Naruto: Infinite Clones

In this book by the author, the plot progress is obviously too fast, especially the protagonist's doppelgänger appears too quickly. It should be noted that too much is not enough. The more clones the protagonist has, the more difficult it is to control the plot, and the easier it is to fail! So it is recommended that the author adopt the elite mode, control the number of clones, and deepen the full and deceptive plot. It is recommended not to make excessive changes to the main plot of Naruto. Just make appropriate magical changes. This way the writing difficulty will be lower and the reader acceptance will be higher. After all, most of the people who read Naruto fan fiction are readers who like Naruto! It is recommended to sort out the confusing plot settings and focus on human completion of the plan. By the way, some low-popular clones should be killed in a reasonable battle, such as Brother A who does not exist and is incompatible with the ninja world. The man in the pillar should just act out the Dior plot honestly! The same goes for the demons. There is no need to have too many people. Just a few clan members are enough. Who said that there must be as many demons as there are humans? A few people can also form an independent clan There is no need for Shichibukai to add clones, just recruit natives to fill in, such as Shark Face, Zabuza, Haku, Kimimaro and so on. Forget about that nameless Konoha ninja! There is no need for unknown people to waste too much pen and ink, the price/performance ratio is too low.

Let me clarify a fact. Eight-door Dunjia was created by Matt Dai. In the animation, Matt Dai once said in the memory: It took me 20 years to master this only skill. In fact, it is just a matter of translation. Mastering Japanese also means development. The Second Hokage, who once broke the internet, used the Eight Gate Dungeon in the final battle. It was actually nonsense. I went to see it and found that there was no such thing. Later, after watching Metkai's The Seventh Gate, Banye once said: "Isn't it red steam? I'm really underestimated." I thought that Banye had watched Eight Gates Dunjia a long time ago. Later I thought about it, something was wrong. I remembered that Ben survived for a long time and saved Obito Uchiha, who was in the same issue as Metkai. (I think almost 75 to 80 years old, except for a certain old immortal, yes Tsuchikage, I'm talking about you, in the war-prone world of Naruto, there are very few old people). Then you shouldn't miss the big news like Matt wearing a ninja sword and kicking seven people into a three-man army. For this kind of thing, just ask White Zetsu, who has accounts all over the Ninja world. If not, you can ask Black Zetsu who sneaked into all the major Ninja villages and stole secret documents. Isn't that the end of the matter? (Don't tell me that the five great ninja villages still don't know how to search when faced with such a big thing.)  And if you have beaten it, you will not be as reckless as you are in the later stage. (Ye Kai's space distortion will only appear when he is about to hit someone, so you can still avoid it if you hide before you are about to hit someone. Please see the animation for details. Madara's Taoist Jade only starts to twist when he is about to be hit.)  Another point is that I personally think it is quite important evidence, that is, Matt Kai's kick almost dragged me to the finale, but Matt Kai kicked me down, and three of the seven Ninja Swordsmen had to run away. This is obviously a hidden injury left when creating Ninjutsu. The most important thing is that the father and son, Metday and Metkay, are just civilian ninjas. If the secret technique is passed down from family, then they are not called civilians but called a declining family. Others say, just think of it, Matt Dai is just a commoner who wants to develop the Eight Gate Dungeon, which involves many meridians and acupuncture techniques. He is not Orochimaru and Tsunade, where did he get the theoretical knowledge? I laughed when I saw this. Even the plot of father and son having learned the Eight Gate Dunjia is even more nonsense. The author is not qualified to read some theoretical knowledge, but he is qualified to learn directly! Don't you think about it, our country's "One Hundred Thousand Whys" even contains basic information about nuclear bombs, but the specific information, raw materials and mathematical equations are state-level secrets. Why do you think that learning materials are more confidential than specific equations? Compared with direct learning, it is more reasonable to integrate data to create. [This is equivalent to being qualified to get specific mathematical equations, models, and raw materials (directly learning Eight Gate Dungeon), but not qualified to understand a little bit of basic research concepts (Basics of Eight Gate Dungeon Meridians), which is nonsense] Don't tell me anything, Namikaze Minato is also a commoner, he has also learned the art of Flying Thunder God. First of all, you need to confirm the fact that before learning, he became a disciple of the Sannin Jiraiya, and he is not a waste like Matt Dai. Secondly, he is a super genius in the ninja school. Furthermore, the flying thunder god technique requires extremely high time and space talent, so he was given it. No way, no way, no one really thinks that Namikaze Minato, who became a disciple of the Sannin and learned the Flying Thunder God Technique, is a commoner. The concept is completely different. However, what is Matedai? "Ten thousand years old genin, the least talented ninja in Konoha." These are the evaluations of Matt Dai by the ninjas in Konoha. Tell me what qualifications he has to learn the Eight Gate Dunjia. Even if the second generation is developed and handed over to Matt Dai for perfection, this is impossible, because it is impossible for him to not even say a word to the third generation. If someone speaks to the third generation or the second generation, Matt Dai will not be insulted so seriously in Konoha. Besides, the Hyuga family's blockade of knowledge about the Meridian Dantian is not as serious as others think, because the Meridian Dantian needs to cooperate with the Byakugan to perform ninjutsu such as Soft Fist and Kaiten, and using chakra to stimulate acupuncture points such a violent ninjutsu is obviously a bit wrong with other people's style. Even if there is a reason why the Hyuga family did not use it. So to sum up, they have a damn chance to come into contact with forbidden arts such as Eight Gate Dunjia.

In Naruto, the ninjas are basically all squishy and not much stronger than ordinary people. Even ordinary people can probably kill Jonin or even Kage level. If the demonic energy is given to the ninja, he will be at least quasi-Kage level.

I have always found that there is a big BUG, ​​and the author probably never reacted to it, that is, the protagonist's organization has existed for such a long time, and it seems to be older than Kaguya. So I will not say that the Shichibukai organization knew the reaction of Black Zetsu after knowing this, but that you have existed for such a long time, even longer than Kaguya's era, and you don't have your own power system? Still want to use chakra? Although the methods of use are different, they are classified as secret techniques and blood inheritance limits. Based on this comparison, how did your organization defeat the Holy Lord in the past? Feeling too low

A few suggestions for the author: First, the map of the ninja world is too small, only enough for Uchiha Madara to toss around. If I want to write the ones in the introduction, it is best to use some clones to open the map, such as summoning the world/power traveling through the world, etc. The theatrical version seems to have the other side of the sea. Second, the card can be from Naruto, add a parallel world or a setting from the past. It will definitely be interesting to meet the same characters. A female card is a must. The author does not write a female card because he is afraid that the protagonist is a male and readers will not accept it. Anyway, the protagonist is just a tool, and most of the drama is played by the clone. Third, the protagonist will definitely have the time ability to go to the past, and all the things the protagonist made up can become true.

I gave up... It was obviously well written before... But the emergence of the eight evil spirits started to be nondescript, and the next seven kinds of evil spirits were scattered, and the protagonist still had to look for it... Before I could find it, a JoJo popped up, which was completely made up. At least there was a drawing card in the front, and now the characters all appear directly, so why are you designing the system in the front?

In fact, in my eyes, there has always been a very nonsense thing, which is why the protagonist has so many systems (a lot of chakra, reiatsu, and demonic energy.) How does he keep his body from being chaotic. Moreover, when I was watching the American comic Infinite Possession, I always wanted to complain crazily that when the Holy Lord appeared, the author actually ranked the Tiger Charm at B level, and also ranked the Rat Charm at A level. Please, have you not watched the episode of Tiger Talisman? The holy initiative without Tiger Talisman dare not move, because you are really a vegetarian of the ancient wizard, and there are many countermeasures to ensure that you will be extremely happy. The Tiger Talisman is the ultimate guarantee for the Holy Lord to become the number one among the eight demons. Because he has to integrate 12 abilities, plus his own demonic energy of fire and even his own demonic body, his body would have exploded long ago without the tiger talisman (the ancient wizards did not use this trick because the demon could not be killed, at most) Even if the body is gone, the soul will still exist. In addition, the setting of "The Adventures of Jackie Chan" is that yin and yang coexist, and if the Holy Lord is not strong, all other ghosts will become stronger. That's why he was turned into a stone statue to forcefully achieve the coexistence of yin and yang.

It's a mess. Actually, in the clone flow, he wants to pick up corpses and let the character possess him. Then he doesn't say whether the clone has self-awareness. In the front, the protagonist's consciousness is required to control the clone, but later there is no explanation. Is it self-awareness or the protagonist's intelligence? The draw was too fast. In the early stage, the Eight Demonic Qi didn't improve and they just messed around. The writing is too messy and a waste of time

In fact, the Holy Lord was originally one of the twelve holy beasts that guarded the world in ancient times. They guarded the order of the world and fought against the seven evil demons. But one day, the Dragon Holy Beast listened to the devil's bewitchment, attacked the Tiger Holy Beast, and obtained the power of yin and yang that can combine all powers. , The dragon is intoxicated with the feeling of having power. He gradually stripped away the power of the other holy beasts and integrated them into himself. Under the bewitchment of the devil. He degenerated into a devil who did all kinds of evil. He accepted the demonic energy of fire and became the eighth demon. (Do you know why the Holy Lord is obviously the strongest one, but is looked down upon by other demons?) But the laws of the world, good and evil coexist, and there will not be only evil in the world. A new justice will come. The Eight Immortals came to the world and used their supreme magic to seal the demons in another world forever, from which they could never escape. . In the same way, yin and yang coexist in the world, and good and evil stand side by side. When the old evil disappears, new evil will come. The shadow generals representing darkness came to the world from the kingdom of shadow. But the laws of the world will not change. The yin pole produces yang. The power of evil must have a counter-balance. Among humans, seven warriors with the power of justice were born. They used their lives to defeat the shadow generals, and asked their followers to hide the shadow generals' masks around the world to prevent them from meeting again. . However, the laws of the world will never allow evil to disappear completely, because the Holy Lord is not a complete demon, and the seals of the eight immortals suppress the Holy Lord much less. He escaped from the seal. Once again, he came to someone else's house, and he wanted to enjoy the time that only belonged to him. During this period, he discovered a mask that could summon shadow soldiers. He used magic to steal the power of the mask. A long time has passed and the laws of the world have remained the same, and evil will not be allowed to exist alone. The Archmage, who inherited the power of justice, found a way to fight against the Holy Lord. He defeated the Holy Lord and turned all the other powers deprived by the Holy Lord into spells, taking away the Holy Lord's body, just like he had taken away the power of other holy beasts. The Holy Lord turned into a stone statue. Buried underground forever by the Archmage... The twelve talismans, each representing a power of the twelve holy beasts, are very powerful and not as fragile as shown in the animation. (The power of a spell is like a big hill, and the user is like a cup taking water. How much it can take depends entirely on the user's temperament). In ancient times, there was no coexistence between good and evil. The righteous side relied on these powers to fight against the seven demons at their peak. Like the eight great demons, each possesses the same power as its own. Chicken Spell: Telekinesis (referring to the movie, super power is out of control) is not just about floating. Monkey Talisman: Seventy-two changes, which can change all living things in the world. Ever-changing, nothing is impossible (can be developed, depends on the user) Ox Talisman: Move mountains and seas, infinite power. (Can split a mountain easily) Tiger Talisman: The most important of the twelve talismans. The fusion of different forces in one place is inherently dangerous. Too much power merged into one body. They are mutually exclusive and can cause harm to the body. (Xiaoyu doesn't count. He might be the reincarnation of some great god!). With him, yin and yang can be integrated into everything. (The splitting into two people in the animation is just a side effect) (The protagonist will gain more and more miscellaneous powers in the future, and will need to balance the Tiger Talisman.) Rabbit Talisman: Super speed, not just running faster, but all-round speed, vision, reaction, and body functions. (Refer to The Flash, or Quicksilver) Dragon Talisman: Has the power of explosion. It should be a fire shock wave with extremely strong attack power. (This is originally the power of the Holy Lord) Snake Talisman: Completely invisible, you can even make the objects and creatures you touch invisible (not just invisible, it should be completely transparent! Even the shadow is gone) Horse Talisman: Remove all substances that are not beneficial to you. He is truly invulnerable to all poisons and fearless of all curses (with him, the protagonist will not take advantage of anyone's plot). Sheep Spell: The ability to target the soul, not only for yourself, but also for others. Can easily knock other people's souls out of the body (is it similar to the ability of the Samsara Eye? He is more powerful than the Samsara Eye) Dog Talisman: Immortality. (This is everyone's dream! With that talisman, you can really do it without fear of any harm, plus add the sheep talisman, even the soul, no one else can think of) Pig talisman: Cyclops (he can not only shoot straight! He can also shoot like a whip, break if it touches, and die if he touches it) . ) Rat Talisman: Turn stillness into motion, turn death into life (This spell is so powerful, the statue he resurrected has divinity. It is simply an artifact and a blessing for otakus. Think of those lifelike figures at home) The power of the spell is like a vat, which is very powerful. And the user is like a water cup. It can only be based on your own temperament. Use some power. (If too much power is used, it will be harmful. Especially when other miscellaneous powers exist together. This needs to be neutralized by the Tiger Talisman) This is why the strength of each person's spell is different! In fact, the same goes for the Black Shadow Mask. No one else can use their full strength. It seems that the evil dragons under the Holy Lord are derived from the Monkey Talisman and the Rat Talisman. The monkey shapes it, the rat gives it life. The protagonist can rely on these two to have many subordinates For example, in the Terminator world, grab a T1000 and become a superwoman. Then the rat charm gives life! Like👍 The eight demons don't just rely on their own attributes, right? They are the most powerful demon wizards among the many demons in ancient times. They have their own magic! (Remember the magic encyclopedia of the Holy Lord? Other demons should also have their own memos!) The eight demons were the strongest demon wizards in ancient times. They have magic. Not just by attributes! It's just that the long imprisonment made them forget too much (remember the holy master's encyclopedia of witchcraft? Other demons should have one!)

Obito is really not because of love. . Perhaps. Not entirely because of love! He executed Eye of the Moon, not for Lin. He understood - Kakashi didn't want to kill Lin, but he did it anyway; Lin didn't want to die, but she died anyway. At that moment, he realized the truth of the ninja world - kill those who don't want to kill, and die if they don't want to die. The ninja world that forces people to kill, forces people to die, forces people to cherish each other but kill each other is hell. Obito suddenly understood that the ninja world had no future at all. Everyone was forced to become an executioner, became a puppet, had their ideals wiped out, and died. It is true that Kakashi desperately wanted to save Lin, but he killed Lin with his own hands. Lin wanted to live, it was true, but she committed suicide for Konoha. They are forced to do things that are completely contrary to their thoughts and cannot resist. So Obito was desperate. He believes that people are fake like puppets and wants to create a new world. There, there is the real Kakashi and the real Lin. They are real and can express their true thoughts as they wish. They can live as long as they want, don't kill if they don't want to, and be their true selves. This is the truth. In the more than sixty years since Konoha was established as a village, it has experienced a total of 4 Ninja Wars, with an average of one world war every fifteen years... One Ninja War every fifteen years, what is the concept? After the Fourth World War, there seems to be peace, because it is Konoha who saves the world, and he is the boss with absolute transcendent strength. Just wait, when Naruto and the others die, the Fifth Ninja War will come. Isn't that what happened in the first Shinobi War? As soon as Hashirama died, the four major nations immediately rebelled. Did Hashirama treat them badly? They still rebelled. Koko. This ninja world is sick and there is no cure...