On the Road

I have been a fan for almost 10 years. It has become an important habit in my life to follow Mr. Zhaizhu's works every day. I would like to thank Mr. Zhaizhu for his hard writing over the years. The past few books are like real-life stories of the author going to a different world. The plots are fascinating and the characters can be vividly portrayed. Even the "villains" can't help but be praised as heroes. Now it is just talk on paper, lacking the rapid changes and undercurrents of the real situation. So far, we have only talked about the layout and methods of Chen Shi's side, but what about the Twelve Aristocratic Family and Despair Slope? Is there only a joint counterattack on the day of registration? Is there only one heavenly weapon from Despair Slope? It may seem like the strongest method, but this is also a clear sign... Of course, this is also my perspective as a god, and like online writing, being able to maintain the overall rhythm and story direction is actually very rare and cannot be forced. It may also be that the author has not changed and I am more mature. Author, where is your different world system? You can't carry a camera and go to another world to take real photos. I hope Teacher Zhaizhu can polish the storyline a little more. Or I hope that one day, after Teacher Zhaizhu gives up writing new stories, he can reconstruct these stories and they will surely be passed down to future generations.

Brother, don't write it like a cool article. There are either good guys or pure bad guys like Kukusha. There are so many bad guys. Please design the plot.

Known: (1) There is a gap between the sky and the earth where Xinzhou is located, the "true god" blocks the real starry sky, and there is still endless evil energy between the sky and the earth. (2) Anyone who practices according to the old system to the state of "integration" will be invaded by evil spirits and affect their thinking. And the higher the level of cultivation thereafter, the more evil energy invades, and the easier it is to be affected, until the Hedao is completely out of control when it ascends, and disaster-level evil changes break out. (3) The True King returned from Despair Slope and quickly abolished the old cultivation system and spread the new system. People who practice the new system will not be affected by evil spirits when they enter the "Fusion" realm, and they will not become evil even if they practice to the "Mahayana" realm. The only drawback is the shortened lifespan. (4)) People who step into the realm of "divine descent" for the first time will briefly regard the true god as the soul. When the protagonist descends, he reveals two pieces of news: ① The true god has no physical body. ②The true God is not a living creature, but seems to be dead. (5) When the ancestor of the Thirteenth Family appeared in the void, he had the same flesh and blood tentacles connecting heaven and earth as Jinghong. (6) There is more than one person practicing the shelling technique in the Taoist sect, and there are also several previous ancestors. Speculation: (1) Although practicing the new system can solve the problem of evil, it seems that no one can anymore practice to the state of "hedao ascension". The highest realm that can be reached on the Xinzhou Continent seems to be the only "Mahayana" at present. (2) "Evil energy" has a certain degree of life, and its goal seems to be to infect, devour and destroy all non-evil life. When the protagonist found out the evil spirit infected on his body, the evil bugs were burned and screamed. (3) The biggest difference between the old and new systems is that those who practice the new system have a divine fetus given by the "true god". Therefore, the divine fetus is what determines whether a person becomes evil or not. (4) But just like energy will not disappear out of thin air, evil spirits will not disappear out of thin air either. Therefore, for those who practice the new system, it is not that they will not be invaded by evil spirits, but that the divine fetuses given by the "true God" bear the evil transformation for them. (5) People with a divine fetus will not turn evil, but after all, the divine fetus comes from the true god, and these transferred evil spirits will still affect it to a greater or lesser extent. This is also the reason why the "true god" raises its eyes at night to turn dead objects evil, and it is also the reason why it gets dark earlier and earlier. Because "True God" can't hold on any longer. This also rectifies the name of the "True God". The True God is temporarily placed in the "decent" camp. In the past, it was speculated that the True God was grazing, but now it seems that he has misunderstood it. (6) Not being a living creature also means that the "true god" may be the product of mass production of artifacts of creation, and there may be more than one. The big eyeball that sprays mist every other month in the underworld can be used as a testimony. (7) Among the people who have practiced the shelling technique before the Taoist sect, some people have successfully "integrated" with this evil world. Although they are not seriously ascending, they can be regarded as evil immortals to a certain extent, and their life spans have been extended. (8) The technique created by Shaohuo Taoist and Tianzhen Taoist can prevent himself from evil transformation. When he was about to join the Tao, he was attacked by someone. There is a high probability that an evil immortal was controlled by the "evil will" and came to do it. Because the "evil will" does not allow those who agree with it to have free will. The innocent Taoist must die. (9) If the ancestors of the 13 aristocratic families had not practiced the new system, they would have been 13 calamity-level evil spirits. It was just that the power of sacrifices and incense from the 13th family for so many years temporarily suppressed their evil thoughts. Later, when the protagonist comes to reckon with the situation, if the sacrificer dies to a certain extent, the incense will no longer be suppressed and will inevitably explode. (10) The innocent Taoist technique is not complete enough, and the protagonist will inevitably continue to upgrade this technique in the later stage. —— This is just my personal understanding. If you don't like it, please don't criticize it. All book friends are welcome to discuss it. The following are realm maps made by other book friends

Compared to the early stage, it is in the sky and under the ground. It even collapsed when I got to the Great Heavenly Lord. In order to see what kind of plot the grandpa who was well portrayed in the early stage would have in the fairy world, the more I followed it, the more disgusting it became. I will not follow it again in the future.

Writing a book is not easy, so for many years, I started to pursue it, and I also supported it with physical books. It's just that what the plot is like now, whether it's fairy tale or fantasy, the writing is magical enough. If you have made enough money, then close the book early. The royalties from the past few books should be enough to leave some dignity for yourself; if you have not made enough yet, then sort out the plot logic and details. It is like playing house. Another suggestion is that in the current situation, I feel that the author's efforts and energy are not enough. If you want to continue writing books in the future, it is better to try to finish the book first, which is equivalent to completing the first draft, and then slowly refine it. When you are satisfied, release it for serialization bit by bit. The previous series was suitable for those who had to support their families when they were young, and were looking forward to writing more and earning more every day. There is no shortage of money now, so we should pursue excellence. Be responsible for your own reputation and your readers. Now it's like chasing a duck to get it on the shelves, isn't there any pressure on the author?

Starting from The Legend of the Shepherd, Chasing Home Pigs, the writing has really gotten better and better, the writing style has become more and more streamlined, and the imagination is still very big. Although there are similar plots, the performances are all very good. A few days ago, I heard a kid in the second grade of junior high school talking about the three elixirs of Ba Ti, which shows its influence. I have also recommended Zhaizhu to foreigners. If the story of the pig can be translated and spread overseas, it will be a great cultural export!

My name is Chen Shi. Because I am very honest, people in the village call me "Little Honesty". My husband was a scholar who was hanged. He read a lot of poems and books during his lifetime, so I often asked him about the meaning of "Wanyu". My little notebook is filled with my husband's annotations on Confucius's "The Whispering Words": Confucius said: When a person is about to die, his words are also good. Comment: No matter how vicious a person is, he can still speak well after being beaten until he is almost dead. Teacher's teaching: So if you meet someone who doesn't speak well, just beat him to death. Confucius said: Do not do to others what you do not want others to do to you. Comment: Master will not leave things to others if he does not want them. Teacher's teaching: This tells us to be like the Master and put an end to inexplicable kindness. Others' inexplicable kindness must have other intentions for you! Confucius said: If a gentleman is not serious, he will not be powerful. Comment: A gentleman must act harshly when encountering problems, otherwise he will not be able to establish prestige. Mr. Teach: Only by being ruthless and having a black heart can you establish your authority! Confucius said: The one who first made the figurines has no descendants. Comment: When dealing with the chief culprit, we must eradicate it without leaving any descendants! Teacher's teaching: If you let your descendants run away, they will come to you for revenge when they grow up, or say something strange like thirty years to Hexi. Confucius said: Once it comes, let it be at peace. Comment: Now that I'm here, let's bury him here. Teacher's teaching: Friends who often kill people know that it is easy to kill people and it is difficult to throw away the body, so you must do a good job in the follow-up work of the murder, and pay attention to "burying him in peace". When he is buried, you will feel at ease! I finally finished memorizing what I learned today, but my husband also said that we need to unite knowledge and action... I understand, I'm going to practice it now! {"TopicId":"995701360950116352","TopicName":"Amway Famous Scene"}{"TopicId":"1019756184305926144","TopicName":"On the Avenue"}

If you are not in a hurry to go to the fairyland, it would be much better to portray Tianzun in a more plump form. Starting from the journey of treasure hunting on the willow leaves, it is simply a vast ocean, and the preparation is not done well. It would be ugly to rush to open a new map and forcefully continue the mink tail eating scene...

Known (1) Despair Po takes action. The man who transplanted the protagonist's divine fetus has reached the Mahayana realm and killed Jinghong with one move. A total of 6 Mahayana in the previous sect have not defeated Jinghong and were infected... (2) The disaster level in Chen Shi regards Xiao Shi as the leader and recognizes Qingyang's parents. (3) The portal of Hongshan Hall does not take effect for some reason. (Too far away? Or is it isolated by the realm of demonic transformations?) Speculations: (1) Despair Slope belongs to the decent forces. At least the original intention of creating this organization is not bad, which can be seen from solving the disaster-level demonic transformations. At least for now, they are not in the same group as the "evil". The enemy of my enemy is my friend. Some people say that being decent still steals the divine fetus? They must want to play the big game just like the 13th family. The crime of possessing a treasure in online articles has become commonplace. Of course, they have to find a way to get such a powerful plug-in into their hands. However, this approach can also prove that Despair Slope has actually slightly deviated from its original intention and begun to decay. (2) The protagonist recognizes the demon in the sea and has a great background. He recognizes Qingyang's parents and is suspected to be from the ancestral land of China. (3) The person who transplanted the divine fetus is so powerful that he can be said to be the undisputed number one among the characters who have appeared so far among the true gods outside the world. This person may not necessarily die in the later stage, because he is not a small role in the early stage. If it is more dramatic, he will definitely not have the decision-making power on the transplantation of the divine fetus, so in order to eliminate his guilt for the child's champion, he will probably do a lot of good things to make up for it. He may even be arranged to die in order to save or protect the protagonist. ………… I have to say that Zhu Tianzun's fragmentary skills have become even more profound!

My name is Black Pot. I am not a human being, but a big black dog as black as ink. I was picked up from the wild by a talisman master named Chen Yindu, who raised me with leftovers from his family. I have amazing insights, understanding of human nature, intelligence and kindness, and a kind heart. There is also a young master in the family, the grandson of Chen Yindu, whose name is Chen Shi. He is honest and loves to speak the truth. As for why I am called a black pot? As the name suggests, when the father and son do something wrong, they often ask me to take the blame. I don't know when my grandpa started to become weird. He gave up his meals and often ate candles. Even the chickens and ducks in the village disappeared for no reason. Some people suspected that it was me. And the way grandpa looked at me and Xiaoshi always had a creepy look in his eyes. Xiao Shi also changed after taking people to visit the mysterious kiln in the mountains. He became more and more enthusiastic about practicing and going out, and the number of illnesses also increased. Every time I thoughtfully add firewood to the medicine jar where he cooks. He often babbles in bed at night, and I can't hear him clearly, but his change - although he is still naughty, he cares more about the villagers - makes me very happy. I am just a dog, a black dog living in the Talisman Master's home. Although they use my blood and flesh to draw talismans to make medicine, they will also give me a piece of meat as compensation. However, this small gain is also coveted. In this family, I have no one to rely on, only the open-minded road is my pillar. Here, I always thought they would understand my words, but I didn't expect that they were just misinterpreting my meaning to convey their own ideas. I'm not a real person, but they are real dogs, and dogs have a hard time! Although I am only a dog, I can travel between Yin and Yang. On the road to hell, I was like a demon from the underworld, with a ferocious face, eyes like torches, smoke blowing from my nostrils, and my feet treading the earth. Because of this, I saved Little Honesty. Although I am just a dog, I am also a loyal companion on the road of honest life. I understand human nature, I am smart, loyal, brave, and protective of my master. I am the most powerful among dogs. It is said that in the distant sky, there is a world called the Three Realms, in which a black dog took the lead in becoming the Supreme. I don't know when I will be able to reach that state... ... {"TopicId":"995701360950116352","TopicName":"Ambien Famous Scene"} {"TopicId":"1019756184305926144","TopicName":"On the Avenue"}

{"TopicId":"995701360950116352","TopicName":"Amway Famous Scene"} ————Is sister good-looking? Do you want to sleep with me? My name is Chen Shi, and I was flirted with. The thing is like this, after I took my revenge that night, I was besieged by floating heads and various evil spirits. Fortunately, I met Xiao Wangsun.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         <br He asked if I could protect me by going with him, so of course I would, not to mention the danger outside, and I would definitely learn a lot by being around him. So we arrived at Wuwang City. This place is very honest. No matter whether it is people, ghosts or monsters, they cannot lie, otherwise their tongues will be pulled out. This place is obviously very suitable for me. I like it here very much. After drinking a few sips of tea in the teahouse, I saw Xiao Wangsun and others coming. On a rainy night, the cold iron is a woman wearing a red dress and a black hat. Her appearance is very cool. But when she took off her hood, I realized that I was wrong. She was not cool at all. Instead, she was very... How should I put it, just... Tsk, anyway, you know that feeling. She didn't say anything after taking off her hood, she was very quiet. I found that she had a good figure and her eyes were full of temptation, so I couldn't help but take a few more glances. However, she noticed it. She smiled very nicely and asked my sister if she was pretty. Do you want to sleep with her? Forgive me for not holding back, my first reaction was that my blood surged up, and my blood flowed along the place where I experimented in the ruined temple that night. It felt numb, as if I was about to explode. I experienced a lot at that moment, including the joy that I could finally become an adult, the relief that I had finally grown up, the expectation that I might find a wife, and a hint of nervousness about the unknown. But after all, it was my first time encountering this situation, so I subconsciously declined. Fortunately, Xiao Wangsun reminded him in time! It's okay, okay! Do you know that I almost lost my life? I almost had my tongue pulled out when I realized it! She must have done it on purpose! mad! What a golden red tassel! This man is so dangerous! Just like that, I woke up instantly, and my energy and blood returned to calm and stopped surging. At that moment, I grew up a lot and vowed to be careful when I meet someone who is flirtatious in the future!

{"TopicId":"1019756184305926144","TopicName":"Above the Avenue"} {"TopicId":"995701360950116352","TopicName":"Amway Famous Scene"} My name is Chen Shi, and I am a left-behind child. Since I can remember, my father Chen Tang has been making a living in the provincial capital and rarely comes back, leaving me and my grandfather to depend on each other. When I was nine years old, I took the county examination and won the first place in fifty provinces, making me famous in the countryside. On the day when the news came, the neighbors and villagers in Huangpo Village came to congratulate each other with vegetables and chickens. Grandpa, wearing a black robe embroidered with large peonies, stood in front of the main room, receiving the crowd who came to congratulate him. I sat at the offering table and looked at the gifts placed in the corner, feeling very happy. There are chickens and ducks, rice and noodles, rich in variety, and generous portions. I am afraid it will be enough for my grandfather and me to eat for more than half a month. The folks greeted my grandpa politely, put away the gifts, and then came in to touch my head. While touching their heads, they sighed: "Xiao Shi is a god from heaven who has come down to earth", "Xiao Shi has been smart since he was a child, not like the jerk in my family", "Old Chentou is blessed, he will have no worries in the rest of his life..." I felt a little embarrassed listening to the praises of the elders. But when I think about it, I feel that these compliments are worthy of the name, and even far from enough. I am the number one genius in the fifty provinces, a golden phoenix flying out of the henhouse, and I can afford any kind of praise. But it was inconvenient to show it directly, otherwise the villagers would think that I was too arrogant, so I had no choice but to grin at the elders who were congratulating me. "Woof woof woof." I looked for the name and found out that it was a big black dog raised by my family. Grandpa called it Black Pot. It was lying at Grandpa's feet, looking at me with disdain, as if it had seen through my little thoughts and expressed disdain. I glared at the black pot and said angrily: "What are you calling the dog?" Then I added: "Stupid bad dog! How dare you disrespect the little master! It's really upsetting. You have no share of the bones sent by Aunt Wang!" The black pot got angry, roared, and barked non-stop. I feel so proud, little brat, can't I cure you? After taking a closer look, I realized that it was not me who was yelling, but the person in front of the door. This man was wearing the same black robe as his grandfather, but instead of peonies, his robe was embroidered with a strange bright red flower. The man in black robe bowed to his grandfather and said: "Buffalo County, Li Xuanxing. I am here to congratulate the proud son of the Chen family." Grandpa stared at Li Xuanxing, and he felt the familiarity with him. Li Xuanxing nodded, walked in, put down the gift, and walked in front of me. Facing this strange man in black robe, I felt a little uneasy, so I turned to look at Grandpa. Grandpa was staring at me closely, and the black pot was also grinning, as if he was ready to bite. I felt relieved, gathered my mood, and said, "Thank you, uncle." Li Xuanxing nodded and reached out to touch my head. Unlike others who touched the top of my head, Li Xuanxing touched the back of my head and held it for a long time. I felt a warmth spread from his palm to my head, and I couldn't help but shudder. Li Xuanxing took back his hand, said to himself that he was indeed a genius, and turned to leave. Grandpa looked at Li Xuanxing's retreating figure and kicked the blame. The black pot understood immediately, wagging its tail, carrying the gift from Li Xuanxing to the kitchen, throwing it into the fire pit and burning it.

1. In the early stage, Tianzun was made too powerful, overwhelming people, and then he was killed so easily by the protagonist, and his combat power suddenly collapsed. There is also the upper realm, which overwhelmed the protagonist for three generations. There were so many gods, and then they were destroyed by an immortal from Despair Slope. 2. The setting of the Tao Realm is a big bug, and there are also the thirty-third heavens of the Tao Realm. No one can remember them, they only know the Heavenly Immortal, the True Immortal, the Golden Immortal, and the Great Luo. Now the protagonist reaches the Golden Immortal in one go, but the Daluo is divided into five levels. In the later stage, Daluo will definitely be as numerous as dogs. And if Hou Tu can really enter and leave the Immortal Realm at will, then the Immortal Emperor and the Immortals in Immortal Court will have no way to hide, at least the middle level cannot hide them. 3. The update is so slow that I can't remember some of the previous character plots. 4. The protagonist has lost his reckless heroic spirit after his ascension. The character creation is not as good as that of The Shepherd God, and his efforts to make ends meet and ride on multiple boats is not as good as that of Su Yun.

The "Golden Cicada Escapes Its Shell and Immortal Picture" practiced by Jinghong, people who practice this technique will be resurrected after being killed. He said that being closer to an immortal means he is stronger? Normal shedding should not greatly improve the strength, But if you are killed by others and your strength is greatly improved after resurrecting on the same spot... You said that Creation Xiaowu was killed and his strength increased exponentially after being resurrected. Is it somehow related to the "Golden Cicada Escapes Its Shell"? …………………… ! !

Come on @ Pig

The world view of this book is very uncomfortable. No one is human! Crazy world. Apart from the protagonist group, where else are the others still human?

All conspiracies are just water. If they are watery, they will only make people look at the flowers in the fog. You can make it clear in just one or two sentences, don't be secretive. No matter how mysterious the water is, it is mysterious again. If you don't get rid of the devil while you are alive, you will wait for the devil to change after you die. Wow, a hundred chapters are all water.

Still, 🐷's book is good-looking, fine chaff, there is no harm without comparison. I have been reading on QQ before, and I just came to Qidian recently. Whether it is the beginning or the beginning without a map, the plot twists and character descriptions are all very good, much better than that guy who fishes for corpses! I didn't comment on that one because it wasn't good. They said it was the golden chapter. I just wanted to see why it was so popular. Haha, I really couldn't read it. 😤 If you say it's good, you've never seen a good one. The same type of folk anecdotal records are much better than this one! It's baffling

In fact, if you can guarantee two chapters a day, it is no problem to spend one chapter describing other characters, or write more language descriptions. Not only is it not watery, but it can also make the characters more vivid. But pig🐷Now sometimes we can't guarantee even one chapter a day. Book lovers feel that if they wait for a day and just write some trivial things and throw away the settings, they will inevitably feel watery. In fact, in the final analysis, it is still a question of the amount of updates.

Why withdraw the manuscript? 🙂 Am I short of 5 points? 🤭

Guangchengzi, the leader of the Twelve Golden Immortals, and the others besieged Houtu. They only said that they were all Daluo, but did not mention how many heavens they had. Then they were killed by Houtu indiscriminately. Now that Gou Chen is in the second level of Daluo, his master Yun Zhongzi is only one of the twelve golden immortals. Now that he is in the sixth level of Daluo, he appears to be particularly powerful. So which one is more powerful compared to the Four Kings? It was also written earlier that the Antarctic Immortal Emperor was killed by the great Luo who practiced calamity. I don't know how high that Da Luo was. Nowadays, who is good and who is not is all decided by the author. Even the realm of the protagonist is introduced in one stroke. He absorbs the big demon, jumps to the Golden Immortal in one go, and absorbs some more to become a big man. I am really convinced.

One chapter a day for the top 20, three chapters a day for the top ten, you choose

What does Zhai Zhu want to do

Is it going to end? I won't even say it anymore. If you want to, you can update it. If you don't want to update it, don't you?

Is there any hope for four stars?

A person stands taller than a person.

After reading for a few days, I suddenly thought of a bug setting. People practice Tianxin ZQ to obtain the temple and then take the examination to become a scholar. If they get the temple, it's not like the scholars who have passed the examination will have divine fetuses. Some of them have not yet taken the examination. How can you take the examination as a scholar if you are ordinary people? Then I read for a long time and realized that there were no mortals. The main character was accompanied by evil spirits and cultivators wherever he went, and then he was beaten. I can only say that after reading the first dozens of free chapters, I felt that I had changed from a supernatural cultivator to a traditional cultivator. Then some of the characters' emotions were not expressed well. One second, I was chatting well, and then I started crying. When I was reading, the pictures in my mind simply couldn't connect. What made me most embarrassed was that I couldn't read anymore when I looked at the table of contents. Personalize and play freely. Although this technique is not exclusive to Perfect World and is not allowed to be used, it feels like plagiarism. You are not a small author, but you still copy other people's technique names. I think this sounds ridiculous when I read it. You can kill wherever you go. The setting of the book is to test the talents of scholars, but it is not easy to take the exam. It took me a long time to find out why there are so many talented people for the protagonist to kill. It's so unexpected. I write and kill for the sake of the protagonist. Hahaha, I can't read anymore.

Understand?

Updates are becoming more and more irregular, hey

I ordered 160 chapters, but I ended up being a eunuch.