Horleybagton

The opening chapter is quite well written, and it arouses people's imagination. I look forward to the subsequent updates.

Very well written, keep up the good work. It has been collected. Please visit again and encourage each other. "Magic Programming"

Rich imagination, no nonsense: click on the button to see the introduction of that person, and you will be surprised.

You made the second chapter look like the first chapter. Currently, your first chapter seems too hardcore, full of introductory stuff and hard to read. Suggested opening form 1: dialogue + conflict + battle Suggested opening form 2: twists and turns of life experience + interesting behavior + brainy cheats Suggested opening form 3: description of a strong atmosphere environment (small things, such as: the fragrance of green grass, the dilapidation of low walls, the depression of streets on rainy nights). This requires a certain writing style. You can destroy this environment later, or let the protagonist protect this environment. Suggested opening format 4: directly jump into the topic, mostly systems, release tasks, and solve tasks. A sense of urgency is generally highlighted.