing. He will tell his senior brother anything he has to say, and he also teaches his senior brother some unimportant exercises from Taoism and Buddhism. Sometimes his senior brother would tell him some stories. The one that impressed him the most was a story called a real dragon and a human demon. It is said that one year, there was heavy snowfall, and real dragons and human demons descended from the sky. The emperor ordered the palace scholars to go to Gelong, but they met the human demons and started killing. He once asked his senior brother if this story was true or false, but his senior brother laughed and refused to answer. One day, Wen Guanshan created a technique called "One Qi Transforms Three Purities", which is to divide his spirit into three parts, one part remains in the body, and the other two parts can be possessed by animals, plants or objects, or even people, so he can become a demon, a spirit, a monster, or a human devil. He happily demonstrated this self-created technique in front of his senior brother. He got his wish and was praised by his senior brother. As soon as he was happy, he taught this technique to his senior brother. However, the development of things was a bit beyond his expectation. A few years later, his senior brother became different from before. Not only did he ignore him, he often did inexplicable things and said inexplicable words, and he almost didn't recognize him. He wanted to know why his senior brother became like this, so he separated a part of his spirit and attached it to a bird outside his bedroom. Soon, the bird discovered that his body was dead and had been killed by his senior brother. His body and spirit were also missing, but his senior brother had turned into his true form. When Mr. Cen came to see his senior brother, the senior brother returned to Danqing's appearance. When he came to find his real body, the senior brother returned to Wen Guanshan's appearance. He was a little confused about what the senior brother was going to do? He was afraid that his identity as a bird would be discovered and silenced by his senior brother, so he had to try his best to hide it. Fortunately, he had learned a simple escape method from his senior brother before. He could go to where he wanted to go by drawing a door with a pen. In this way, as a bird, he watched his senior brother take over his family and grow up step by step as him, becoming Prime Minister Wen and becoming a miscellaneous saint. Until the senior brother faked his death and killed Teacher Cen. He felt that he should do something and not let his senior brother make the same mistake again and again. So, he pretended to be a servant and worked in the Wen family, trying to find evidence to prove that he was fake while his senior brother was away. However, more than ten years have passed, and there has been no gain. Huangtian paid off, and his persistence finally paid off. A few months ago, a fox skin, a well-preserved body of his body, and some old holy books were discovered in his former study room. What exactly is Senior Brother going to do? No, senior brother must be stopped. Who can he ask to help him now? The Taoist saints and the saintly Buddhist teachers have retired to seclusion in recent years to continue their lives. It is estimated that they can no longer defeat their senior brothers. What should I do? He waited and waited, and finally he met a man named Su Yun, who at a young age could beat up Taoist saints and holy Buddhist teachers. That's him. Just find a time to lead him to your senior brother's secret room. I hope that senior brother can put down the butcher knife and turn back to the shore!
Shuofang⑤①We are different (revised article, Xue is from Shuofang)
That year, outside Dongdu City. The autumn wind is bleak, and the fallen leaves rolled up by the strong wind are like torrential waves. The scattered trees sway with the wind, and the sounds they make together form harmonious, beautiful and rhythmic notes. A handsome and majestic young man stood under a big tree next to the inn. Three steps away, standing opposite him was a well-dressed middle-aged man with a calm expression. The afterglow of the setting sun shines through the layers of leaves, like dancing golden light spots, hitting them all over their bodies and faces. "Teacher, I've sent you here." The relatively young man said calmly. "Shui Jing, you're not here to ask for parting words from the teacher, are you?" Another older man looked at the smug student opposite and couldn't help but make fun of him. "No, I just want to watch you leave Dongdu in person." "You can't tolerate me like this," the older man said in a tone full of grievances, but his face was calm, "You really want me to leave?" "Teacher knows full well, why do you need to be so pretentious!" The young man thought, you did all this yourself, otherwise I would never have the chance to drive you away! Not far away, the candle dragon raised its head and roared, getting ready to go. Travelers preparing for a long journey began to go upstairs one after another, and there were only a few family members and friends of the travelers left in the inn, waving hands to see them off. The older man turned around and walked towards Zhulong with empty hands. After walking a few steps, he turned back and looked into the young man's eyes through the faint golden light spots and said: "Congratulations on getting what you wanted! I still have to give you a parting message. I hope you will not become the person you hate the most in your future career." "Teacher, we are different, and I will never become yours." The young man raised the corners of his mouth, half-smiling, and said firmly. "I hope so!" The middle-aged man said angrily, turning around and climbing up the Zhulong rope ladder. "Chi Gu——" The huge candle dragon let out a long roar and galloped away to the distance outside the city. The figure of the man far away from the center of power gradually turned from a large figure into a small black dot. After a while, even the small black dot disappeared! Time flies and the years fly by. It's the autumn wind again. The inn outside Shuofang City gradually revealed its clear outline under the misty sunshine of the late-rising Sun. Zhulong, who had just returned from afar, stopped in the rest area of the inn, patiently waiting to be fed by the veterans stationed there. The travelers on the wooden floor walked down the rope ladder one by one, and soon they disappeared. "Creak——" On the small wooden building, one of the single-room doors finally opened, and a middle-aged man with no hint of joy or anger in his expression walked out of it, and then slowly looked around at the surrounding scene. When his eyes came to the waiting area of the inn, he saw an old man with white hair and wearing black cloth. ——At that moment, the pictures stored in the depths of my mind were like a picture album, looking back page by page from back to front, and finally settled on that evening many years ago, in front of the middle-aged man standing on the candle dragon. In a trance, he seemed to be having a silent spiritual collision and fight across time and space with the man in the painting. And turning the page forward, there is a picture of a middle-aged man and a young man standing opposite each other in the same frame. It's been a long time since we lasted! That young man gradually turned into a middle-aged man as the years passed by, no longer looking complacent and contented. And the middle-aged man also became an old man with silver hair and frosty temples. However, the reality is that the moment the old man saw the middle-aged Qiu Shuijing, he immediately exuded a high-spirited and high-spirited look. Qiu Taichang, who just resigned: "..." "Shui Jing, I'm here to pick you up!" "..." This situation seemed familiar, and Qian Qian Taichang had nothing to say, so he could only come to Qian Qian Qian Taichang's side expressionlessly, looking at the other person's energetic face, as if he wanted to see something out of that annoying smile. "Shuofang welcomes you home. If you plan to retire here, you are returning to your roots." "No, I don't plan to come back to retire, I have to support you." "You..." Saint Xue Qingfu tutted, "You are still so talkative!" "Really?" Qiu Taichang was noncommittal, "Sage took time out of his busy schedule to pick me up, are you planning to chat with me here?" "Yes, I just came here to pick you up. By the way, I want to hear how you feel about following in my footsteps. Do you feel the same way?" That teasing smile showed ill intentions at first glance. "…" Qian Taichang didn't want to talk nonsense with his teacher here anymore, so he raised his hand to summon a beast, and decided to go to Shuofang City before making plans. "Listen to me, Shui Jing," the old man put away his joke and called Qiu Shuijing sincerely, "Nowadays, Yuan Shuo is suffering from many evils, which are difficult to recover from. If you want to get rid of the evils, you need to sink the boat and break the cauldron... Uh... Teacher, I want to be a saint and do my best for Yuan Shuo, but it is a pity that the emperor has not issued the decree. So, I need you, can you help me?" "Teacher, do you still remember the last words I said when you left Dongdu?" The young Qiu Shuijing many years ago crossed the rings of time and walked step by step to the middle-aged Qiu Taichang. The two said at the same time: "Teacher, we are (still) different." "I will return to the Eastern Capital in my own way, please wait and see, teacher!" The middle-aged Qiu Taichang continued, "At the same time, please cherish yourself, teacher, and strive to be a saint as soon as possible." The two looked at each other tacitly. "I will!" Xue Shengren said with a solemn expression, not sure whether he meant to wait and see or to cherish himself. Qiu Shuijing said no more and walked into the small building above the beast. The beast moved quickly, heading towards the city gate of Shuofang, towards the ups and downs, exciting plot and the future that was about to unfold, like facing an abyss and walking on thin ice. So far—— Destiny begins!
Out-of-the-circle activityEvil Emperor
After the death of Emperor Jue, it was divided into three parts: Emperor Xin, Emperor Zhao, and Evil Emperor. There is no need to say much about the first two. Let's talk a little about Evil Emperor first. The Evil Emperor inherited Emperor Jue's spirit and obsession, and also ignorantly inherited Emperor Jue's humiliation. He stood on the opposite side of Su Yun, and also withstood most of Su Yun's foul-mouthed attacks. He doesn't have Di Jue's experience in chaos, and he won't have Di Jue's freedom and ease after knowing the cause and effect. It is precisely because of this that after he once again witnessed his teacher's final instructions and let go of his obsession, I once thought about whether the Evil Emperor would have another highlight moment before ushering in the end. The result was seen. The Evil Emperor took over Di Zhao's baton and persisted under the projection of the Holy King of Samsara until Su Yun killed Di Hu. I still feel dissatisfied. Although it is written that the Evil Emperor's Tiantian is more exquisite than the predecessor Emperor Jue, but after all, we have no way of knowing how exquisite it is. Even if no third person knows about it, the remaining heat has been exerted for Su Yun, and the Evil Emperor may also be relieved. No matter how unfair it is, I understand that the moment the Evil Emperor lets go of his obsession, it will be his end. This is the same as Yun Tianzun's time-not-waiting attitude in The Goddess of the Shepherd. In fantasy, he would use various schemes to cast an indelible shadow on the Second Young Master and Hao Tianzun, but in reality, he tragically used his own bargaining chip to trade with them until the last moment. Whether it is the Evil Emperor or Yun Tianzun, their endings are not exciting in the conventional sense, but they are endings that are worthy of them. When the obsession is gone, it's time to brush off your clothes and leave. It's time to leave after your wish is fulfilled.
Shuofang②⑦ Li Muge——Running away from home
In the clear sky, a few dark clouds came from nowhere, and the originally clear blue sky was instantly broken into pieces. The wind and the bright winter sunshine could only leak through the gaps between the clouds. On the criss-crossing cloud bridge, there is an endless flow of beasts of all kinds. The small buildings carried on it have become mobile versions of residences, running towards the distance on the Hongqiao towering into the clouds. The residents of the lower streets were all in a hurry. The staff in several positions were doing the same thing with expressionless faces and could never finish it. However, the monthly salary earned is only enough for his minimum expenses. But just like this, a job that is disdainful and despised by the upper-class nobles is always envied by the monsters who have just come to the city and have nothing to do and have nothing to do. So every few days, these monsters always have a fight, show their arms and show their fists. "Bang!" A strong young man was kicked from one of the top floors of Shenxianjuli, which had a plaque of "Li Mansion" hanging on it, to the street at a speed that exceeded the limits of the human body. The figure lying on all fours quickly rushed back into the door with the movement of a carp. "Bang!" "Bang!" "..." "You brat, if you don't drop out of Wenchang Academy today, you won't be able to enter this family." A low, slightly angry middle-aged male voice sounded at the same time as the fifth sound of an object falling to the ground. "My ancestor's coffin board is cracked because of your anger, you unfilial descendant!" The angry Marquis gritted his teeth, with a hint of hatred that iron cannot be transformed into steel. At this moment, he didn't know what to do with his son, who was maverick and never looked back. He could only show his father's majesty and use threats to ask the other party to compromise. However, he also knew that in this way, it was a bit unrealistic to ask the only son who had his own ideas since childhood to bow his head. The boy who was in close contact with the earth did not touch the stone again this time. Facing his father's helpless and expectant gaze, he stood up calmly and methodically arranged his messy hairstyle and clothes. "It's absolutely impossible for me to drop out of school!" The young man said resolutely, his voice pure and clear. This is a childish face. Although he tried his best to hide the unyielding look in his eyes, his slightly raised chin still betrayed his dissatisfaction. ",!" ,,,, The worst plan is to stay in the academy. I heard that Shenxiu Building, where teachers and students live, is never full. It was rumored that people often died in that building. The young man secretly made up his mind to work hard to make money so that he could not live in the academy. Mr. Hou, who had given birth to a troublesome child, stood on the steps of the gate, frowning and squinting, looking down at his stubborn son. I thought to myself that this unlucky boy really has a tough talk. My ancestor on the roof, you must hold on. If the special coffin board is broken by pedaling, it will be difficult to build it again. "I will prove that my decision is correct. My achievements in the future will definitely not be worse than yours, father!" "Oh? What proof are you planning to get? Are you in the top 20 in the entrance examination, or are you a student of the Fourth Academy of Shuofang?" Mr. Hou said with a joking look on his face, "Boy, you are not qualified yet!" "I will definitely prove it!" The young man seemed to be telling his father, but also seemed to be mumbling to himself. He took one last look at Wei An's father and turned away resolutely. Suddenly, a steady drizzle began to fall from the sky. The blue sky earlier had been turned into a misty gray by a pair of black and white hands, and there was no longer a trace of gentle breeze and sunshine in the whole city. The young man who had just left home was given a soothing baptism by this gentle nature before he had even taken a few steps! This is a rare experience in Shuofang City. "It's a good sign." The boy, who was still a little worried about the future, comforted himself silently in his heart, looking at the road in the distance with determination in his eyes. Looking at the thin back of the man who was drifting away, the Marquis, who was standing still, put away the ridicule on his face, and a little meaning appeared in his deep eyes. "My son, Pastoral, I'm here waiting for you to prove it!"
[Shuofang] 41. Wutong's troubles
In the cold winter, heavy snowfall overnight turned the whole world into a blanket of snow. Today, Wutong got up very early. After eating breakfast, she lazily sat there with her chin in a daze. In the past two days, Wutong has been listless. Jiao Shuao once asked her what was going on, but Wutong was very stubborn and had no intention of talking. Jiao Shuao was also helpless about this. In fact, it all started with the competition for senior brother two days ago. No, for Wutong it should be the senior sister. Wutong lost to Su Yun again in that match. Wutong could still accept losing to Su Yun. After all, he had already lost once during the entrance exam, so losing again was not something he couldn't accept. Moreover, Wutong is confident that with the ability of the human demon, she can quickly surpass Su Yun and defeat Su Yun. But after the competition, Wutong was worried because he couldn't give out the three Qinghong coins. This is a great shame and humiliation for Wutong. Not only does he lose his face, but he also loses his dignity. Wutong couldn't bear such grievance, but she couldn't tell Jiao Shuao. After all, he was Jiao Shuao's senior. How could his senior be stumped by such a stinking thing. So she has been very depressed and irritable these two days, and she needs to find a way to make a fortune. "Alas, a penny really stumps a hero." Wutong sighed: "Who can give me a reward? The human demon Wutong begs for a reward."
Su Yun is the most upright protagonist in Zhai Zhu's books so far. He is much more upright than the protagonist Jiangnan Jiang Zichuan of Emperor Zun, a self-proclaimed scholar who likes to convince others with virtue (martial virtue). Compared with the previous protagonists who were all chosen by me, Su Yun is really different. This also makes me look forward more and more to Linyuanxing's writing with a different flavor. After all, the first book I read was Regal, and I only became a fan of it after reading Humanity Supreme. It's just because it's written differently.
Some thoughts and insights
Linyuanxing is generally good, but it didn't meet my expectations for Zhaizhu. It can be seen that Zhai Zhu tried some new concepts in this book, but due to insufficient polishing, the changes in details did not achieve good results, and the linkage with other works was also inappropriate. Zhaizhu once said that he felt exhausted in terms of creative ideas. But I want to say that as a flexible literary form, novels have infinite possibilities at every node. We need to observe carefully to find the optimal possibility. During the pause period, Zhai Zhu can actually review his past works to continue ideas he has never adopted; he can also observe other excellent works to find new inspiration. The themes of Zhai Zhu's works have always been novel and profound. Zhai Zhu once said that he would write a book that reflects reality. Indeed, literature comes from life. We must draw nourishment from history and reality, and use the form of online literature to reflect the spirit of the times and the national spirit. Only in this way can literature have lasting vitality. Fantasy works have inherent shortcomings in this aspect, but for this reason, we must work harder to find the connection point between fantasy and reality, so that fantasy can also inspire people and allow people to establish a correct outlook on life and values. Zhaizhu's achievements in this area are obvious, but it still needs to continue to deepen, continue to explore, and create greater glories. In the early days of Linyuan trip, I saw a large number of novel applications of traditional Chinese culture, which made me feel happy and cordial. I think it also felt the same for many readers. Unfortunately, I rarely felt it later. China's huge inventory of excellent culture is an important asset for our contemporary creations, and not all quotations are leftovers. I hope that Zhai Zhu can further explore traditional cultural classics during the period of suspension of writing. This is not only a search for new materials and inspiration, but also an act of cultivating one's temperament and broadening one's thinking. I am not a writer, nor a keyboard writer, but just an ordinary reader. I express my thoughts with the highest expectations for home pigs, rather than trying to impose my own shallow opinions on others. Zhai Zhu has earned a reputation with Faun, but this should not limit him. Every time he opens a new book, he should get rid of the ideological constraints brought by past works, forget his own reputation, give full play to his talents, and bring readers the most authentic works. But at the same time, what readers want is not mass-produced low-quality novels and a worn-out author. Home pigs also have their own families and life challenges. New books don't have to be too urgent. Home pigs also need rest and sufficient precipitation. I wish Zhai Zhu good health, a happy family and a successful career in the new life! (From a newbie who posts book reviews for the first time) ^_^
The character of Su Yun was a bit broken in the later stage. The character of Su Yun in the front was well created, decisive and perceptive. However, the character in the back fell apart. She was too lustful. When she met a beautiful female ghost, she couldn't walk and she almost died from being picked.
FinalDao Realm
Su Yun stepped into the Taoist realm The originally silent Taoist realm suddenly came alive The avenue surged and the rays of light shone He was about to kill Su Yun But he could not break through the Hongmeng Bell A hazy figure appeared around Su Yun It was Feng Xiaozhong "Going westward, you can see the Emperor Tai " Feng Xiaozhong is the pure Tao god who defeated the Tao world He can freely enter and exit the Tao world He is the only one who knows where the Emperor Tai is Su Yun followed his instructions and walked all the way The Tao world knew what he meant Another pure Tao god appeared These pure Tao gods were trapped in the Tao god's trap and were subject to the Tao Driven by the world, he came to kill Su Yun "Fellow Taoist, please stay. Are you willing to go with me?" Su Yun went in search of reputation I saw a three-headed divine dog being besieged by several gods of pure Tao This is a strong man who has broken into the Taoist world, and his strength is also extraordinary "Six eyes, not the Emperor of Thailand" Su Yun waved his hand to repel several pure Tao gods around him, and kept walking On the way, he met many beings who had broken into the Tao world There were big snakes, divine dragons, golden crows, snake tails and dragon scales, gods with eight arms and three eyes As Su Yun moved forward, more and more Tao gods attacked him, and another light fell. Su Yun also had to take action Suddenly he saw the sky and the earth in front of him tilted, the avenue shook, and the light reflected There was a god with eight arms holding the sky, with a snake tail like a spear, piercing the sky There was also a big snake crossing the sky, swallowing the world The two sometimes intertwined, sometimes formed a ring There was also a golden crow, burning the heaven and earth, setting fire to the mountain, and sitting through the prison. Eight rays of reincarnation surround the back of the three people's heads "But the Emperor of Tai?" An innate gossip spreads with the god as the center, controlling all things Suyun's Taoist realm blooms, covering itself Escape from the Taoism of the Emperor of Tai "A foreigner?" The Emperor of Tai looks back, feeling the unfamiliar avenue "What do you want from me, Taoist friends?" The sound of the Tao is deafening. Hey, at this time, Emperor Tai was like the center of the universe, with his body boundless and stars revolving around him Su Yun was unmoved and answered with the same voice "I came out of the Immortal Universe and was entrusted by Emperor Chaos to help fellow Taoists out of trouble" Emperor Chaos, the eight realms, appeared in front of Zhong Yue and the others with the sound of Dao "Hahaha, no wonder I feel that there is a cause and effect with my fellow Taoists. That's it. It's interesting. " "Is Yunmeng okay?" The big snake fell to the ground and turned into a young woman "I have never seen the person that the lady said" Hua Qianwen's body shook for a while "The universe is so big that there are countless people in the world, so it is normal for Taoist friends to be alive. Besides, if Qiqiao is alive, Yunmeng and the others will not have an accident" "Qianwen, He Xi, you come into my secret realm" The Tao realms of Su Yun and Zhong Yue are spread out, and the two Tao methods are intertwined Supplementing and confronting The surrounding world is dark, if the universe is not opened In the darkness, there are more and more pure Tao gods The avenues surge like dragons, gathering together to form the essence "Lulu" A huge The divine pig raised its hooves and roared This is the materialization of the will of the Tao world The Tao unleashed murderous intent, and the world was overturned A god of pure Tao came out of the darkness, with seven haloes of light Zhong Yue's eight arms danced, and the shadow of his fist was airtight Three eyes flashed, shooting out the divine light of Samadhi Exhaling from the throat, he turned into an innate dragon and took flight There were thirty-three dragon bone spines connected to the snake bones, It came out of the body and turned into a magic spear The head was hanging like a ball of bones, holding the dragon-sinned harp The Fuxi Protoss was born for fighting. If any part of the body was cultivated to the extreme, it could suppress an era And the Tai Emperor, who had refined his whole body to the extreme At this time, he was a fighting machine, tireless Su Yun looked at the Tai Emperor, his eyes twinkling Occasionally, there were a few pure Taoists God attacks Su Yun The Hongmeng Bell vibrates and repels it There is no more action The awareness of the Taoist world drives all the gods of pure Taoism to besiege Zhong Yue But he is waiting on the periphery for Zhong Yue to reveal his flaw Tao Zhu's eyes widened, and the flawless white pig skin trembles The hair on his body fell off, but it was Dao Guang, silently slashing at Zhong Yue Zhong Yue's snake tail swung, and his body was swimming between the void and reality, avoiding Daoguang Daoguang was chasing after him Eight haloes appeared behind Zhongyue's head, the Great Eight Paths of Reincarnation Eight arms held him in the air, and a vortex of reincarnation enveloped Daoguang Daoguang shattered a layer of space, but fell into endless reincarnation Su Yun pointed his hand, Hongmeng Bell flew to it, and included the vortex of reincarnation. "Roar" The Tao Pig roared and rushed towards Su Yun Su Yun's Tao Realm bloomed, and the Hongmeng Avenue evolved into all things Bells, seals, spears, swords, birds, and beasts Hit the Tao Pig, bursting out with bright brilliance That was the confrontation of the avenues In the brilliance, a wave of water surged out It was the trend formed by the convergence of the Tao God's magical powers Su Yun's brow thunder The lines fluctuated, and a purple thunder split the water waves Every part of Zhong Yue's body was glowing at this time God's eyes, mind, bones, dragon scales and snake tail The great cycle of time and space made him appear in front of all the Tao gods at the same time Every move was different There was no single enemy among the Tao gods present The snake's tail penetrated into the void and silently wrapped around the pig's leg The body disappeared immediately, and the next moment it was wrapped around Dao Zhu "Roar" The Dao Pig roared, and the pig skin opened its magical power But it was resisted by the dragon scales Zhong Yue raised his eight arms, and Dao turned into eight big swords and swung them down Learned from the ancestor of Chaos' pig-killing knife technique Crazy slash fell on the pig's neck Su Yun's Purple Qi Sword The rotation path ends here Slashing at the pig's head "Everyone dunks on your head" The wild boar screamed, but was helpless Finally, it exploded under the uninterrupted attack of the two people If the chaos begins, the evolution will be majestic
I have finished the book of Lin Yuan Xing, and I can't say anything in my heart. Lin Yuan Xing, Humanity Supreme, and The God of Shepherd were all very exciting in the early stages, but I couldn't understand them at the end. Maybe my cultural level is too low. In fact, Zhai Zhu is my favorite online writer.
The author and book friends should read it! Want to see it! 🐷🐷🐷🐷
@ Pig🐷 and all my book friends. After reading "Lin Yuan Xing", there are many things I want to say to Brother Zhu I think a fantasy novel can be written to reflect real problems and some ancient history, and embody practical significance. It is undoubtedly a highlight and innovation. It has been a long time since I have seen such a fantasy novel (perhaps I have read less personally), and it feels completely new. Maybe it's because in the past (except for excellent works), the online novel market was flooded with all kinds of "cool" novels, mainly with bizarre plots and bloody plots, with the purpose of sensationalizing and attracting attention, and "cool" as the main body of the novel. Personally, I feel that it has no nutritional value. After reading it, I will feel that the author has incorrect views. Occasionally I read that some readers said that the author was showing patriotic feelings indiscriminately, and even wrote the plot of the book indiscriminately. I personally felt very uncomfortable. How could this be random writing? What is said in the book is adapted from previous history and reflected in current events. It warns us to be prepared for danger in times of peace, to constantly improve and not to rest on our laurels, etc. There are also issues such as the difficulty of producing a child from a poor family, inequality in education, and the current state does not allow schools to make up classes, and does not encourage off-campus training institutions to balance the number of teachers. These are all real-life issues. I think what the author wrote is very meaningful and reflects reality. Aren't these advances in online literature? The book mentions that the author visited Daoyan in Hainan. Daoyan's work "The Golden Eye" was also very successful, because in addition to the rich storyline, it also included realistic geography, history, cultural relics and culture, customs and culture, etc. It can be seen that Daoyan is a knowledgeable person. Unfortunately, his other subsequent works did not continue this style. Looking at the science fiction short stories of many successful writers, such as Liu Cixin, they also reflect reality, expand science fiction, and are not divorced from reality without losing science fiction. There are many issues about the development of human society and its impact, etc. I won't go into more details. In short, I hope that Brother Zhu can continue to maintain his own style and add more valuable content to his works. He will not stop at fantasy or fantasy in the traditional sense, but will bring forth the new. I also hope that the few readers who don't understand will pay more attention to current affairs news and history, and don't make slanderous comments and say it's just a white article. . . . The above personal opinions are considered unfounded and cannot be accepted.
Finale - Absolute
"Jue, this is your mission" "He is the onlooker. He understands your spirit from your past and understands what you want to protect." "Di Jue, make your choice" "I will teach you" "Good adoptive father" "I am about to be defeated. It takes you and me to join forces to defeat this person for a whole day," Di Jue said to him with a smile. "Do you believe that ending?" Beside him, an Emperor Jue from the past said with a smile while using his magical powers, "If you believe it... Wouldn't it be a fallacy?" He tried his best to calm down the injury and keep his steps steady, so Su Yun couldn't see how serious his injury was. This way he can maintain his image as an undefeated emperor. There is such a person who started from a humble beginning when he was alive. He saved the human race from danger, punished the two emperors, suppressed the gods and demons, made the human race become the spiritual leader of all races, and opened the era of immortality. After his death, his spirit turned into the Evil Emperor, who tirelessly searched for the person who would inherit his will. His spirit turned into ashes without regrets; his body turned into Emperor Zhao, who was brave and courageous. He bowed his head to admit his mistakes in his previous life, and avenged the hatred of his previous life until everything was exhausted and his body was broken. His heart turned into the emperor's heart, with no distractions and concentrated on practice. He became a Taoist god and saved everyone. The Emperor is absolutely unique, truly unique, and unparalleled in elegance.
[Grand Finale] The world travels against the direction of the traveler, and all sounds sing for the clouds
Walking in the face of an abyss is like walking on thin ice. If you make one mistake, you will fall into the abyss, but all living beings are still moving forward. Yun said that he was pushed forward by the tide of the times. He did not want to be like this. He originally just wanted to be an ordinary person, with good health and a happy family, but life is so unreasonable. The gods and demons were in turmoil, and he was sold to Qu Bo. The fairy sword killed the demon dragon and blinded his eyes. But everything in the future started with the projection of the fairy sword in these blind eyes, even though he didn't want it. He went to the First Immortal Realm from the magical power of reincarnation, and Tie Kunlun handed over his head to Di Jue. The burden of inheritance of the human race began to find its direction, from Di Jue to Di Yun. Most of the time, only Yun is responsible for the pain and despair. Even the book monster who is closest to his master cannot share too much, but Yingying is always with him, making him less lonely. Yun wants to save all sentient beings, but it is not possible to rely on one person alone. The only person who can save all sentient beings is the sentient beings themselves, everyone. But he is pulling all living beings forward, just as the times are pushing him forward. In fact, Yun has no Taoist friends. The two emperors of Sui Hu, You, Di Feng, the second queen of Tianxian, and even his wife and beauty have their own ideas. Just as Wutong said, "In my heart, my tribe comes first, and my love for you ranks second." They are not men's vassals, they are dazzling pearls. Love clouds, but there is something else I love even more. Yun is lonely. He originally wanted to be an ordinary country boy. The Holy Emperor said that this is growth. Everything must come to an end. From the moment Hong Luo agreed to venture into the Sea of Chaos with him, Yun was relieved of all his responsibilities. From this moment on, he began to truly live up to his name, a free cloud. The sky above the river is rolling and relaxing. Life is like a journey against the odds, all living beings are travelers, the heaven and the earth are traveling against the odds, and all sounds are singing for the clouds.
Finished Thank you for the time this book has spent with me
Mu Jian Jiangnan, Yue Zhang Dao Realm, wandering in chaos, as for Ye Laomo is still on the way to Lun Dao, hahahaha, from the time Emperor Zun chased Brother Pig in junior high to now, it feels really great to see a linkage.
A little insight into the avenues and realms
1. Doesn't xx Xiantian refer to xx Avenue? In various related posts, there are always voices saying that xx Xiantian is not xx Dao. Is this true? The answer is not so This is the original text. In fact, xx Xiantian is a way of saying the realm of Dao in Emperor Zun. Just like the xx heavens in Linyuan, the person who cultivates his own Dao into Xiantian is Dao Zun 2. Does the realm determine combat power? No, cultivation determines it. The cultivation level in Zhu's novels is not the same as the realm of the avenue. For example, Wuji, even if he is 100 times stronger and almost invincible, it will not be the end of the avenue, but someone as weak as You can be the end of the avenue 3. The Hongmeng Chaos in Emperor Zun is different from the Hongmeng Chaos in other books. Other roads are correct, but their roads are wrong? The Four Heavenly Lords can kill Jiangnan if they join forces to kill two dead ones. The Four Heavenly Lords are similar in strength. If two of them have the wrong path and are defective products of Chaos Hongmeng, doesn't this mean that if the complete Chaos Hongmeng joins forces, they can kill him? Too cheap. There is another question The leader can create a great avenue that is comparable to the Primordial Chaos. His understanding of the Primordial Chaos cannot be wrong. Even if it is a complete Chaos Primordial, how can only two people kill him? So I think the Chaos Hongmeng here is not wrong, otherwise the leader's strength will directly fall into scum, and the Yuanshi Avenue will be nothing more than that. It is possible for four people to join forces and suppress it with complete cultivation (after all, in Zhu's novels, the understanding of the avenue and the cultivation are not the same, unless it reaches a certain state, such as the true Yuanshi) 4. The end of the avenue is to verify that one's own avenue can reach the end of the avenue? The answer is no, but to verify whether your own path can be achieved before advancing To put it bluntly, you are engaged in scientific research. You must first verify whether the theory is feasible, and then make real objects according to the theory. It is definitely not achieved just because you think you have achieved it (someone indeed said this), spiritual victory method